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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 6:53am | IP Logged
Thank u 4 d entire AVITA journey so far n d pain u took 2 write dis. ClapClapClapClap

Edited by super_boy - 19 January 2011 at 6:54am

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cuty thanks a lot u deserve a big big applause ClapClapClapClapClapClap


i can understand how much ur fingers wud be aching

ur hard work wont go waste we wud  somehow get this stickied in archive or someplace

wonderful work again cuty

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OMG!! Cuty......You are sooo wonderful...amazing summary....
 
 
Hats off to youClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

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Thanks for the long and in-depth update. You have patiently taken your time to write the story of GKD thus far. We appreciate your hard work and great love for Avita.

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Part-9
Avi and arpi hugged each other as they were very happy.Avi remembers to call haweli b'coz everyone in the haweli might be worried taking avita.He cames out of the hut to make d call and reached a telephone bhooth& talked to bj and ammaji.After putting the phone down he stops the tape from which trains voice was coming he had done that b'coz he was knowing that rv might had taped the phones of haweli so that rv man could get confused.And avi was right rv had taped the phone actualy send his corps to all the railway stations to search avi.When avi came out of the booth he collides with some roadside goon.Who slapped avi for doing that avi's anger was at extream and he was about to punch that goon when he remember his pratigya.Avi stopped that goon insulted avi,but avi walked from there.
Avi buyed sum vegetables were few womans talked that how lucky this mans wife is as he is only buying the vegetables,avi listned and smiled on this convo.Avi watched a red sari at a shop and remembers dat arpi is till now is in that jails cloth,he asked d shopkeeper that how much it cost who rpld 500 avi was not having that much money.Avi got a work he carried some loads to the truck and got the money.
Bj now was realy upset as her works was in vain she made the agreement wid rv to make avita away from each other but just revers had done as avi is away from the haweli,so she plans to kill the repu of rv dat is d only way to get rid of rv.
Avi came back at the hut where arpi was washing the dishes,he made her stop as doctor had tolled her to rest and she was not that well.Avi makes arpi sit on the bed and start washing d dish.Arpi watched at the packet asked about what is in the packets avi rpld to watch herself,arpi watched the beautiful red sari tears came in her eyes.She asked avi is that sari for her, avi rpld no for the pujari.Avi asked that does'nt she liked it on which she rpld that this the best gift i had ever got,but then she asked that from where he got this much money,does he had done sum thing wrong again(Arpi was behaving as a typical wife asking loads of question).Avi tolled showing a false anger that if she is not having faith on him then for what is the purpose of being together,Arpi came close to avi telling that she does'nt mean that and holded his hand and sawed the rashes asked that how it happened,avi tolled that he was putting sum loads just in that.she again asked why avi rpld for what purpose a person works for money.Arpi understood the matter and tolled avi that he wanted money for the sari na b'coz of her he is suffering.Avi consoled her telling that it makes him happy to led this simple beautiful life to do some work for them and asks arpi to wear the sari.Arpi came out wearing that and avi got losted in her beauty.Arpi came close to avi,he was still stairing her.Arpi asked avi that how she is looking on which avi rpld that sari is beautiful,she asked what about her he rpld u are also looking ok.Arpi hits avi softly on his chest avi tell that she is looking so much beautiful as if he just want watch her like this for his whole life and time could stop.Avi was about to kiss arpi when she made him stop telling that don't be so romantic as she had to cook the food and goes from there.
Rv's corps could not find avita.Rv had now hired sum local goons in search of avita.and also putten up the posters written one who will help us to find avita would be given Rs 100000 with avitas photo on the poster and stuck the posters on the roads and market places.
Arpi was cooking d food and avi was looking at her.He started dreaming that he is helping her in cooking and suddenly came out of his dream.Arpi after cooking d food served it to avi but before eating, first tried to feed arpi telling that u are my wife so we should eat together(how sweet).Suddenly the pujari came there wid the poster who was angry but after listning to arpi&avi ewplanation he calmed down.Avi got ready to go out for finding some work,arpi tries to stop as it was not safe avi explained her as he had to go out for doing sum work and not to worry.
Rv's hired goons were searching avi and reached at the sari shop from were avi had taken d sari.shopkeeper identifies the photo,and d goon informed rv about avi's location.
Avi was in the search of sum job but as he had not studied so he was not able to get sum better job.Finally he got a work to break the rocks.After comleting d work he got the money.While returning home he buyed some vegetables and also sum flowers(gajra) for arpi.When reached the home the door was shut.He opened the door and was shocked to see rv there.Rv had putten up the gun on arpi and arpi was sitting there in terror.

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thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxx cuty after long time u post it
 i love it

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