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FF(M&G)"Two broken hearts fall in love" ~THREAD 1~ (Page 8)

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zeynab111

Note: hey guys, im afghan so i have learned how to understand hindi but when it comes to speaking it i am not that great.  so plz excuse me or even correct me in places where i use hindi wrong.

recap: 

All maan  could do at that moment was to get away from sameera's face.  He never wants to see her face again.  Maan gets into the car and turns the car on and hits the accelerator so hard that car screeches and drives away.

Sameera: Maan its better this way.  Please if not now, but one day forgive me.

She says that to herself as she watches Maan drive away into the darkness of the night.  


Part:2

"Burning the memories"

Maan got out of the car. Out of the places he could of have gone he came here. Love filled the air'and it was sickening to him.  

His blood was boiling. He had never been used in his life.  He was MAAN SINGH KURANA. No one ever dared to treat him like dirt.  He was the gem of every girls eyes.  He stayed away from girls.  Being the quite type that he was, until one day Sameera caught his eye and slowly he lost his heart to her.

He remembers his first encounter with her, his first date, his first kiss'(all their memories of them together playing back in his mind).

His emotions and pain were bottling up inside'he had to let them out or else he would burst.

Maan:KYUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!

He falls on his knees'..Pain clearly written on his eyes'.in his face'

Maan: Sameera!!!!!!!!!!!!  Tum mere saat isa kyu Kya? Mere pyaar main kaha khami thi?

For the first time in my life I feel so low, so hurt that I can't express in words.  

God, all my life I have been alone.  The one time I fall in love and decide to share my life with someone, why do u do this me? Why show me how it feels like and then snatch my happiness and dreams away'Kyuuuuuuuuuuuuu???

From this day on I will never trust any woman in my life. Curse woman with their goddamn beauty to hell. Behind every beautiful face lies a monster and I have found out the hard way. Never again will I believe in love. Never again will I fall in love.

He gets up goes inside the yacht.  There are roses, hearts, and candles everywhere.  This was where Maan was going to propose.  (You guys might be wondering why the hell Maan comes here..keep reading you will find out).

Maan came here to remind himself' and engrave the pain of falling in love in his heart forever.  He never wants to feel weak in front of anyone again.  He will not make himself vulnerable again.  He will never forget the pain. But he will forget one thing.  THE MEMORIES.

Maan: mujhe tum ko bhoolna haonga!!! (I will have to forget you)

main tumhe bhool jaonga (I will forget you) (which ever you wanted to say and when you curse some one you ues TUM not AAP)
 
He shatters anything that he can find.All the candels all the roses'

Main kahbi pyaar nahi karoga!!!

Tum mere liye mar chuki ho!!!(you are dead to me).

Maan takes out Sameera's picture from his wallet.  He takes out a match and then burns the picture. The picture falls into the ground and soon the room that was once decorated with love and passion is now burning.

Maan watches how he burns Sameera and every memory of her from his heart.  He burns the feelings that comes with love.  He is purifying his heart from the darkness that was suffocating him. 

He gets out of the yacht'and watches it burn down and sink'.it was like he was watching what was happening in his heart play right in front of him.

Maan: Love makes you feel like your in paradise. But that lasts only for a few seconds. Soon you realize your sinking real low'down a dark abyss. Tonight I have realized loves true nature. Never will I fall in love again. Never'.. (Maan just walks away from the scene).


precap: 4 years leap.  Maaneet's first encounter...

Maan says. " stop trying to kill yourself".

 
hey don't mind
but I have doen a few corrections they are in red and my quotes are in magenta
hope you don't mind,
 
you wrote wellClapClapClap
nice FFClapClapClap
stick to English if you are not comfortable with Hindi
 
and add me to your pm list

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 8:04am | IP Logged
wow that was really nice update can u plz add me in pm list 

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

Originally posted by zeynab111

Note: hey guys, im afghan so i have learned how to understand hindi but when it comes to speaking it i am not that great.  so plz excuse me or even correct me in places where i use hindi wrong.

recap: 

All maan  could do at that moment was to get away from sameera's face.  He never wants to see her face again.  Maan gets into the car and turns the car on and hits the accelerator so hard that car screeches and drives away.

Sameera: Maan its better this way.  Please if not now, but one day forgive me.

She says that to herself as she watches Maan drive away into the darkness of the night.  


Part:2

"Burning the memories"

Maan got out of the car. Out of the places he could of have gone he came here. Love filled the air'and it was sickening to him.  

His blood was boiling. He had never been used in his life.  He was MAAN SINGH KURANA. No one ever dared to treat him like dirt.  He was the gem of every girls eyes.  He stayed away from girls.  Being the quite type that he was, until one day Sameera caught his eye and slowly he lost his heart to her.

He remembers his first encounter with her, his first date, his first kiss'(all their memories of them together playing back in his mind).

His emotions and pain were bottling up inside'he had to let them out or else he would burst.

Maan:KYUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!

He falls on his knees'..Pain clearly written on his eyes'.in his face'

Maan: Sameera!!!!!!!!!!!!  Tum mere saat isa kyu Kya? Mere pyaar main kaha khami thi?

For the first time in my life I feel so low, so hurt that I can't express in words.  

