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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 12:06am | IP Logged
happened 2 read ur ff....
i loved it a lot
its amazing

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
These were really sweet memories
Loved them

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
interestin
will try 2 catch up ur ff

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 12:26am | IP Logged
PART 49

Bitter memories started to hover in his mind.
he tried to escape them.
he looked at his titan sports watch which beamed status and perfection"oh shit!
maan raat ke 9 baj gaye hai
tu pichle 11 hours se yaha baitha hai
meri motu ne lunch and dinner bhi nahi kiya hoga
aaj to wo dinner me surely meko khayegi. bina roast kiye and namak mirch bhi nahi dalegi.
oh my gosh..
Maan! you are maan singh khurana.
mat dar yar sher hai tu.
par geet to sherni hai."

maan thinking and self talking like geet was funny but he was totally painted in her color
At home it was a routine affair to have dinner at 10 or 11.Maan reached home
he kept his fingers closed thinking whether he will sleep in corridor tonight or on floor or straight out of house.
anurag was out of town trying to control media and press and trying to get his lawyers up to date with the fact that he was not involved in this honour killing attempt
smita who was some what guilty decided to be out of maan's sight
geet was discharged
maan came in.
he found dadima,annie and aarav sitting on dining table
[well aarav is his younger brother who just came from USA completing his studies]
maan was not much pleased to see aarav.
Aarav and annie hugged him.
he hugged them and said dadi ma geet kaha hai.
Annie pulled his leg"bhai itne hi desperate the bhabi se milne ko to bhabi ko us meeting me hi bhej deti,jaha se aa rahe ho."
maan gave her his most wierd look

confused+irritated+blushing

suddenly geet came out of the kitchen

looked at maan.

his shirt 3 buttons were open, revealing his bare shaved chest.

his tie was loose hanging down.
His waist coat was loosened and his shirt sleeves were folded upto quarter

His hair were all combed back.[water effect]
over all he looked total macho.
geet yelled mummyyyyyy[/color] and ran inside the kitchen.


maan stood confused so all the members annie and aarav broke into laughter
Maan dint know how to react..
within a fraction of seconds, there was a noise in kitchen of dropping of utensils as if someone has dashed in to them..
dadi ma laughed maan vadi jhali hai teri geet.
maan blushed and went towards geet, ignoring naughty teasing remarks of his siblings.
he saw geet sitting on slab, eating apple and giggling telling kanta bai aap hi batao na ,wo aise ghumega to me kya karungi..
Chee chee babaji..
unhe to bilkul bhi sharam nahi hai..
Aise bhi koi nangu pungu apni muskel[muscle] dikhata ghumta hai.
use nahi pata wo kitna hot shot hai..
. Maan would have died for those beautiful looks she had.
kanta bai saidbbjee muskel kya hoti hai
maan was standing and leaning against the wall listening to their convo.
geet dint notice it

muskel kya hoti hai..
ummm haan..
kanta bai muskel hoti hai, wo, jo har ek me hoti hai..
aur jisme nahi hoti wo mar jata hai.
Aur puri duniya me har wo insan jo bohat mehanat karke bada aadmi banta hah.
uske pass sabse jyada muskel hoti hai

bbjee matlb muskel hone se sab log bada banta hai.
ha kanta bai..
Bbjee maan baba bohat bada aadmi hai na.
ha kanta bai..
unke pass to bohat muskel ho ga na
ha kanta bai saying this geet blushed at her thought
unse keh ke hume bhi thoda muskel dilwa do na bbjee.
Geet sat confused.
maan's presence, which was noticed by kanta bai.
She ran to maan, sahib ji!
Hum aap ko bachpan se pala hai.
Hum ko bhi thoda sa muskel de di jiye?

maan tried to maintain a stern look but failed. kanta bai aap ka kaam ho gaya na
chaliye aap ghar jaiy

kanta bai left the place disheartened.
maan moved to geet, who inched backward just to find wall behind her.
she was caught.
maan placed her trembling hand on his bare chest and asks mere pass kitni muskel hai?
geet blushed.
she snapped her hand away.
maan lifted her chin with his index finger.
geet blurted outbbjee please jaiye
kya!!
Mera matlab hai sahib ji

Maan snappedgeet
Wo me kanta bai
Maan turned away angrily
Geet whispered slightlymaan
A smile beamed on his stern face.
And she screamedsirrrrrrrrr
Maan turned behind to grab her, but she was quick enough to move away
& teased him showing thumbs down
precap:cat and dog fight

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 20 January 2011 at 2:22am

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 2:09am | IP Logged
This turning out to be comedy/intense romantic and .....

Luved it


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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Frenz sorry for small update:.. I promise there will be one more update today in the evening.. Plish leave some lovely comments... Plish...

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