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TeRi ZiNdAgI MeRI ZiNdAgI HaI#MaAnEeT#2#part 54 page 23 (Page 7)

wajiha-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
yr awesome
waiting for cat and dog fight hehehehehehe
waiting for nxt update
continue soon
keep writing

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 5:06am | IP Logged
so sweet 

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gangesegb IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
great update...loved cont soon...

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namita25 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 5:13am | IP Logged
awesome updae Appu.....
loved the convo of Geet with Kanta bai...... Kanta bai asking for muscle from Maan ...lolz......n why is not pleased to see his younger bro.....
continue soon....

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-shamima- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 6:19am | IP Logged
First of all congrats on the new thread you deserve it Clap and awe that was so cute and funny when geet saw him and cried mummy and went inside lol and haha awe cute kanta bhai lol she wants muscles and haha geet is too cute lol anyways great update and can't wait to read more Smile

Edited by -shamima- - 20 January 2011 at 6:20am

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Nav2010 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Congratulation 4 new thread please add me to ur list i really like the story. thanks!!!

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SimplyAparajita IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhanu_rekhag

awesome n funny.....
but geet is supposed 2 b in hospital na dear n here she is jumping n running ....
am I missing something here???
hehe. I knew it.. Someone will point it out.. She is discharged and she ran out of sudden reflex.. Lollz.. Assume kar lo buddy.. :) :) :) .. Bhavnao ko samjho... Just imagine.. Or simply consider it as a blooper.. :) :) :) thanks for appreciating my work.. :) :) :)
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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
scroll down.this part is continued in next post
Part 50

Geet teased him showing thumbs down n giggling
But her hands knockd down a bag of baking soda
Geet ws now white beauty
Her hair wer white along with her face and dress.
Geet yelledmaan and closed the automatic door of the kitchen from remote in her hand
Annie and aarav stood there all confused.
She went behind him.
Maan gave her a victorious smile, which she hated the most.
She grabbed the white sauce bowl.
And threw it on him.
And laughed teasing him.
This was enough for great msk.
His anger fumed breaking his limits..
He grabbed her hands pushing them towards her back.
Geet was scared.
He opened her hair.
Took the butter from pan and greased her hair.
Took the ketchup bottle and decorated her white face with red sauce.
took some cheese flakes and made two horns on her head.
Took some coriander leaves and garnished the pudding of her face with them.
Took the hot chocolate and rubbed it on both her cheeks making her look like a clown.
And at last took the cherry and stuck it in her nose ring.
And made her stand in front of mirror,
She yelled maan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and walked behind him.
Who ran out in the same condition
Dadi ma and aarav were laughing at the top of their voice seeing this condition of maaneet.
annie came out of her room listening the laughs.
she had applied her cucumber face pack with cucumber slices on her face.
maan and geet came across her.
they yelled,all horrified seeing her.
where as annie who had the most shrilled voice yelled more louder breaking the window pans from her sound seeing them
aarav and dadi ma were getting crazy laughing
But suddenly anurag came and noticing maaneet all dressed up for comedy show and annie all screaming like crazy, he came towards geet.
but maan came in front of her.
anurag made a fuss saying thatis ladki ne to ghar ko chidiya ghar bana diya hai.
na jane ur kya kua gul khilayegi

and angrily left the place
geet was in tears.
maan took her hand lovingly and said ignore him and they left the place.
dadi ma asked nakul kaka to arrange the dinner on table
the dinner was arranged on dinner table.
Maaneet changed their dresses and came down the dinner table.
Aarav, annie, anurag, smita, dadima were all waiting at dining table.
Nakul kaka was serving.
Geet madam came to her chair in punjabi style and sat there with a thud making a creaking noise with chair.
The whole posh and formal family looked at her amused.
Geet feeling a bit odd showed her 32 white teeth to aarav who smiled at her.
Maan dint like it.
Chinese cuisine was served.
Geet looked at the dishes.
Though geet was very intelligent
But ofcource she was a village girl who knew to do things her way.
Every one tied their napkins.
Geet followed the high people of high society.
Geet was uncomfortable with silence and was unable to tie the napkin.
Maan made her comfortable by holding her hands and tied the napkin.
Geet looked at his assuring eyes and smiled
Every one served the spring rolls with tongs from the mash.
Geet also tried but failed.
Anurag looked at his"so called daughter in law" with fuss.
Geet was struggling to hold the tongs.
Maan who was calm,
Held her hands and taught her how to serve.
Every one started eating with fork and knife.
Geet too tried but her ishtyle made a lot of noise.
She managed to eat one bite.
She utteredbabaji ye kya chewing gum hai
Isme to namak mirch bhi nahi hai
Humare hoshiyarpur ke paranthe bhi is se tasty hai

She was about to go to get pepper anurag interrupted
khamdani ladkiya table aise nahi chhodti
Ask nakul he will get it

Geet felt more uncomfy
Maan grinded his teeth because of his father
Geet angrily took the knife and pierced the fork in roll
Poor roll.
It was getting on her nerves
Maan left his food to teach her.
But our kudi got more angry at roll.
chadangi nahi is ko
Ab to meri izat ka sawal hai.
Jo bole so nihal
shat shri aakal
sab nu dikha dungi
sikhni hu punjab di
babaji meri madad karo

she was constantly yelling, she literally forgot the world arround her.
All that which mattered to geet handa..oops geet maan singh khurana was she and that spring role.
She was a soldier at border fighting against her enemy country that is spring role
every one was now looking at her
anurag angry
smita blank
dadi ma confused
annie and aarav excited cheering their bhabi in this war
and worst case in this war was MSK.
He was wearing an idiotic smile on his face and was trying to stop his stubborn wifey

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 20 January 2011 at 7:46am

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