God, all my life I have been alone.  The one time I fall in love and decide to share my life with someone, why do u do this me? Why show me how it feels like and then snatch my happiness and dreams away'Kyuuuuuuuuuuuuu???

From this day on I will never trust any woman in my life. Curse woman with their goddamn beauty to hell. Behind every beautiful face lies a monster and I have found out the hard way. Never again will I believe in love. Never again will I fall in love.

He gets up goes inside the yacht.  There are roses, hearts, and candles everywhere.  This was where Maan was going to propose.  (You guys might be wondering why the hell Maan comes here..keep reading you will find out).

Maan came here to remind himself' and engrave the pain of falling in love in his heart forever.  He never wants to feel weak in front of anyone again.  He will not make himself vulnerable again.  He will never forget the pain. But he will forget one thing.  THE MEMORIES.

Maan: mujhe tum ko bhoolna haonga!!! (I will have to forget you)

main tumhe bhool jaonga (I will forget you) (which ever you wanted to say and when you curse some one you ues TUM not AAP)
 
He shatters anything that he can find.All the candels all the roses'

Main kahbi pyaar nahi karoga!!!

Tum mere liye mar chuki ho!!!(you are dead to me).

Maan takes out Sameera's picture from his wallet.  He takes out a match and then burns the picture. The picture falls into the ground and soon the room that was once decorated with love and passion is now burning.

Maan watches how he burns Sameera and every memory of her from his heart.  He burns the feelings that comes with love.  He is purifying his heart from the darkness that was suffocating him. 

He gets out of the yacht'and watches it burn down and sink'.it was like he was watching what was happening in his heart play right in front of him.

Maan: Love makes you feel like your in paradise. But that lasts only for a few seconds. Soon you realize your sinking real low'down a dark abyss. Tonight I have realized loves true nature. Never will I fall in love again. Never'.. (Maan just walks away from the scene).


precap: 4 years leap.  Maaneet's first encounter...

Maan says. " stop trying to kill yourself".

 
hey don't mind
but I have doen a few corrections they are in red and my quotes are in magenta
hope you don't mind,
 
you wrote wellClapClapClap
nice FFClapClapClap
stick to English if you are not comfortable with Hindi
 
and add me to your pm list

hey no i dont mind. thx for correcting me.  i thought by using hindi it would give it a more nicer effect and emphasis.

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 10:00am | IP Logged
recap:

He gets out of the yacht'and watches it burn down and sink'.it was like he was watching what was happening in his heart play right in front of him.

Maan: Love makes you feel like your in paradise. But that lasts only for a few seconds. Soon you realize your sinking real low'down a dark abyss. Tonight I have realized loves true nature. Never will I fall in love again. Never'.. (Maan just walks away from the scene).

Part 3:

"Their first encounter"
4 years later'(Maan was 22 when Sameera broke his heart and now he is 26 years old).
 
Maan is out in a forest.  Near the ocean aswell.  When he needs to get away from life and reality he comes here. Surrounded by mother nature.  He was chopping wood getting his anger and frustration out of the poor wood.  He has no idea why he felt mad and frustrated.  His life has been feeling like this for 4 years now.  He has become a huge business tycoon'but still under that hard core tough guy look something is missing.  He is not happy. 
 
Girl: Kyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!
 
Maan snapped out of his thought something about that scream about that word sounded familiar.  It was a sound of pain. 
 
At first Maan thought his mind was playing a trick on him'trying to remind him of his past, which he has tried to forget. 
 
But his heart did not want to accept that'
 
He decides to check it out'
 
He is near the ocean now'he sees a small figure of a girl'almost like a shadow'and it appears to be slowly disappearing'
 
Maan without thinking without having any reason runs into the water. After a minute of searching he pops out of the water with the girl in his arms.


 
(imagine that its night time though...LOL)

Maan just stood their mezmorized by the big brown eyes that was looking at him in shock. But there was more to these eyes than just shock'there was pain. Something he had felt 4 years ago'something he still feels and has to live with everyday. 
 
He snaps out of his thought and carries the girl out of the water.
 
He puts the girl on the ground and starts to boil in anger.
 
Maan: What the hell were you trying to do?
 
Girl: ummm
 
Maan: you didn't answer my question
 
Girl: leave me alone (she tries to run into the ocean again')
 
Maan: Stop trying to kill yourself
 
Girl: Who r you? And why do you care what happens to me when not even the so-called love of my life gives a damn about me'?
 
Maan: I do not care what your personal problems are, but that does not mean you can get to kill yourself! Everybody has problems' you think you are the only one that has problems???
 
Girl: Why are you screaming and give me a lecture. I don't even know you.  Why don't you just leave me alone. Please let me end my pain'please'
 
Maan: You are not going to kill yourself. People are going to think I may have killed you. If you want to die so much go die somewhere else.
 
That's all it took for Geet to shatter into a million pieces again.  Not even a stranger has mercy on her or cares for her.  Who was she kidding. her own family and the love of her life does not care for her than how will a stranger care for her.  All Geet ever wanted was to be loved by at least someone in this world'Why did she always have to be and feel alone.
 
As these ran through her thoughts she slowly looses consciousness. 

pre-cap

Maan: What am i doing. I don't even know the girl's name but i am still helping her.

Previous Part ~ Burning the memories

Next part~How did i get myself into this mess

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Edited by zeynab111 - 18 January 2011 at 11:26am

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