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-truly magical- MAANEET thread 9 (Page 16)

heermeher IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 2:24am | IP Logged
congrats sweety

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cute-aly IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 2:31am | IP Logged
part 91

She rests herself totally on him is it hurting
he pulls her closer kissing her head - na
she bites him on his chest he screams - aa ouch geet!! kya kar rahi ho? Kal ki abhi bhi uttari nahi kya? She makes a naughty face & kisses him. He smiles & locks her between his leg. They wake up later in the day & plan a lazy day.

geet - actually I am loving it here
maan - phir itni jaldi kyun hain
geet - mujhe wapise jaaken jaldi se aapke saat shaad........she bites her tongue and goes to the kitchen. he follows her & catches her wrist & pulls her closer - meri sherni ko shaadi ki jaldi hain
she turns all pink - nahi mujhe koi jaldi nahi
maan teasingly - good !!! mujhe bhi nahi
she feels bad & looks away
he pulls her closer - meri shaadi hogaien hain tum nahi manti to main kya karon

naina - geet ur tops neck line is really sexy
geet smiled - I have another top with a similar neck, u could wear that for dinner.
Naina - are you kidding
geet - nahi nahi seriously
naina slide her stole a little bit & exposed a blueish mark aise main how can I wear such tops.
Ridz - nun of us for next few days
geet just realized why maan wore that high neck..she cursed herself & ran away from there, feeling odd, unhe kya lag raha hoga, chi chi babaji yeh kya kiya main ne
mukti - isse kya huwa
raj gets up to see her
maan rests his hand on his shoulder softly - its ok main dehk ta hoon
geet walks into some lane & keeps walking crossing her hand tightly around her waist, kya lage ga unhe.....kuch nahi lagega mujhe she hugs him & cries I really didn't realize, mujhe nahi pata ta sachi main she tucked her head deep into his chest & kept saying the same thing again & again. 

part 92

She stood up in a minute & slapped him. Kya kar rahen ho tum mera saat, agar unhe pata challega tho!! he will kill you..OMG   for sure

She immediately calls him
maan shouts - where the hell are you?
Geet - mujhe aap se milna hain abhi
maan - I am at clients place
she was irritated - why are u always busy
he yells back - u r the one busy,  subha se tumhe phone kar rahan hoon, do u even know how much I was worried. Driver ko phone kiya he also doesn't know where u are? U r just taking me for granted.
She was already freaked out with wat happened with arjun & maans being so rude just pissed her further - I hate u & cuts the call.

abhi bhi naraz ho. He closes his eyes thinking how can he ever be angry with her.  
Next day geet wakes up late with heavy head. Maan gets her milk & kisses her forehead.
Geet - mujhe aapse baat kari hain
maan - abhi nahi jaan I am really getting late
geet - mujhe kal ke baren main baat karni hain
maan - don't worry I got it all sorted
she was confused
maan - I have called prithvi, he is waiting down for u. aab se he will be always there with like before. prithvi is back  She was dead scared if he knew about arjun & how did he know.
Geet - I am really sorry maan main aapko AR..

part 93

for u

She reaches the car park & meets up with prithvi.
Geet - hi
prithvi - hi
geet - how have u been?
Prithvi smiled
he sits in the passenger seat in front & geet sits in back seat.

arjun - hi sweetheart
geet moves behind prithvi
prithvi senses the restlessness in her & stretches his hand holds arjun back.
Arjun smirks - who is this???
prithvi - please step back.
Arjun - oh !! ur new boy friend???
prithvi to geet - do you know him?
Geet looked into arjuns eyes - NO

Anni - belated happy birthday
geet - thanxs
anni - where were u? We had planned a surprise party for u
geet - I was out with my family.

She got angry & walked ahead when arjun blocked her way with his eyes in agony. Geet looked around for prithvi.
Prithvi immediately stepped in between & asked arjun to stay away.
Arjun - OH !!! your body guard???
geet ignored & walked towards her car.
Arjun - now ur husband is scared u will runaway

Prithvi clears his throat - I know it is nun of my business, can I ask u? yeh ladka kaun hain?
geet - nothing serious '. actually some psycho
prithvi - don't worry I will handle him
geet - thanxs I hate even his sight, pehle aise kuch nahi tha, pata nahi aaj-kal really crosses his limits. I am really glad you are here.
Prithvi smiles teasingly
geet shots a stern irritating look
prithvi trying to behave himself - I am sorry couldn't stop laughing
geet - stop it!!!
prithvi - how much u hated body guards in delhi aur yanha pe ur glad
geet - yah !! she smiled herself I guess people do change
prithvi could see the change in her, totally changed to maans girl from top to bottom, probably that's why maan is crazily in love with her, always thinks about her first. Her security, her safety, nothing seems to be more important than her.

