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PART-5
Avi was quiet frusted he was throwing d things in d room,arpi entered d room and asked him dat does'nt he beat dat man 2 much,avi said he was d goon of d man who killed his bro,arpi tell dat she cant b wid a crimal,avi was shocked and pained by her words he shouted at her and asked dat she forget her all words and promises so soon,arpi even shouted tell dat she had promises 2 b together wid her huby not wid a killer.Avi was pained by d words of her wife.he got frusted at night arpi thought dat she was too harsh at avi and take dinner for him bhauji taked d tray from her hand take it 2 avi room arpi was by her such behaviour.avi takes the food and got 2 sleep but he wake up by remembering arpi's word he got too sad,meantime chulbul came to arpi and said dat avi for d 1st time is drinking wine she should stop her,arpi ran barefooted 2 stop him she tried 2 make him stop drinking but ordered her 2 get out arpi again tries 2 stop him by holding his hand tell him dat she is her wife&luvs him,avi dragged her by her hair and caught her and says dat her luv&sympathy is just for show why she had came here as she dont want to be together of a crimnal and throws her down and turned.arpi got fall on a broken glass piece and her legs started bleeding she got up and moved from dere,when avi turned again watched her blood shamed by himself.he goes in arpi's room does her bandage ask her 2 forgive him and she means a lot 2 him but dese days he is not taking care of her.Arpi holded avi's hand and said dat by killing lalsingh no one will b benifited avi got angered again and goes.Bahuji listen d convo and plans dat she will make arpi busy in households dat much dat she will leave d haweli for relief.In d morn dere was a puja for arpi's entering in kitchen,arpi got ordered by d pandit to make food for 11pandit,poors&family in just 2hrs.avi tried to rescue her but bhauji tolled dat if she caut make dat she will not enter in d kitchen again.arpi started making food,bhauji thought as she is a engi daughter led her life in pleasure dont know 2 even serve how she will cook and avi will realise dat she is of just no use.arpi just about 2 complete d cooking gone out of d kitchen to bring utensils to serve bhauji asst go mixed sum salt in her kheer,arpi after taking d utensils collides wid avi dey fall on each other,arpi got back den served d food 2 pandit,bhauji was hapy but pandits start asking for more food&kheer as it is very tasty bhauji was stunned arpi tolled dat she had finished it soon but her kheer had fallen so she recooked it.Pandits start praising arpi,avi was also hapy.Chulbul came 2 avi and said dat lalsingh had came 2 lallanpur as her mother had died to do her last rituals.Avi got ready with his goons to capture lalsingh,he had captured him also when suddenly panditji came in a van taken him along wid him it was bhauji who saved lalsingh she tolled lalsingh to ran from dere,lalsingh was even shocked and promises 2 himself he will come again.avi was shattered by his defeat,bhauji at d haweli acted 2 gud like she was 2 sad.Arpi thanked god to save huby,avi listen her words and got angered and tell her dat she is d only woman who is praying for her huby defeat arpi got tears in her eyes.Now avi behaviour has completly changed towards arpi,bhauji was quiet hapy tell arpi dat d luv between u and burned in d agnikund of dere shadi,arpi said dat even if she had burned in dat she still luved avi.
A new police officer Ranvijay singh had now taken d charge of lallanpur he was a brave man and was there just to stop avi's leadership.He got 2 d haweli and threatned avi stop black work or he will kill him making false encounter and gone.arpi got worried and came 2 avi console him as he was angry avi tell her dat if she cant b her strongness just dont b but if she will try 2 b his weakness,he will even not identify her.Arp's father had maked one which had fallen so d police will arrest him soon for his safty he got 2 d superviser engi and begged for his repo,that man dealt wid arpi's father dat he will make d shadi of his son jagat 2 her daughter den he will stop his mahesh rai agreed.Rv captured chulbul beaten him harshly send him to haweli,avi's anger was beyond limit he tolled dat he will kill rv bhauji made him stop as it is not d right time.Arpi go to rv and asked him 2 leave avi as he will come on right path one day rv first shouted on her but den tell her to do fast what she want before its too late.Bhauji had seen arpi dere,when arpi returned back avi addressed him brutly as she had gone beg for his in front of sumone else and asked her d reason,arpi replied that her luv has taken her there dat luv for which she gone agaist her father.avi got normal but bhauji intrupted as no one has d right 2 make avi weak.avi goes from dere... CONTINUED

