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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Majestic Clap, plz continue, for us who don t understand hindi it s very important to know 'nd understans word by word the dialogue between the gunah 'nd bella Wink, w undersatnd the global sense of the speak but when we have a truly translation of dialogues is more better , so plz continue  

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PART-3
Avi drove the jeep as fast as he can.
Pandit ask them 2 stand for fera's after 3 fera's arpi pull up d knot(gathbandhan) and said dat she will not marry wid him at any cost b'coz she avi,as every one was as usual shocked listning avi's name.entire people got up,she tolled dat its better for to drink d poison dan 2 marry dis men,pappu tried 2 stop but she picked up a burning wood 2 rescue him,Mahesh rai tolled that she had already marked a black stigma on his prestige so it is better for her drink d poison and die.She looked at entrance but no traces of then she was almost to drink when avi breaked d entrance door by his jeep everyone was stunned when avi came out of d jeep including arpi who just cant belive on her own eyes.Avi walked 2 d mandap few men who tried 2 stop him fall down by avi's one hand only.Avi sawed arpi,wid pair eyes of dat were saluting her for her braveness even saying a sory on understanding her luv.he throwed d poison bottle,meanwhile maheshrai intrupted and said dat u cant take her,cant waste dis girl's life as u are a big crimnal.arpi&avi holds dere hand in ans to mahesh rai,mahesh rai asked arpi's mom to stop her,she just said sign language 2 arpi,arpi looked towards avi&he understands wat she wanted,avi bend down and picks up d sindoor put up to arpi's maang.Every one become speechless.arpi got everything dat she dreamt of tears felt out of her eyes she bends on avi's feet.Avi holded her up wipes d tear.They both taken blessing from her mum and take a departure pappu tried to stop them got a slap from avi and just sit dere on d ground.They left d place in the avi was worried thinking about bhauji's reaction.In the way they stopped at a dhaba along wid there goons,they had there first verbal convo dere as arpi was tensod about her mum who is all alone dere avi consoles her, dene dey have dere lunch.They reached d haweli,bhauji was on cloud 9 wid her anger ,avi tries to express his grief towards her but she said dat dis is not accepted by her and dis haweli,avi tolled her dat he respects her very much but he married to arpi he cant even leave her so dey will leave d haweli.Arpi&Avi taken blessing from ammaji(avi's mum),& were to leave d haweli when bhauji stopped them&done d aarti,but said dat she will accept dis shadi so dey will have dere shadi again but till den they will not live together.Avi left d room wid his goons shyly.Bhauji talked 2 arpi very roughly,insulted her as she does'nt think about d repo of her own family &as she had just fell in luv wid avi by reading about him&photos dis luv will not be for to long. Meantime Mahesh rai wid his bro-in law reached haweli wid police force clamed dat avi had kidnapped arpi.Arpi convinced her luv in front of every one &she ir there by her own will.avi was just to happy watching and hearing about arpi's luv towards him he got lost in that actualy.bhauji got irritated and burned from inside.Bhauji was actually in luv wid avi and wants to make him her's,she cant tolerate any one else in avi's life so she hates arpi.Next morning mahesh rai came to haweli and appoliges in front of avi&bhauji about what he had done he is very sory for dat,asked that he wanted to greet her daughter in alone,avi was not ready but bhauji agreed.Mahesh rai closed d room door and pointed d gun to arpi,he said dat he will kill her as she maked him shamed but avi entered dere mahesh rai shooted at avi,bullet hitted avi's arm every body came dere.Mahesh rai was put out of d haweli,bhauji claimed arpi for all this and said dat d day she entered d house nothing had gone well and instructed her not 2 meet avi till dere marraige,arpi cried and left d room avi was paine by dis but cant do anything as he cant go against bhauji,But then manages to meet arpi at ammas room he then consoled her saying dat bhauji is rough but she very nice as she always only worries for avi,he considered bhauji as her mother.Bhauji heared d convo and got upset as for avi she is like her mum.She instructed pandit ji to kill arpi,b'coz avi has got mad for her and dis girl is not gud for her as she will destroy every thing.panditji confirmed dat he will finish her widout any trace.Next morning she sends avi for sum work outside.Tolled arpi to go to the ghat for worship along wid panditji who will instruct her for d puja.Ammaji got ready to along wid arpi,they reached d ghat,ammaji sat dere arpi and panditjee moves towards d water.avi was not happy sitting in jeep as he could not have even a glance of arpi today one of his goon phoned haweli so that avi could even talk to arpi but he come to know dat she had to d ghat.sharvan tolled dat ghat is in dere way they can go there but avi does'nt replied.Arpi entered the water pandit jee escaped from telling he will manage sum flowers for puja,avi ordered to move towards d ghat.One fat man in the water dragged arpi's leg she gone inside,struggled to come out but each time cant able to do that,ammaji shouted for her rescue.continued...

