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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
yaaay i cant wait Day Dreaming

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
nice update...

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
Day Dreaming oops time jaldi kyun nahii pass horahi hei aaj

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 7:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess163

Originally posted by muskanp

UPDATING WILL TAKE 1HR

di
1 hr over!
pls jaldi kardo, i am here just for 5 more min,then i cant read the whole day!CryCry
plssss......
hellooooooo?????
koi hai?
main ab tak wait kar rai hun!
kahan hai update....

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Yayyyyyyyyyyyy Coffee time
Cant wait
Thank u!!



Edited by maangeetcrazy - 21 January 2011 at 7:19pm
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-truly magical-
part 99

She didn't let go his hand. He sat next to her & waited for her to fall a sleep & invariably slept next to her. They were sleeping as if they haven't slept for ages.

 
Saturday morning...maan didn't wake up for his gym. Instead he slept like a baby. She got up around 5.30 am saw him sleeping didn't want to lose a minute of closeness she hugged him tighter & slept again. She got up again at around 9am to see Maan was gone. She immediately rushed to the living room looking for him. He was working on the laptop. She stood at corridor connecting living & bedroom & watched him silently. He had not noticed her, then suddenly he looked up & knotted his eyebrows. She cleared her throat - main aapke liya special brunch banavoon?
He looked back into his laptop - umm
she excitedly walked into the kitchen & started cooking. She planned on making full fledged  punjabi menu. She planned on paratas & chicken curry.
It way noon. Maan was really feeling hungry. His patience was giving way. He had some more glasses of water & waited. He didn't wat to lose his temper. It was 1pm. When Geet finally came out rushing making a baby face just few more mins. How could he say anything looking at her innocent face.
He looked back into his laptop - umm..wondering she might be really working on some thing yummy.
she went back into the kitchen murmuring yeh kya kiya jhali pura chicken curry karab kardiya. Aab kya  karigi. Subha se unhe bhooka rakha huwa hain. Chi kitna ganda taste hain. She looked into the fridge & wondered wat to serve him.
She came out at 1.15 with a plate of sandwiches.
He rushed to the table hoping to get a full meal. He fumed looking at the sandwiches. She smiled weakly. He closed his eyes drinking his anger. Yeh mujhe pareshan karne keliya yeh sab kar rahi hain kya? He drank another glass of water & ate the sandwiches. She looked really concerned & truly sorry. He didn't make a fuzz either. He just finished his sandwiches & went to keep his plate, when he noticed the mess in the kitchen & the spoiled chicken curry. He smiled at her innocence. He shook his head & murmured bol nahi sakti thi.. Sach main pagal hain.  Itni pareshan ho rahi hogi.

He got back to his work. Later in the evening
Geet - I was thinking we could go out for a coffee?
He didn't want to refuse her especially after the torture she has gone through making that chicken curry. he maintained a straight look - umm
she dressed up in the top he presented her for the bday & her blue jeans. Jhali aab koi gadbad mat karna. Jaldi se unka gussa tanda kar. Tuesday ko unka birthday bhi hain. I have to make it special for him, the way he did it for me. Lekin kaise unka gussa khatam ho tab na.
He wore a t-shirt & jeans. Her eyes were just glued on to him. Drooling over his toned look, that was quite visible with his body hugging t-shirt. She probably just wanted to touch him, feel him, kiss every part of his bare body, just by looking at him she could feel herself turning mushy. He cleared his throat to distract her.   They walked down to the nearby coasta cafe. She ordered his coffee & a milk shake for her. He was busy with his blackberry phone. She looked at him impatiently. He didn't seem to budge.
She cleared her throat couple a times & switched legs.
Finally pulled his phone away - mujhe se baath karo
Maan shot stair - that was important
she immediately gave the phone back & got restless.
He send the mail & kept the phone down.
Maan - so how is ur college
Geet - of all the things u want to talk about college now she spoke again without thinking.
babaji main romance ki baat kar rahi hoon aur yah kaise kaise boring baat kar rahen hain. Chalo baat tho kar rahen hain. He watched her closely reading the confusion in her eyes.
He spoke about his clients & new deal that he has signed in India. She was happy they were finally talking like friends. Like their usual coffee date in taj. Oh man !!! how much she missed those days. They could spend the whole evening chatting & still talk the whole night over the phone. They went back home & Maan was held up again with his work.

She noticed he had people waiting to have a web meeting in India. He put them on hold to take her out. She felt guilty. Unhe mana ne chali hain yah aur pareshan karne. Uff Geet sudhar ja. His calls went on till late mid night & he was not even having time to have his dinner.