Ek to late aate hain aur aise sab karte hain. Mujh se baat bhi nahi karten. Inhae to bus!! uff.. kitne din hogayen hum saat main dinner karke, dinner chodo yeh tho break fast bhi nahi karten aaj kal mera saat. Maan came to the room in a foul mod. seeing the pillows just pissed him further, he piled up his pillows over hers & turned his back to her. She didn't like him turning away. Tears rolled down her eyes main inse naraz thi aur yeh mujhe attitude dihka rahen hain. She twists her nose & turns her back to him. babaji yeh mujhe mante bhi nahi..nahi bolti main inseAngry

Edited by cute-aly - 18 January 2011 at 2:47am

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part 94

geet gets really annoyed babaji inke pass to baat karne ki liya bhi time nahi hain
after the call
maan - haan tum kya kah rahi thi
geet - kuch nahi bye
he hugs her mera sona mera sweetu sorry baba itna gussa mat karo
she naps out chodo mujhe, u don't have time for me now a days
maan - darling it is this project eating up my time
geet - aap to delhi main kabhi itne busy nahi the..puri puri raat mujhe se baat karte the
maan - main abhi bhi tumse puri puri raat baat karloon tume hi pillow ki wall banati rahti ho
geet - OH u have problem with that also
he rolls his eyes
geet - u don't love me, u don't have time for me, phir kyun shaadi ki mujhse?
he kissed her like never before, she just accepted their marriage without even realizing she actually just did. He was on cloud nine. She could feel the difference in his kiss today.

he murmured ek sip main woh mera khoon peejaygi..maan aur mat peena warna waise bahut naraz hain pata nahi kitna naraz hojayegi

tu to gaya aaj...abhi abhi madam shaadi ko maan ne lagi hain...aaj hi divorce bhi hojayega. He could feel himself feeling little tipsy. He warned himself kuch mat bolna, chup chap jake so jaana

OH GOD!!! how am I to control myself he murmured. He dropped his head down & tried to walk in avoiding her. she shouted - yeh kya halat bana rakha hain
she noticed his black court was in his hand & his shirts first 3 buttons were open exposing his chest making him look irresistibly hot.

Ek tho pura din mera samne itna sexy dress pehne ke ghoomthi ho & u expect me to control myself. She fluttered her lashes & looked at him & then her dress..babaji main to humesha se hi yehi dress pehni thi hoon. Do u even know what ur dress does to me..

he makes a scared baby face - maan aap yeh kya kar rahen ho
he gets on the bed & throws the pillow away, dare u pile this pillow ever again. She hides herself inside the spread yeh itna naraz kyun ho rahen hain. Before she could realize he pulled the sheet away & pinned her hands on either side.She couldn't miss the intensity in those eyes alluring & tipsy eyes. U know I really love u. how could she even protest hearing those words.

part 95

chup ek dum chup. Whats wrong with u?
She cries louder holding the spread closer - main kisi ko muh dihkane ke layak nahi rahi she touches her stomach & looks at her stomach
he really losses it - u know we didn't do anything last night then why are u behaving like this
geet - u tore my top & aapne mujhe yanha sab, phir woh sab kiya
maan - main ne kuch nahi kiya mujhe pata hain
geet - abhi tho aap aise hi kaho ge
maan - GEET stop it

she immediately calmed herself - mera matlab woh nahi tha
he turns his back not able to stand her - mujhe tumhare koi baat samjh nahi aati hain. First u say u won't stay with me unless we get married, then when we eventually get married u don't accept that marriage. For god sake dammit don't make me feel like a rapist. I was just expressing myself to u. if u have a problem with that then I won't& walks away slamming the door of the bedroom.

maan - just leave me alone
He grabs juice & picks his laptop bag & goes towards the door.
She whispers looking down - aapne kaha tha sunday is all urs
maan - that was before all this, now I can't even bare to stand under one roof as u.
those word hit like thousand needles in her heart. He had never been so mean to her. She blankly looked at him in pain
maan - I hate you for doing this to me.

yaar yeh geet ko kahan phasa diya yahan maan guse me aur uni me arjun

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dimpzz Goldie

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 5:21am | IP Logged
OMG......wt juz happened!?!
he got soo angry how will geet manofy him??
hope he understands

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Oops.... Shocked
Everything went wrong.but nice yaarrrrrrrrrrrrrr

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
gawrsshhhh she sure has teased the wrong strings in him this time.lagta hai toofaan anay wala hai.wonder wt will he do curious:)

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