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FF(M&G)"Two broken hearts fall in love" ~THREAD 1~ (Page 123)

Mrs.ZSK IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
hey guys i am updating right nowBig smile...

ur wait will end soon!

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:13pm | IP Logged
Yiipieeeeeeee Waitingggg!Day Dreaming

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:41pm | IP Logged
Maan was outraged. How did Vicky know what he was going to ask? Did he see him at the restaurant?
Maan was so angry he gets his phone and smashes it against the wall.
Maan: I will deal with you Vicky when I get home!
I just need to find out what happened to geet? Who or what brought tears in her eyes.


"An unexpected turn of events"

He was running turning left and right.  Up and down like his life was at stake.  It was getting dark and nighttime was creeping in.
"Geet kaha ho tum?"
Please God just let me see her once.  That is all I ask from you.
Maan stops out of shock.  He couldn't believe what he just said.
Did I just ask something from God??? How it this possible? I have never believed in God'than how did I a moment ago ask something from him.
He starts to take steps back from the unbelievable shock. 
Vicky's words echoed is his head "geet is changing you"?
The word of his conscious echoed in his head "you can lie to everyone else but you can't lie to yourself".
Maan just screams out of frustration "AHHHHHHHHH'What is happening to me!!!
Geet was soaking wet and cold.  She felt lost and disoriented.  She did not know what way she was going.  More realistically she did not know where she was heading in life'in her life.  What did she have to live for when her memories or loneliness continues to torment her every second of her life?
She was dragging her body across the dark alley.  She was so lost from reality that she didn't even know she was heading into a bad gang of guys territory.
First guy: kya mal hai bhai?
Second guy: (starts whistling) she is pretty than avantika.
Geet doesn't even notice their presence let alone what they were saying.
Third guy comes near geet and says " oyeee' where do you think you are going meri munni".
Geet still doesn't realize that she is in danger.  All she replies is that "mere naam munni nahi hai, geet hai".
All the guys start laughing. 
Fourth guy: Achaa'I don't think so. I thought I met you before and you even sang a song for me'right guys.
You don't remember?
Guys lets help her out.  What song was it that she sang for me?
All the guys together said: "Munni bad name hui darling tere liye" and all start laughing.
That is when it finally registers to geet that she is in danger.
She gets all the energy she had in her and kicks the guy in the stomach.
"next time register geet's name with the first girl who ever kicked you"!
and that is when she starts to run!
Fourth guy: GET HERRRRRRR!
They get in their motorcycles and start to chase her. 
Geet runs and runs.  But the motorcycle gang catches up to her and starts to encircle around her and were staring at her like she was the biggest diamond ever found.
Fourth guy: kaha jarahe ho?(He says with a lustful smile).
Maan was walking around lost in his thoughts and fighting with his emotions.  But that is when his eyes caught something.
He bends down and sees it's a blue dupatta.
Maan: This looks just like geet's dupatta that she wore today.
Maan's heart felt like it skipped a beat.  His heart did not want to accept the fact that she is in danger.
He get's up and hear's a girls scream.
Maan screams: Geet!!! I will save you.
Geet manages to get away after falling and hiding for 15 minutes.  She was getting tired.  She looked a mess like she had escaped from a mad house.  But she had to keep on going if she wanted to save her life.  Even though she did not want to live in this world, she did not want to have a horrible and horrendous death, especially in the hands of dirty ill hearted gang members.
It was dark and she did not even know where she was going. She was running and all of a sudden she hits something very hard, but warm and familiar. 
He turns around and see's geet.
Maan: geet'
She looked horrible.  She had tears running down her eyes.  Her clothes were wet and muddy and her hands looked scrapped probably from falling down so much.
Geet: maan please help me?(geet helplessly cries)
That is when the motorcycle gang finally catches up to geet.
Fourth guy: Oyee let her go'I saw her first.  Get your own item for tonight because she is all '
Before he could even finish his sentence he was flying out of his motorcycle.
The other guys just by looking at maan's bloodshot eyes were screaming inside of fear.  But that didn't stop them from trying to beat maan up.
Except they were no match for maan and his anger.  He took out all his anger all his frustration on those gang members like they were punch bags.
They had to take all the energy that was left in them to run away.
Maan turns and hugs geet.
Maan: Geet are you okay? Did they touch you?
Geet was in shock. She couldn't believe she escaped.  And she couldn't even believe more that it was maan who saved her and is hugging and comforting her right now.  Tears were coming down her eyes. 
All she did was whisper in his ears; "I won't give in" before loosing cautiousness and her body goes limp.
Maan: Geet wake up'.please wake up.
It was no use geet had slipped into unconsciousness.  What little energy was left after running away from the gang members was not enough to battle with her emotions and feelings for maan, and as a result she succumbs to unconsciousness. 
Maan picks her up and takes inside an abandoned shack.  Maan couldn't call for help because he had smashed his cell phone against the wall due to his anger earlier in the day.
Maan lies geet down on the bed and puts her bag on the side and just takes in her distraught image.
Maan: She has gone through so much tonight and therefore probably became unconscious. Hopefully she will wake up by morning when she gets enough rest.
Maan bends down and touches geet's forehead.
Maan: Thank God she is not running a fever.
But he notices that she is very cold since her clothes were wet.
Maan takes off his shirt and turns off the light of the room and changes geet's clothes.
This just brought back memories of how he first met geet in the forest.
She was in the same distressed situation except this time she was trying to save her life instead of ending her life and both times fate had brought geet into his arms.
Maan snaps out of his thoughts and tries to turn the lights back on, but accidently knocks over geet's bag.
He finally manages to turn on the lights and when he does he notices that he knocked over geet's bag. 
As he starts to put her stuff back inside something catches his eyes.
A small journal in a very bad condition had opened up to a page with a picture of geet' a happy and jolly geet not the geet that looked distressed.  What caught maan's attention even more was the fact that the picture was ripped.  The other half of the picture, which appeared to be someone next to geet, was ripped out.
There was a caption under it in pure red ink that read " I'm slipping away all because of you.  I'm empty with nothing left to live for because of you.  This geet in this picture died because of you!"
Maan's hands caressed the lines and gasped.  The red colored lines he thought was red ink was actually blood.
He shoots a glance at geet and back at the geet in the picture.  He couldn't believe that these two were the same person.
Maan: The geet in the picture looked so happy filled with hopes and dreams and a reason for living, while the geet now dragged through life just to get through it.
That  rang a bell in both maan's head and heart.  This was the same story of maan's life. Maan's heart felt a similar pain and suffering of what geet had described in the caption.  The pain and heartbreak he went through because of Sameera.
Maan quickly just throws the journal to the side as it brought back memories of his pain and suffering.
Maan: I don't want to relive my pain.  I don't. (maan whispers with pain in his voice).
But geet what happened to you?