She went to change. She didn't dare to wear her spaghetti top & short ever since that night. She just wore her some pyjama & t-shirt. Maan hated her not being herself. He actually kind of missed her dressed cutely, innocently yet sexy.

She didn't want to force him or disturb him for dinner. She served his dinner in a plate & fed him while he was still working sitting on the couch. He was having some fumed up conversation with his clients on phone in India. She was just realizing the volume of work he handles on the daily basis. It was 2am & his work didn't seem to stop. She saw he was tired & almost dosing off. She sat next to him comforting him & occasional massaging his neck. He smiled weakly too engrossed in his work. Finally he fell a sleep still typing a mail. She took the laptop carefully & kept it on the side table. She made him lay on her lap & softly kissed his cheek.

Next day morning she turned at 5.30am feeling uncomfortable with the position. He turned to hug her waist & hid her face into her pulling her closer. She was feeling so ticklish. She tried to control herself. She didn't want to disturb him at all.

Maan woke up at 10.am to find himself cuddled up in her lap in the couch. He lifted her & carried her to bedroom & made her lay her on the bed. She pulled his hand along & slept. He knew she probably sleep well because of him. He placed soft kiss on her forehead & walked away slowy withdrawing his hand.

She got up little later & carefully cooked their lunch. She definitely didn't want to try anything fancy. She kept it simple Italian lunch. She so much wanted to take him for a coffee but was scared to ask him out seeing his volume of work.

Next day morning Maan had left to office & Geet was getting ready to go to college. She finished her bath & stood wearing the towel & spoke to herself in the mirror. Kal unka birthday hain. Aabhi bhi unka gussa thanda nahi huwa. Thu bhi na waste hain. Aab main kya kar salti hoon. Tune unhe gussa dilya aab tu hi unhe mana. Lekin kaise main ne unke liya unka fav kahana banaya, unke saat coffee date bhi gayee, unpe tho kisi baat ka asar nahi hota. She shook her head & came out wiping her hair to bump into him. She was first shocked to see him at home then embarrassed, then shy, then something wet as he looked at her with alluring eyes. His hand slid slowly around her waist, she gulped some air, he kept looking at her lost in her wet & sexy look. He took another step closer His hand slowly pushed the wet hair behind as they slide back of her ear to bury themselves in that silken curtain of wet hain while drinking the beauty purely with his eyes. His caress send tremors in her. He was instantly turning hard. She could feel him coming closer she held her breath.

 
She didn't want to say anything or react in any way that could hurt. She fluttered her eyes couple of time & then looked at his lips. His mouth went dry seeing her eye moment. He parted his lips but then some reality stuck ..woh main file bhool gaya tha he said looking flushed. She stood rooted with her hands hanging on either side as he left.


precap
!!!bebo main bebo!!!!

-PREV    PART 98    NEXT   PART 100-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.
Love
muskan


Edited by muskanp - 22 January 2011 at 6:40pm

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 7:35pm | IP Logged

YAYYYYY!!!!!

m the first to comment for the first time!
its really sad that i did not get tym to edit it earlier!
 
 
 
m soooo happy for this!
 
n now coming to the update....
Muski di, I have finally come to comment after three updates because I see the old magic coming back in tits and pieces....though there is still a lot to be desired!
 
 
You drive me crazy muski di....i mean, i actually missed a lecture waiting for u to update tm....n just dashed off after reading it n for the same reason, m soo late in editing my comment...
well no doubt that u r an AWESOME writer....but, mujhe sirf happy happy MAANEET chahiye.....kam se kam,they should be together even if they have to face preoblems,it should be togther......
please get them togther very soon.....
main wait kar-karke pagal horahi hoon......
 
Love u always,
Swati


Edited by princess163 - 22 January 2011 at 8:30am

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Yayy Wohhooo
2nd again...lolLOL
Woooo
Haha..OMG
Loved the Update
Amazinggg
babaji main romance ki baat kar rahi hoon aur yah kaise kaise boring baat kar rahen hain
Romantic?? lol..Geet haha good going..lol
Hmm Geet making up to maan huh.. lol
Awhh soo cute when she tried to make Chicken curry but failed and how maan was fumed cause he had to wait soo much and got sandwich to eat
and when he realized wht she was making
Sooo cute
Loved that part
Hayee the last part was romanticc...love it
Yayyy wohhooo Maan's Birthday?
Cant wait to see wht geet does?
Hmmm seeing the precap..lol
I think Geet is trying to seduce maanBlushinglol
Hope soo
Cant wait to read more
Continue soon
Thank u!!



Edited by maangeetcrazy - 21 January 2011 at 7:48pm

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