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TeRi ZiNdAgI MeRI ZiNdAgI HaI#MaAnEeT#2#part 54 page 23 (Page 22)

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 9:43pm | IP Logged
Thanx dear
Originally posted by shah10

great updte

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Yup buddy..i know i gave a long gap... But am glad that you stuck by my ff for so long.. Thanx....and thanx i am glad you liked it
Originally posted by mallu.crowe20

u r back
update after a long long time
niceeee update
do continue

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Posted: 05 April 2011 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Nahi yar...how can i forget you all.....its better to be late then never and so i am back.... :) :) thanx :)
Originally posted by nonabebu

atleast tumne update to kia maine socha tum to bhool hi gayi hamein thanks for the update nice one
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
marvelous update
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 7:05am | IP Logged
OMG.....so finally u updated after wat feels like eternity...It was a nice part bt u need to give us a super loooonnnnnnnnnngggggggggggg update for waiting so patiently....newayz luvd it!! Now plzz cont soon....n add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
lovely update.....

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 7:40am | IP Logged
heyyyyyyyyy welcome back yaar
missed uuuuuuuuu
n awesomeeeeee
waiting for maan 2 see geet like this n 
wt is tht fighting part ????????

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
PART 54

Geet got ready
annie and dadima complimented her for her beauty..

She blushed..

Aarav saw geet..he was stunned..

He came to her and saidgeet you look awesome

geet without caring to look at him
uttered"dunn call me by name am your bhabi..speak with some respect"

it was like someone slapped aarav with these words..aarav closed his eyes and went away

geet was sitting on roof wall and looking at moon in the sky adoringly and thinking about maaneet moments...

Her face was reflecting moon light and the bluish glow on her face made her epitome of beauty..

Suddenly she received a blank message from maan's cell

she messaged a kissing smiley with heart..

Reply came"geet am getting bored here.. Plish come shona"

geet wondered maan never types messages in this stylebut she ignored

geet replied-maan but you strictly said not to come there

reply came-stop questioning and hurry up..emergency

Geet got scared..

She called his number

but other side had cut the number and said-lot of noise here so i wont talk..you just come..

Geet ran barefooted
her heart was sinking and getting scary thoughts

Sweat was dripping from her beautiful face

Her mind was blocked so she dint even care to inform anyone and straight away ran into the party where only men were there drinking and enjoying

No maan was there

Suddenly lights went off and someone held her waist and gently brushed the hairs on her shoulder

Geet thought its maan

But then the voice said"i am back sweety"

geet stood rooted as if she was a statue of rock and as if her world collapsed at that moment

she dint know how to react

She pushed him away

All those flashes of past started haunting her

That night which changed her life was as if happening in front of her eyes

She could hear her screams echoing and crying

She tried to push him away but he held her tight

In this struggle her pearl string of the dress broke
and suddenly light was on

VICKY left the place..all the business man gathered arround her..

Geet held the frock tightly to cover herself and her face was held down..

She tried to move but one of the men stopped her

oh so maan singh khurana has arranged entertainment..thats cool..show us what you have got babes..

Geet who was in a trauma sank on the floor with all the tears running down

All those sick men checked her out in a cheap way

Aarav was sitting in corner

vicky was gone..

Maan entered the outhouse..

He saw nakul and said-nakul kaka aapne to kaha tha mujhe koi milne aya hai..but no one was there..
Aur mera phone kaha hai..i cant find it...


Nakul-saheb ji..mujhe to ek admi gate pe bola tha..

Maan-koi gal nahi kaka..budhape me hota hai..

He looked ahead and saw the circle of man gathering arround something

He wondered what it can be

He moved ahead and saw people were hooting and whistling and passing dirty nasty comments

His heart sank with every step he took..he prayedi hope it not annie

when he reaged the center
he was shocked
He Took his coat out..and wrapped it arround geet who was all lost

One of the foreign clients commented mr. Msk why bother so much for these professionals.They know their job
If you want we can arrange a personal lap for you with her

He inched towards geet to pick her up

Maan's eyes were blood shot

He roaredyou son of b@@ch she is my wife.. Stay off

and with this roar the hurt lion maan jumped on that client and hit him hard with whatever he could

He was hell bent upon killing that sick man

maan couldn't even speak properly in anger and he was spitting at him and kicking him

Guards tried to stop maan but if could not

Aarav too tried to be good but he couldnt stop maan from his bashing that client

Geet broke from trance and saw maan beating life out of that foreigner..

She looked at coat she wore and she ran between them to stop her maan from commiting a crime..      
She tried to pull maan back..

But angry young man was no ways stepping down..he was roaring abusing the clients...

He was all gone case when geet pulled him back..and shook him to come in senses

she was all crying..she hugged maan tightly who with tinge of pain and love hugged his geet and announced that he cancelled the project with such filthy clients

he and geet moved out of out house and headed on the road out walking hands in hands together...

Precap-aasmaa se gire and khajur pe aa latkeLOL

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Thanku. .
Apki

aparajita

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 06 April 2011 at 11:10pm

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