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a poem on prida-untill i met you...

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:19am | IP Logged

hi guys....i wrote a poem on prida well this is the first time i have ever tried to write a poemSmile....i myself am not a fan of poetryTongue  these are some random thoughts...wasn't trying to really write up somethingTongue.....my whole physics lecture was freeWink so decided to use up some of my brain.LOLenough of my bak bak here is it enjoy.


Damini's POV

                                            UNTIL I MET YOU.......

                               I was all alone

                                      until i met you...

                               was strong and could stand alone

                                       until i met you...

                               I felt the need of no one by my side 

                                       until you came and stood by my side...


                              I felt i was strong enough

                                      until you came and became my weakness

                              I felt that i can walk on any path alone

                                      until my path betrayed me and lead me to you

                             

                              But after the day you came along

                              I was walking on the beach alone

                              I felt the need not to be alone

                              I felt the need to have someone by my side 

                              I felt i was not strong enough

                              To fight with the game of love

                              And then as i raised my eye

                              I saw you with your bright smile

                              As it stretched upon my face too

                              I realized all my needs vanish

                              When you took my hand into your's

                             and walked with me across the shore


                             I thought that love didn't exist

                                         until you became my reason to live

                             I was all alone

                                         until i met you......

P.S: okay guys so how was it?? do leave your precious comments....good bad anything you feel...plz do comment it will help me improve.

thanks

-BazBig smile

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:30am | IP Logged

right

they ver supa strong untill met each otherBig smile
well even after meetin, they ver strong enough to drive us crazyLOL
but really sweet
verz ma Priz?
next part mein?
 

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:44am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Komal_Chaudhary

Wow Superb!!!!!!!!

thanks so muchBig smile

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by priz_da

right

they ver supa strong untill met each otherBig smile
well even after meetin, they ver strong enough to drive us crazyLOL...hehehe yeah....they did do that and were haven't still not recovered from the consequencesLOL 
but really sweet....thank you
verz ma Priz?..he is on vacationLOL
next part mein?...humm....maybeTongue
 

thanks for the commentBig smile

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:49am | IP Logged
nycc poem dear
really amazing & awesmeClapClapClapStarStarStarStar

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gunseerat

lovely piece of writing i mus say buddy....thanks so much pal.....
loved it to the core...am glad you liked it

sum fresh prida 2011 stuff truely a treat....so sweet of you...thanks a ton for  those kind words..they mean alotSmile

thanks for your rocking commentBig smile...i loved it

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