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Hey CutyBig smile
 
Lots of applauds to u for doing this much needed, wonderful summary of GKD ClapClapClap We do hav updates but summarising the whole thing in one thread is great idea. I know its very tedious task n wud hav taken lots of time. Congo to u for remembering the whole show so well and putting it in words for us Hug 
 
I wish we cud make this post sticky, wud be helpful for all of us as welll the newbies Smile
 
Thanx again dear ... Awesome work done StarStar

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PART-6
Ranvijay got d news that today avi will go to take sum guns&weapons he ordered his corps to get ready catch him.Avi and his goons were planing to go for d mission meantime avi watched arpi crying at terrace arpi was watching him only suddenly she saw dat he was not dere she ran down and found avi standing she just hugged him as tightly she can avi holds her and say that he was 2 harsh wid her arpi replied dat she is too much woried&terrord avi said dat he cant sit like that holding her as his enemy will drag him and kill him so d time he will kept fighting he will b alive,consoles her and go from dere for his mission.Avi's planing had not worked dis time as rvs man capture his weapons and mens,avi and rv got a fight meanwhile a corp shooted avi and he fall in water.corp searched for avi in the water but couldnt find avi.News gone 2 haweli goon ran to hawelh said as every thing is finished.Arpi got shattered drops on 2 d ground,bhauji consoles her.Police reached d haweli for checking the house along wid rv.Arpi got out of d house and goes to d idol of hanuman ji prays for her huby,suddenly heared avi's voice turned around watched avi lying he was in a very bad condition as blood was coming out she shouted his name rv heared d voice and followed that voice.avi pointed his fingers towards a hiding place which was underground arpi managed to make him hide dere.rv came dere tell his men to search,arpi tolled dat she had came dere to take tulsi for puja but suddenly watched a snake and shouted avi's name.Rv said dat do d puja but she cant save avi from him.Avi was not in a gud condition as d bullet was dere,he opened his eyes and tolled arpi dat he will b alright until her luv is wid him he tell her dat put out d bullet wid burnt knife as it is paining a lot but bhauji stoped her.avi faints,arpi plans to take avi to hospital as dey cant call d doctor b'coz police was dere.bhauji taken chulbul to d hospital policed follow her thinking dat avi will b dere.meanwhile arpi taken avi to another hospital managed to have his operation by begging in front of d doctors.Rv corp reached d hospital and found bhauji&chulbul rv understand d plan and then reached d hospital were avi was there.Avi operation had done succesfully but police had reached,sharvan managed d situation avi,arpi made out of d hospital safely.avi started d bike ran from dere wid arpi but rv started following dem wid his corp.avi was not well so cant able to drive well got unbalanced and fall along wid arpi in d jungle which was there at d side of d road.Rv corps enterd d forest in search meanwhile avi goons also entered d forest 2 search them.arpi wake up listning rv's voice who was ordering his corps.she saw avi fainted drags him hides behind d bushes.Rv cant able to saw dem.she sprinkled water on avi's face he wakes up but was almost sleepy she manages to take him 2 a old khandar made him seat and changed his banded by tearing cloth from her saree.avi looked at him and tell her dat d day entered d house she cant get even a single day of happiness.Arpi stoped him by placing her hand on his lips and said dat it is d biggest hapiness for her dat her life has sum use for him.Avi fainted again,arpi gone 2 a near temple prayed dere and got a diya.came back 2 d khandar burn d wood to keep avi warm as he was suffering from fever.Avi got up and said dat arpi hugged her and said dat she is going 2 take sum food for him.but avi holds her hand and said dat she is his life her hunger,thrust and everything arpi touched by her words and hugged him tightly avi also hold her tightly and remembered d old days,suddenly he remembered his pratigya and breaked d hug and said dat he cant do dis b'coz lalsingh is alive.arpi was pained by dis&goes.Avi remembered how arpi had saved and helped him go to arpi.Avi&arpi again had a serious convo,avi tolled dat as lalsingh dies what is her prob,arpi said dat lalsingh is nothing to him but avi life meant to her she cant lost him and hugged him again avi holds her forget the anger.In d morn avi waked up he was sleeping in arpi's lap gazed arpi who was still sleeping.Moved up 2 bring sum food arpi got up and stopped him by telling dat her food responsibility is hers at house also outside also.avi smiled at her she made him rest.and leaves in search of food but doesnt find it.suddenly watched a pujari distributing she goes dere for food,pujari asked d reason of being dere and got to know about avi hiding in khandar he informed rv as he was his men.Reached again 2 arpi gave her d prashad tell her 2 cum wid as he will give medicines for avi,she followed her.Rv go in search of avi in d direction of khandar he sudenly got unbalanced and fired in air hearing d shoot arpi got worried and ran in d direction.Rv got in d khandar pointed his on avi's head and arrested him telling dat now he his time is over.they come out from d khandar,avi ran from dere pushing rv.arpi go to d khandar did'nt find avi dere..CONTINUED

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hey Cuty16.. sorry I dont know ur name... thanks a lot for the story so far.... Oh My....  it must have taken you days to do this... right ???
 
