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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

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hye priya,u are always welcome dear.And Thank u for such a sweet gift.

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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lalitha_92

thanks a lot cuty Clap
welcome dear

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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sidda8

Thanks for the in depth summary.
hye sidda
long time.

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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cuty16

Originally posted by GKDlover1

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
Rupam Kya bath hai? Aap ek achhi writer bhi ban sakthi hi?No aap ek achhi writer already

A very big applaude from meClap

Ab mujeh aisa lagtha hai hamare forum pe kuch aur chupa rustam hai.

Keep going darling. Wish u all the best for keeping the forum active by ur work

And one more thing dont take too much on ur fingers and back. take care of ursself as well and do it whenever u cud. We always looking forward to ur work .

Thanks Sowjanya,actualy from school time i was having keen intrest in painting so my class mates generaly calls me painter babu and my friends too says that i should opt painting as career.But it is the first sumone has tolled that i can become writer,u made me feel happy thanks once again.
Bye,take care
Hey Rupam darlingBig smile
Dont thank me dear.  Im always happy for u What ever u r doing.U know what u r. But its time for us as well to know about ur talents as well.
waise tho Hum ye painter babu ko bhi forum pe dhekna chahthe hai. If possible why dont u paint  our lovely Avita and post it on the forum.(just the scanned copy). No pressurre darling take ur time when its possible do it. As i can understand lot of work when u go to school. Now u started summary of GKD so far as well. Do take care of urself and do it when ever its possible . My best wishes always with u,  Rupam urf cuty urf the writer urf painter babu . God bless u.


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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by danno

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxx cuty after long time u post it
i love it
.ya i m bit late actualy i was quiet busy these days so i had just forgot about it,well thanks for luving it dear.

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Posted: 26 February 2011 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Cuty16

Originally posted by GKDlover1

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!

Rupam Kya bath hai? Aap ek achhi writer bhi ban sakthi hi?No aap ek achhi writer already


A very big applaude from meClap


Ab mujeh aisa lagtha hai hamare forum pe kuch aur chupa rustam hai.


Keep going darling. Wish u all the best for keeping the forum active by ur work


And one more thing dont take too much on ur fingers and back. take care of ursself as well and do it whenever u cud. We always looking forward to ur work .

Thanks Sowjanya,actualy from school time i was having keen intrest in painting so my class mates generaly calls me painter babu and my friends too says that i should opt painting as career.But it is the first sumone has tolled that i can become writer,u made me feel happy thanks once again.
Bye,take care

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Hey Rupam darlingBig smile

Dont thank me dear. Im always happy for u What ever u r doing.U know what u r. But its time for us as well to know about ur talents as well.

waise tho Hum ye painter babu ko bhi forum pe dhekna chahthe hai. If possible why dont u paint our lovely Avita and post it on the forum.(just the scanned copy). No pressurre darling take ur time when its possible do it. As i can understand lot of work when u go to school. Now u started summary of GKD so far as well. Do take care of urself and do it when ever its possible . My best wishes always with u, Rupam urf cuty urf the writer urf painter babu . God bless u.
.well i will try do that dear whenever i will get the time,i am not in school right now i had completed it last year only.take care

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PART-10

Watching rv in the hut avi got shocked and his anger was also rising up and the packets,flowers he brought droped on ground but watching arpi's condition he controled his anger.
Rv invited avi inside and then ask arpi to go to him meet him as he is not that bad arpi ran to avi and grabed his hand,
rv tolled that great u both are the entire police department is tensed thrased in searching u people and u both are playing love games over here.

Rv sat on the bed asks to serve food to him and u both also can feed each other,avi was searching just a chance to escape so after completing the food throwed the plate at rv and his gun fell down.Avita ran from there as rv tried to follow but pujari throwed some colours on his face.
On reaching the road avita found a truck standing there & they got into it the truck moved but rv's men sees them.
Rv starts following them and then overtakes the truck tell his driver that he want to check the truck and he caught avita again.
Rv ask them to got down as there game is over now.and ask
the truck driver to handcuff them,
the truck driver
watched avita and just putten the handcuff without locking it and then on order of rv started the truck but he just moved the truck in between of the road,so rv's gun fell down avita fell on one side and rv on another side of the road avi quickly picked the gun and was going to shoot rv when arpi stopped him from doing so.
Avita putten the handcuff on rv's hand and tied his hand with handle of jeep.
Got into the truck and gone living rv shouting there.

The truck driver dropped avita safely (as long before avi had helped the driver from some goons so he helped them).

Avita are alone again in jungle walking together hand in hand happily,suddenly arpi hitted her legs by a stone so now avi picked her up in his arms for some time as she was not able to walk now.
Night has arosed now and avita were still roaming in jungle but arpi got tired just gone sit on a near by rock avi asked her that if she had got tired he can pick her up again.
Arpi tolled that she want to walk along with him as support but not as a burden, she want to be his strentgh not his weakness and hugged avi tightly.arpi slept there only but when she got up suddenly terrored a lot as avi was not there she started shouting Avdesh ji Avdesh ji.
Avi came there tried to console arpi and then avita hugged each other as tightly as they can.
Avi tolled that he had just gone to see some place and he had found a hut to stay at night.
Avita reached the hut but it was not in a good condition avi made the roof again.
And suddenly it started raining avita rushed to the hut but roof falled and avita got completly wet both sat there enjoyed the rain,arpi felt sleepy now and avi made her sleep in his lap,she was shivring so avi put his kurta on her then he also slept leaning on the wall of hut.
Back in the haweli bhutni was very much upset as every thing has gone against her wish.
Maid in the haweli sawed shikha fainted called everyone there,pj carried her to the room,bhutni sprinkled water on her face shikha got up and stops bhutni from calling the doctor as she is fine now.
Another day bhutni asks shikha that she has gone weak as she is not eating she takes the foods and feeds it to shikha but shikha felt something coming out in her mouth and rushed to washroom she vomited a little.
The signal was enough for bhutni she almost thrased shikha to the doctor,and yes bhutni's doubt was true Shikha was pregnant. Back in haweli bhutni asked her to call the boy b'coz of whom she had cared about the repu of haweli and his family.
Tanmay shikhas love came to haweli confessed his love and asked bhutni to let them be together but bhutni ask him to leave and to forget her.
Bhutni takes shikha to the hospital for her abortion,shikha pleeded her not to kill his child as it is the symbol of there love but bhutni didnt listened her.
Doctor after examining tolled that its too late for abortion as there is risk of life for her now.
Bhutni now got hyper alot and thrased her to ammaji & tell her about shikhas pregnancy.
Ammaji started crying taunted shikha on that,and shikha cried a lot but no body understand her emotion.
   
Bhutni again called tanmay and ask him to marry shikha right now but this time tamy refused for doing so he tolled that he love shikha and will marry her but not like this but wid the blessing of his family.
Tamy consoled shikha hugged her and then goes from there.
Bhutni tells in her mind that she can't stop avi from his love but she will let shikha do the same.
Tanmay was rv's younger brother only but shikha is not aware of this fact and tamy also dont know that shikha is the sis of his bros biggest enemy.

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