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TeRi ZiNdAgI MeRI ZiNdAgI HaI#MaAnEeT#2#part 54 page 23 (Page 12)

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
awesome one..really loved the dinner and kitchen part ..cant stop laughing ... superbROFL

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nahtani88 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged
CONT soon
SahSah IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Hey aparajita....that was awesome update as always.....loved it
maan and geet have time of lifetime and me enjoying it...
well the precap des not look so hopeful
.hayaat. IF-Addictz

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 6:36pm | IP Logged

Nice update dear
SimplyAparajita IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
part 51

Aarav made a baby face.
Maan's frustration was clearly evident on his face by now. he excused himself from the table along with aarav .both of them headed to the washroom and cleaned themselves
at dining table
Anurag gave an angry glare to geet who was about to burst into tears. She tried to speak for herself.
But anurag showed him his hand,"don't say a word Mrs. Khurana! Your mannerism is praise-worthy, your actions speak much louder than your words" and he angrily left the table .dadima couldn't say a word.
She helplessly got up and went to her room.
Annie looked at geet and uttered," bhabi whatever happened was so unfortunate. am sorry for this."
She also left.     
So it was only geet and smita on the table.
Silence crept in the room.
Smita decided to break the silence.
She said with arrogance,"geet! Ye gale me diamond set, and this heavy expensive set won't do you much favor in looking civilized.
You can trap maan by these accessories but not buy the standard and respect in societies.
Even nakul knows how to eat with fork and knife.
I just don't know one thing, maan ko sirf charity cases hi kyu milte hai"
Saying this she hastily left the table.
Everybody's words were haunting geet.
She felt as if she skipped a beat.
A tear twinkled down her eyes and fell on the plate after kissing her cheeks.

But this was not enough.
All the tears welled up in her big brown eyes. Maan and aarav came back.
She rubbed her eyes. Aarav knew she was crying.
Maan gently asked her,"what happened shona?"
Geet politely replies" nothing,
Something just went inside my eyes"
Maan was not convinced.
Aarav tried to lighten up the atmosphere,"oh yeah! That's a possibility bhabi.
The thing which can land on me and maan
Can do some work on your eyes too"
Geet understood the sarcasm and smiled.
Maan did not like her being friendly with him.Infact the sight of aarav was enough to boil his blood.Aarav excused himself seeing the tough looks maan was giving him.
After aarav left, maan lifted geet in his arms and gave her the plate.
They went in balcony and sat on the swing.
Maan took the knife in one hand and fork in another,"ab meri shirt ko dinner to kara diya, mujhe bhi kara do meri little angel"
He smiled at geet and took her hands in his.
And step by step, gently, taught her the eating manners.
Both ate contently and talked to stars and moons.
Maan felt geet getting limp in his arms.
He looked at her, she was asleep.
He lifted her up and took her to the bed room and placed her gently on the bed, in between the cushions. He was about to move but geet's hands which were crossed around his neck pulled her close.
Maan smiled and uttered "pagli"
And tugged her in blanket and slipped beside her.
Next morning
Geet got up to find no maan
She went out and saw the gym door open.
She sneaked inside.
But she went the scent in air was not known
It was pretty dark.
Geet could feel some heavy breathes in the room.
She thought may be maan has changed his perfume.
She tapped on the shoulder.
And spoke up,hugging him"maan"     
Light turned on.
Her jaw dropped all open.
It was aarav
Geet dint knew how to react.
She moved out as fast as she could.
And while moving she collided into maan at entrance.
He asked,"kya hua geet?"
She dint utter a word and hugged him tight.
Maan lifted her up and took her to bed room.
Maan's cell rang.
It was 5 in the morning.
Geet knitted her eyebrows at the screen as it was written "personal"
She was about to pick up but maan snatched the phone and went out
Geet sat feeling weird.
Maan came after 5 minutes
Geet asked,"Whose call was it?"
Maan stammered,"a client."

And angrily shoved her to corner of the room and yelled at her,"stop spying on me.
Dont interfare in my job.
Its none of your business"
Geet wanted to scream and run away, looking at his fierce eyes,she was scared and hurt as she knew he was lying, there was no client.
But she trusted him. So she accepted his lie.
Geet came near him and nibbled with his ear lobe, trying to seduce him and lighten up his mood.
But Maan was losing his grip on his emotions.
Suddenly he was reminded of armaan's words
He felt frustrated and agitated on his destiny.
But he couldn't take his frustration out on geet.
He politely pushed her away but geet commandingly pulled him back.
Maan got up with a jerk, and immediately left the room.
Geet sat there all confused
She thought"does he love me?
Why is he stopping me from getting close?
Its my right"

She wanted to cry any moment.

"what if he is having second thoughts about our marriage?
Or he is bored of me and i dont fascinate him much now
he likes those short short dress wali bimbos
I have to save my marriage"
she felt herself trapped in quagmire of materialistic life.
precap: dhan tanen

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 25 January 2011 at 6:37am

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FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged
lovely update. sorry for not commenting… will be bc with long comments.
lovely update.

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 6:49am | IP Logged
lovely update yaar..awsome one !! who is maan talking to ??

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..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
loved it yaar but y is maan removing sameera's anger on geet

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