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PART-7
Rv catched avi again and was about to shoot when arpi pushed him den avi&rv fighted again,avi fall down and rv was about to throw a big stone on arpi when shooted by rv's gun he fall dere only,avi got up and holds arpi as she was shocked and severing on what she had just done.avi consoles her but she was terrified and shamed on herself for killing sumone,avi throwed d gun away.They move from dere lefting rv,and meet 2 there own goons dey den move 2 d haweli,at d haweli bhauji was about to leave haweli in search of avi,but jeep entered avi came out bhauji ran to him and ask him is he fine or not,avi ignoring everyone made arpi out of d jeep who was still shocked.Take her to d room made her sleep but as she closed her eyes rv's face came dere,she shouted and holds avi telling him dat not leave her alone she is terrord alot avi consoles her by hugging him tightly made her sleep on his lap made her sleep.bhauji entered dere and taken avi from as he had also injured a lot.Avi after d bandage tell dem about arpi's bravenes and today he is live b'coz of her.every one was shocked bhauji thought dat she will spread dis news to police and dey will arrest her and avi will b her's.meantime time rv got up and managed to call police control room.and his life was saved.Avi goto arpi's room with a glass juice,but didnt find her dere he started searching for and was shocked to see arpi moving on the railing and was to jump to kill herself.avi draged her forcely but strugling 2 fall down telling dat she is a killer and she has no right to live,avi consoles her by dat she had not done nothing as any dedicated wife had done dat only and hugged her tightly.Meantime sharvan informed dem dat rv is alive.At d hospital rv tolled 2 d police comissner dat sum dacoits had shooted him,every one was shocked to his words including avi,arpi,bhauji,it just shows he wanted avi.Jagat shadi was fixed bhauji make avi ready to send arpi to his father's house so dat her mind could change as she is not well now.Avi got ready,arpi's father,mother came dere to take her but she was not ready 2 go gone from dere,avi sawed tears in arpi's mother eyes,dene gone to arpi,arpi she can't go 2 such a place were his huby is not respected.Avi tell her dat he is luckiest huby b'coz his wife consider his huby life and repo above all but she is ignoring her mum who cares for her alot and makes her ready to go.They came out holding eachothers hand,arpi sat in d car,avi ordered mahesh rai he is taking his wife away a single scratch should also not cum.Rv had been inquiried on his own speech as nobody was believing dat a dacoit shooted him and if he is proven wrong he will b suspended.bhauji came 2 know about dis and made a deal wid rv as it will b a benifit for both she handled rv d gun by which arpi had shooted him as her finger prints were present and in return ask him not 2 touch avi ever.Arpi was ready wearing a red sari and phoned avi&asked him dat is he got ready for barat or still playing wid his hairs,avi was shocked and watched around d room b'coz he was actually doing dat,arpi den dat what cloth he is wearing today listning about d black shirt&pant she got littel surprised and tell avi wearing black is upsagun in shadi avi got shocked&worried as what he will do now,arpi instructed her to go to d almira and put out 3rd shervani avi looked at it dat was realy beautiful he asked arpi dat is she had put some camera in his dat she knows everything,arpi replied dat he remains in her every moment so doesnt need any camera or photo,avi blushed on dis.At arpi's house every one was ready for shadi,but jagat was not hapy at all as d girl'simple'wid whom he was marrying was not like other shy girls but she can make other's shy.Mahesh rai as usual scolding her wife but was intrupted by avi,mahesh rai beg not to play wid his repu avi said hhmm.But his eyes got stucked on sumone it was arpi wearing red sari,avi towards him and said dat she is looking as beautiful as a angel arpi blushed,he den only ne thing is missing and gave her a rose.They had gone outside every one was dancing.Suddenly rv entered dere to arrest arpi,avi was shocked he tolled rv dat he cant take away arpi,arpi tell avi dat let her go but avi didnt listen,bhauji came dere setup the convo dat she will arpi come out by using a big advocate,arpi gave d promise of her luv as not 2 do creat scene,police arpi wid them avi was completely broken as her most precious person of his life had been taken away.Jagat got hapy as he thought dat after all dis may b his shadi got cancelled but simple father tolled mahesh rai dat if he will cancel dis shadi,he throw him in jail.There marraige ceremony started,after d shadi arpi's mum called haweli at which mahesh rai slapped her,simple sawed dis and got angered & at d time of grihpravesh she kicks d kalash on mahesh rai leg hiting him badly and tell him dat every action has got opposite reaction.CONTINUED

