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Just trying to sumarise the story of Gkd so far hope u all like that.
PART-1ST
The story is of lallanpur where people talks more than guns than the words,due to small things they can just shoot sumone small childrens know to shoot the gun,there lives a person who has been considered as God of crimes Avdesh singh thakur aka bhaiyaji he helps the needy but just dont left those who dont follow him.Avi was only of 14 yrs at his brother's marriage ceremony his bro&father has been killed by some lalsingh her sis in law(bhauji) entered as a widow to his house,mother got paralitic attack,in such situation bhauji managed the house& made avi such strong bhaiyaji,avi worship bhauji as devi of house,avi also has a sis reading in city college.Arpita rai a student of history in the local college is madly in luv with avi even if she has not seen him in real,she used to collect his photo from newspaper talks to his photo as he everything to her,she luvs him b'coz he respects woman like his father&bro.she was the daughter of a corrupt civil engineer for whom money was every thing he treats her mother very badly often slaps her beats her for no reason,his two bro jagat&chirag who also dont care either for arpi&her mother sumwhere arpi hates her father b'coz she luvs her mother only one who understands arpi and cares for her,beside her family her best friend manjari who tries to make her happy everytime.Arpi luvs&respects avi he's d only one from whom her father dares and she just wish to see him once. Avi was doing exercise in when a lady with her daughter came to help as few mens of betamaharaj had raped her daughter & now they are threatning of making her daughter prositute she gave her old jewels&begs to protect her avi promissed her dat she dont have to worry.arpi&manjari where going to college when there ricksaw breaks manjari goes to search another one suddenly arpi watched avi jeep coming she was happy to see him,avi came there to shetle the matter of betamaharaj he then had fight wid bm suddenly to escape from avi betam holds arpi wid his knife around arpi's neck,avi kicks bm and he ran from there arpi got unbalanced and was about to fall when avi holds her there eye locked wid eachother,manjari takes her away from there,avi returned the jewels to that lady,bhauji in the haweli puts betamaharaj along with cattles.scolds avi for returning the jewels.Bhauji had demand some money from arpi father which he had not given asks avi to short the prob,avi demand the money again but he not rpld arpi mamaji had sum political approach he called avi and said not to disturb engineer.avi got angry and goes to arpi house where the family was at the dinning table avi had the dinner wid them and takes his son chirag wid dem when mahesh rai argued avi lift the gun on him suddenly he watch arpi there he forget everything stares at confused standing arpi,he regains his sense and asks her father to give 20 lac to take his son.Next day avi asked his goons(who where 4 main avi considere them as his bro Sharvan,chulbul,amjad,pehelwan)that engi has a daughter also they all show der keen interest in dis convo,they take avi to the road where her house balcony opens she come there to dries her hair as predicted she come there avi watched her she watched him and eyes speaked everything.meanwhile jagat watched avi got terrod mahesh rai got agreed to pay the money.chirag returned home maheshrai welcomed him wid a slap,meanwhile mahesh rai attend a call after d call he informed arpi dat 2mrow a family is coming to see her so from now her college is stopped arpi becomes sad but on convincing by her mother she got ready to go to mandir,avi got d news of her going to mandir got there before her avi goons moved all people from der so that avi could expres his luv to arpi but avi got nervous cant even opend his eyes infront of her.When arpi reached home a strange family was waiting dey all abused her a lot den the guy(pappu)asked to talk 2 her in alone he tried to abuse her physically but arpi mom entered suddenly and saved her the family got ready for shadi fixed the shadi after one week,arpi cried a lot on her fate.Avi's goons suggested him to write a letter to arpi to express his luv and call him 2mrow at 11am to moti mahal,.. One of his goon take this to arpi's room but she cant able to read that letter.Next morning avi got ready in a smashing luk to meet arpi.at arpi's house pappu arrived and permission to take arpi to motimahal.Avi watched arpi with pappu and got to know about there fixed shadi gone he shattered completely as all his dreams brokes down.arpi turned around watched avi stand there cant able to react on the situation stands confused but saw avdesh painfull eyes that were asking thousands of question.avi turned gone from there as he misunderstood the situation.arpi looked at d rose just fallen from avi's hand on to the ground...I WILL CONTINUE IT ONLY IF U ALL LIKED IT THANKS.

PART 2-pg1

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Wow, hats off to you Cuty for the hard workStarStar: both recall power and typing power. Great jobClapClap. Please continue and then maybe this can be made into a sticky and posted in the other section.
 
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Cutie, I shall applaud you for your time spent in writing the summary of GKD. We all love the beginning days of Avita's love story. I remember the scene where Avi sees Pappu & Arpi together and misunderstands the situation. In fact, I made my sis record the scenes on her cell so that we can watch them when I wanted to see Avita. Avi's expressions were excellent. His eyes showed great despair and hurt. He was shocked that his dream was broken and he could not stand being in a helpless state. Arpi was watching him, very shocked to see his sudden appearance and  painful expression. Her only love had witnessed her with an unwanted man and he misinterpreted her intentions. She was froze to the spot by his power eyes.