Maan slowly walks back up to the journal and his hand even shakes a little as he bends towards it to pick it up.

He finally picks it back up and sits on a chair.  He takes in a deep breath and embraces himself for whatever is in store in this journal.
(Shocked what's in that journal? can anyone guess?LOL)

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Previous Part~Old Memories
Next Part~Geet's Journal

Edited by zeynab111 - 10 March 2011 at 3:34pm

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..shreyaa.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:45pm | IP Logged
Yayyy mne 1st one hehe
Awesome update
loved it
amazing part
lmao geet kicked that guy haha
strong sherni geet..lolz
awhh soo cute maan cares for her soo much
hmm finally he got to know its not only him who has suffered from pain
and hayee i guess there's abt maan in the journal.lolz
hope so
cont soon thank u so much!

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 04 March 2011 at 9:28pm

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:57pm | IP Logged
Awesome update..Thumbs Up.........story is picking up pace

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mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 7:05pm | IP Logged
wow Geet real kick they
guys that was hilariousROFL
so finally Maan finding
about  Geet that its  not
only him who heard heartbreak
wonderful update pls cont soonnn
thanks pm

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Sabmeratu. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
Luvly update
Yes geet ran as fast as she can n she kicked em in the shin
Glad dat Maan saved her
Now Maan knows he'z not da only 1 hu'z depressed
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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cyum321 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
WONDERFUL!!!! Now time for Geet's Past

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