a poem on prida-untill i met you...

Posted: 13 years ago

hi guys....i wrote a poem on prida well this is the first time i have ever tried to write a poem😊....i myself am not a fan of poetry😛  these are some random thoughts...wasn't trying to really write up something😛.....my whole physics lecture was free😉 so decided to use up some of my brain.😆enough of my bak bak here is it enjoy.


Damini's POV

                                            UNTIL I MET YOU.......

                               I was all alone

                                      until i met you...

                               was strong and could stand alone

                                       until i met you...

                               I felt the need of no one by my side 

                                       until you came and stood by my side...


                              I felt i was strong enough

                                      until you came and became my weakness

                              I felt that i can walk on any path alone

                                      until my path betrayed me and lead me to you

                             

                              But after the day you came along

                              I was walking on the beach alone

                              I felt the need not to be alone

                              I felt the need to have someone by my side 

                              I felt i was not strong enough

                              To fight with the game of love

                              And then as i raised my eye

                              I saw you with your bright smile

                              As it stretched upon my face too

                              I realized all my needs vanish

                              When you took my hand into your's

                             and walked with me across the shore


                             I thought that love didn't exist

                                         until you became my reason to live

                             I was all alone

                                         until i met you......

P.S: okay guys so how was it?? do leave your precious comments....good bad anything you feel...plz do comment it will help me improve.

thanks

-Baz😃

Posted: 13 years ago

right

they ver supa strong untill met each other😃
well even after meetin, they ver strong enough to drive us crazy😆
but really sweet
verz ma Priz?
next part mein?
 
Posted: 13 years ago
lovely piece of writing i mus say buddy
loved it to the core
sum fresh prida 2011 stuff truely a treat
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by Komal_Chaudhary


Wow Superb!!!!!!!!

thanks so much😃

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by priz_da


right

they ver supa strong untill met each other😃
well even after meetin, they ver strong enough to drive us crazy😆...hehehe yeah....they did do that and were haven't still not recovered from the consequences😆 
but really sweet....thank you
verz ma Priz?..he is on vacation😆
next part mein?...humm....maybe😛
 

thanks for the comment😃

Posted: 13 years ago
nycc poem dear
really amazing & awesme👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by Gunseerat


lovely piece of writing i mus say buddy....thanks so much pal.....
loved it to the core...am glad you liked it

sum fresh prida 2011 stuff truely a treat....so sweet of you...thanks a ton for  those kind words..they mean alot😊

thanks for your rocking comment😃...i loved it

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by sofsunmannee


nycc poem dear...thanks so much...
really amazing & awesme....awww..thanks...am glad u liked it...⭐️....yay 4 stars

thanks for the comment😃

Posted: 13 years ago
wow very nice verse Baz

u included all the feelings of Damini ... simply superb

now waiting for Prithvi's POV
Posted: 13 years ago
Baz.. AWESOME girl.. its really very good👏 good going...👍🏼


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