Please continue with your write-up.

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
wonderful cuty.  there is a post by roshni abt newsletter thing

why dont u have a look and sign up for  story so far weekly

it wud be really helpful

too good  and those early days of gkd were awesome

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thank u so much for tryin to summarise everything n for your effort u've put in to do it...do continue writing it... :)

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PART-2
Arpi returned home and was deep in thoughts of avi as his eyes had spoke everything suddenly manjari came ask arpi in a teasing node that she is thinking about jeejaji as he luvs her alot as arpi's father tolled manjari.Arpi got tears in her eyes and said he just luvs her body,her beauty not her.and said dat she just luvs avi &thinks dat he also luvs her and she wants 2 go to haweli to confirm it wid him manjari was shocked but manages to go to haweli wid her,at the haweli she met panditji(bhauji assistantant)and bhauji who ordered dem to get out widout even hearing them as avi was also not at the haweli at that time.she returned home almost shattered at her home every one was listing the the demands from her sasural.she got into her room where her mum came,she tries to console arpi but arpi tolled that she will not marry pappu as she luvs sumone else,her father heared the convo &dragged her outside d house slapped her beaten her harsly and asked the guy name wid whom she maked luv widout even caring for his father repo arpi cried a lot his father again asked d name of boy or he will kill her arpi strenth and said avdesh singh thakur every body got shocked,stunned she tolled dat she luvs him b'coz u severed just by his named even if i have not meet him he's der wid me at my every breath&blink.her father as d result of her such behaviour phoned pappus father and fixed d shadi just 2 days after,arpi does'nt terrified and answerd him dat she will marry after 2 days but from avi.Next morning everybody in arpi family packed dere bags as d shadi was going to b at Mathura prasad(pappu father) farm house the entire go there lefting d house.
Avi after returning from motimahal had got a complete heart broke as 1st time in life he liked sumone like that and want 2 make her own she also respond her well smiled at him gazed him blushed from him but she is marrying sumone else.one of his goon tolled him not 2 worry we will go and check d matter but avi tolled dat they will not disturb.he just stares at d earing of arpi which sharvan got for him from arpi's room.but on forcing dey all gone to arpi's house but dey only found d watchman who tolled about d shadi after 2days.avi instructed all his goons not talk on dis matter ever again,stop dis here only.but avi changed completely he used to b panic,irritated easily and silent his smile lost sumwhere.every body at haweli including bhauji where confused about such.
At d farm house pappu and his family greeted arpi's family.pappu decorated a room for arpi,he tried 2 touch arpi but slapped him on dis he in return slapped arpi and she fall on d bed and tell her that after dere he will remove all his panicness,poor arpi has only one thing in front of whom she could cry her griefs dat was avi's photo.shadi rashams(ceremony) started but arpi was still thinking about avi.In d meantime when all mens were busy in drinking she found a poison(rat killer)for her.At night when every one where busy she phoned manjari tell her all d story.next morning manjari came dere at arpi's haldi arpi handled her a letter for avi and ask her to give it to avi at d haweli,manjari said arpi that avi will make fun of him as he is a gunda but on arpi convice she managed 2 go 2 haweli,were panditji taken d letter from her and gave dat bhauji.As bhauji opened d letter her saas caught her hairs(as she dont like her b'coz she think dat bhauji had made avi a crimnal)wind blowed high and d letter fled from goes to akhara place were avi was exercising,but only physicaly not mently as he was continusly thinking about arpi dat how she meet her,her eyes,her hairs,at d temple,from d window her smile and den how dat pappu taken her,tears where dere in his eyes,he sat down suddenly sawed d letter fallen.He picks d letter read dat and was almost shocked on d words,and shamed on himself on misunderstanding such a girl who luvs him more than her own life who just going to kill her if he will not come 2 take her.He got up regaining full strength folded d letter in his hand as he is promissing his luv dat i coming 2 take u dont worry at all.he go to his room changed and walked forcefuly towards his jeep his goons also followed him sat in d jeep.bhauji was shocked watching him like dat tried to stop him but it was 2 late avi drove d jeep fastly all his goons where shocked,surprised on his such behaviour but nun has d courage to ask him anything so dey were sitting quietly.
At d farm house pappu was sitting at d mandap and pandit to read mantra fastly,pandit call d dulhan arpi in d room looked at avi's photo tears felt,she taked d poison in one hand and walked 2 d mandap,she gazed at d entrance door on dat her father tell him dat no body is going to come go and sit at d mandap.she goes and sit there pandit starts d mantra...I WILL CONTINUE IT HOPE U ALL LIKED THIS ONE TOO


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hey cuty thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a ton
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