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very nice written
loved itBig smile

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thank u so much cuty :)
u deserve a round of applause for your patience n hard-work...thank u soo much :) :)

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 8:51am | IP Logged
OMG!!!!!!! Cuty...............
 
 
tht was wonderful...
 
Kudos to you....!!!!!!!!  very well written summary!!ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
pls continue writing......EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
 
Thnks a lottt sweetie,...

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Heyyy Cuty...

That was a nice summary....
Hats off to you for taking all the pains to summarize the story...
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PART-4
Avi reached at d ghat jumps in d water fights wid d man in water his goons entered d water caught that men,avi holds arpi in his arms and comes out of d water she was not in a well condition and she was fainted avi tried to push up her stomach so as she brings out water she had taken.arpi opened her eyes avi got relief.They returned 2 haweli bhauji got shocked watching arpi in avi's arm and alive.Avi started that man brutly and asked him who had send him bhauji intrupted in meantime and made dat man said dat arpi's father had send him to kill arpi.Avi's anger has got beyond limits he drove d jeep to arpi's house,pointed d gun at mahesh rai tell dat today he will kill him but arpi's begged for his huby life he left him and tolled not to repeat dis again.Bhauji scolded pandit for his foolishness and instructed him 2 b quiet for few days as he was asking for another chance.Bhauji entered in arpi's room where she was crying,bhauji asked to arpi very dat why she is crying b'coz d day she enter avi's life he had started suffering she is poison for his life but if sum thing happen to avi entire blame will be on her and bhauji gne.Avi entered arpi's room tried to console as she was crying arpi tolled not 2 cum near as she is a danger for him but now nothing will happen as she go from d haweli and ran away avi follows her,dey came out of d haweli avi tolled just to stop atleast show her face to him,she turned around arpi tell dat she luvs him but cant drag his life in danger just for d shake of her luv her is a poison for his life and turned avi pulls her in his arm and den eyes locked as dere at dere 1st meet,avi released her and said dat she is his life and if she will go from his life he will die arpi firmly put his on his lips as telling never say dat.they promised each other 2 remain together in all difficult paths of life.They entered d haweli together avi asked 2 put out a muhrat for d shadi in next 24hrs as he will marry 2 arpi in next 24 hrs in any how.Shadi preparation started fastly as dey had very less time in d night when arpi war sleeping suddenly waked up on a unknown shadow she got letter in which she called on d terrice,she walked dere sumone touched her shoulder it was avi she was almost to shout when avi kept his hand on her mouth dey dene go for a drive,avi asked dat if she dont want 2 go dey can go back but arpi replied if he there wid her day night&inside or outside d house does'nt maters for her.avi got hapy den showed her d place were his bro&father had been killed and his life changed.Den dey got to a small dhaba eaten d food together and returned back to haweli,as arpi got out of d jeep rain started arpi enjoyed dat and started dancing avi gazed her as a innocently and smiled.he came out of d jeep suddenly arpi fell down he lifts her up in his arms and moved to d shade were dey had dere first hug.They slept there only keeping there head on each other and holding each others hand.Sun arosed avi opened his eyes and made arpi got up.They both rushed d haweli.Todays it was dere shadi,avi got ready in shervani and arpi in red jora.Avi was too hapy arpi was little upset but when she saw her mum along wid manjari become hapy her mum tell dat avi brought her here.Everybody danced singed and enjoyed avi-arpi got married.In d night avi entered d room were arpi was sitting handled her a redrose,arpi thanked her for calling her mum avi promise her 2 fulfill all her dreams dey were about sleep when they heared sumbody crying outside.It was bhauji who had weared a white sari,and tell avi that she will from now dress like dat only b'coz she had thought avi will kill lalsingh his huby killer but now he had got married he will b busy in d household.Avi got hegitated taken d pratigya dat until he kill lalsingh he will lead bachlors he will not even touch her wife arpi hearing all dis got shattered ran towards avi who made him stop from coming near him and gone from der arpi ran towards her room and cried a lot,bhauji happiness got no boundries.In d morn avi got ready 2 go in search of lalsingh bhauji taken his aarti,he got out and as he opened d door of d jeep turned around and gazed at arpi who was standing at d door he was 2 move towards her when he remembered his vow.got up in d jeep and moved.ammaji came 2 arpi and tolled that she is going 2 teerth yatra 2 pray for them.Avi found one lalsingh men taken him to d haweli and start beating him brutly arpi was shocked watching him doing dat,she tried to rescue dat man when he got on her feet but avi placed his palms against his face she got stunned and go inside.bhauji smiled at that and den ordered avi to leave as he dont know were is lalsingh.To capture lalsingh is not as easy as he is thinking for dat he had to preserve his anger.Avi got back to the haweli in his room...CONTINUED

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Continue yaar..u rocks,

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