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PART-8
Rv instructed his lady corp to take arpi on remand and torcher her as brutly as she forgets everything and b like a livedead body,b'coz arpi is avi's weakness and if she will suffer avi will suffer and will break completely.Avi was comletly shattered entered his room watched his wedding photo remembered arpi's phone convo and cried holding dat photo.Rv made a call by his corp 2 avi telling dat arpi's is being beaten brutly and she painful shout is being heard in the police station.Avi rushed 2 d police station saw dere arpi being beaten brutly by d corps shouted at dem loudly but no one stop arpi was crying in pain,but avi cant rescue her and avi was thrown out by d corps along his goon.Reached d haweli,He was shamed on himself as what is d use of his repu of bhaiyaji as he cant save his wife even cried a lot.Bhauji was worried taking avi but was very hapy listning about arpi because she deserves dat only b'coz arpi tried to cum in between avi and her.At night avi's sis Shikha came dere but avi didnt welcomed happily lateron shikha came 2 know about arpi consoled avi.Arpi got high fever but rv didnt called d doctor so dat arpi could dies,it will benificial for dem.rv got to haweli to search the house to find d gun he had been shooted when bhauji intrupted he ordered her to keep shut or he will tell about d agreement to avi and even dat he agreed wid bhauji b'coz at dat time he need but now he's not going 2 leave avi.Arpi fever was high as she had got water and food,corp said she will not b alive till morning rv said let her die.The news gone to avi he was not ready to b quiet for a moment also bhauji didnt stopped him b'coz rv's death was benificial for her.Avi wid his goons got ready wid weapons,attacked the police station killed many corps burned d place with bombs meantime sharvan died in protecting avi.Avi made arpi out holding her in his arms worried at arpi's condition.moved out of d police station when rv stopped them pointing his gun at avi dat today he will kill him but amjad fires there and pistol fall down.Avi taking arpi and his goons ran in d jeep.But rv started following dem pehelwan tolled avi dat dey will b caught at any moment so he go out of d jeep in d jungle.Avi&arpi jumped out of d jeep.Rv captured d jeep but did'nt find avi dere got angered arrested pehelwan,go to haweli in search of avi,arrested all his goons and broken many things,thrown d photos when bhauji stoped him rv slapped her.Avi got up holds arpi who was severing in fever and faints.Avi take her to a temple and drags a doctor for her checkup d doctor checked her and gave medicine.Doctor informed rv abov avi.Avi prayed in front of lordess idol ask her to forgive him as he is taking his prasad to give to arpi as she needs dat,he made arpi wake up feeds the food 2 her tears ran out from arpi eyes watching avi's care.Avi wiped dat den given her d medicine.Made her sleep leaning on his shoulder holds her warmly and leans on his head onto her as he got d relief now.Pujari came dere watched dem avi got up tell they came der in shelter in sum difficult situation.pujari console dem and ask to cum to his hut which near they dey agreed.dey did d aarti,meantime rv came there but pujari rescued dem.rv depart from dere.Avi&arpi thanked d pujari moved 2 his hut,pujari asked as what dey had done dat police is in search of dem.Arpi put entire blame on her,avi was shocked on her and her dat from were dis courage come 2 her,she said dat its d courage of her luv.Avi got up to d idol put his hand above a diya and takes d pratigya dat he will not touch d weapon ever again,from today he will lead of a common man not of bhaiyaji.arpi got tear in her eyes and kissed her hand hugged him tightly.avi tell by placing his hand on her cheeks dat he luvs her alot nothing for him means more than her to him.Arpi tell him dat it will not be easy for avi to complete dis pratigya but she promisses 2 b wid him at every step avi said dats what he want...

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The story so far part-1to8 had comleted now.in my post i'v foccused on avita scenes more.and left few things b'coz my fingers are paining a lot.Hope u all liked my work.thanks
now when the story had again reached a point i will continue it with the 9th part.soon.

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