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TeRi ZiNdAgI MeRI ZiNdAgI HaI#MaAnEeT#2#part 54 page 23 (Page 16)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa loved it roflROFL literally a war between spring roll  n geet haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaROFLROFL

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
That was awesome update as always...really loved it
gawd hate maan's family...they are just so annoying...
but maan makes up for her....love maan
and maaneet are just so adorable...

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
PART 52

maan went out,aarav got a chance to glance in
he saw geet sobbing.he went near her."bhabi is every thing ok."
maan came back to check out whether she was ok,but stood at the door seeing aarav sitting near geet
he continued,"bhabi, i know brother is arrogant and angry personality.
but you should have thought about it before"

before he could complete his sentence.
geet shot him an angry glare.
Her eyes were blood shot.
aarav was taken aback by the shine in those eyes."how dare you utter a word about my husband.
wo jo bhi hai, jaise bhi hai, mujh se jaise bhi baat karte hai, ye mera problem hai.
tumhara nahi aarav"

maan was delightened by her responce.
she was so protective about her hubby. Aarav still tried to make space for him and tried to clean her tears.
This was enough for maan.
He yelled"aarav!dont you dare to touch her
she is your bhabi and behave like a dewar.
dont cross your limits and yes next time when you come inside our room,first knock the door.
now dont show me your dirty face and get lost"

aarav punched the wall in anger,which made geet jump and left angrily looking at maan.
maan came inside and kept his head on her lap"gith!mujhse naraz ho"
"nahi maan!tum aur me to ek hain aur khud se bhi koi naraz hota hai kya."
"tum itni pyari kyu ho geet"
"kyuki jo log pyare hote hai, unhe sab pyare nazar ate hai, for example my maan"
"geet tomorrow my friends are coming for dinner party.
so i will be at outhouse with my friends
some of business deals are also to be signed.
so dont wait for me go to sleep ok and yeah! Ask annie to avoid coming round that place as i dont trust any one when it comes to my sister"
"will you care if it comes to me"

his face turned pale, he answered,"i care for you to such an extent that if losing my self assures your happiness,then i can.."
before he could complete his sentence geet placed her hand on his mouth"maan! Chup bilkul chup"
suddenly his phone rang again
Again it was written personal
Geet was fuming with irritation
maan went out
Geet started working on her master plan
her self talk started"oye geet! Apne mission ka naam kya rakhu!
Abbe khoti!
Keep it!
Pati parmeshwar ki wapisi"

she opened her cupboard,searching for the shortest possible dress.
She got it"babaji meri raksha karna!"
annie entered in mean time
Geet said without thinking"annie ye dress seducing hai na"
annie burst out into laughter
"annie v r friends
To tu apni bhabi
i mean apni friend ka mazak uda rahi h"

"bhabi ye dress kaha se choti hai!
Full length salwar!
only thing short in it is that it is sleeveless"

They explored annie's room
Annie showed her some short dresses
"Bilkul bhi nahi annie
Tumhare bhaiya bhale hi in sab ko pasand kare par me nahi"
"soch lo bhabi"
"acha theek hai
i will year this white one"

She grabbed a white provoking dress and went to her room
At sam's house
"sam! maine tumhe kitni bar kaha hai
dont call at my phone"
[sam was wearing a hot lingere,but maan dint even bother to give her a look,which annoyed her]
"jaan!relax i thought why not spend some quality time tomorrow"
"Sam!you know what
Mujhe kai baar taajub hota hai
you know the depth of stooping low which i couldnt imagine in my brain is much shallower than your character
kabhi to mujhe doubt hota hai Ke ye do ladkiya mr.Oberoi ki aulad hai ya fir even you dont know who their father is"
"maan!"
"I am a man of promise!
So dont expect any thing from me today as today is only thursday"
Saying this maan went away
On the way he saw a poor small girl selling flowers"saheb ji plij ye gajra le lo madam ji pe bada sajega
Aap ka pyar sari umar khilta aur mehakta rahega in fulo ki tarah"

maan smiled at her
He parked the car n sat at the footpath
Guards tried to shoo away the girl
But he stopped them
Adi tried to explain him for security reasons but he ignored
Girl came running to him with flowers
He took her in his laps.Any one could guess she was hardly 6 years old
Maan looked at her feet
They were bleeding
He asked the guard to bring first aid box
He dressed her feet
she protested
"uncle jaldi karo na
Mere phul sukh jayenge"

she was speaking in her baby tune
He also tried to imitate her baby tune"beti
Nahi sukhenge
kyuki uncle ne ye phool aapki madam ji ke liye kharide hai"

she smiled
She was busy Counting the gajras and maan was busy looking at her innocently
he asked,"
Naam kya hai tumhara"
she said"uncle 107 rupee ho gaye"
he repeated his question,patting her back and tying her pony properly.
"geet" she said
he was so so so happy.
"geet beta!aap ke shoes kaha hai"
"wo mere baba hai na, wo sharab pite hai.
Paisa khatam ho gaya! Ab agli diwali pe kharidungi.
Dactar sahb ne kaha h ki ma ko kankar[cancer] h.
Dawai ke liye paisa chaiye saheb ji.
Ma jo bhi paisa lati hai kama ke, baba le jate hai, meri ma bemar hai, meko paise de do.
plij meko jana hai"
Tears welled up in maan's eyes.

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:11am | IP Logged
lovely update. i don't know why.. but does maan love geet? 
anyway thats for u to explain in future parts. lovely update.
loved it to bits
pls pls pls update soon
can't wait for more
xxxxxx


Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 26 January 2011 at 7:14am

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
lovely update yar..so sweet..why s maan seeing that samerra?
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 8:24am | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
oh dear tht was such a touching story yaar
knw tht maan will surely help her
n awesomeeeee update
n want 2 see wt maan will do after seeing geet dressed sooo hotlyyyyyy
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well dear tears welled up in my eyes Cry
continue soon


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