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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 85)

.SilentPrincess IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged

A very nice update... Ir' good to see their getting back together, and accpepting the relationship... And they go the falls, u described it very beautifully i picturisize it... And then comes the Pani puri stall... Mayank really resembled Diya in this situation... LOL funny scene...

Everything was going so smooth and then bang! comes the  interestign part...I though they were having a fight about why Mayank didn't take to the long drive, but this was worse... He didn't divorce her... Shocked as shocking it seems like, i don't feel affected by it.. becaus emaybe fysiclally he may not have divorced her but sshe's physically out of his mind and heart... The one he cares for now is Nupur he's learning to accept the relationship... But Nupur state just ruined everything...Sajjal is it necessary toh make ur readers cry in every update? Ermm
But this was a very different but awesome update... I think now the relation or the way they look at eahc other will  change a bit? or no? Tongue It will at least change them in oene way or the other...!
It was a bit short, you usually write long ones... But the end of the part was perfect, if it had been any scene afte that it woudl look inaporiate...
But amazing part, even though it was a sad one i'm smiling... Finally Mayank is moving on, not jsut saying but doing... Embarrassed

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drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
the start was so perfect.....the pani pori n the water fall...n thn the diya.....
but agin
theses two people on this earth can never let go the past....thy always felt tht holding it will make it cum back.......
haaa..she agin need to face the reality....i dont love u trying.....pata nhi hurts.....
but atleast he knew he doesnt want to hold his past now....i hope she can find peace
gr8 update

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.SilentPrincess IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mehak

ish! Angry LOL resss..


OMG! so the past again knocks and mayank had not signed the divorce papers..MAN! what else worse could nupur face.

U very well know that i am completely against nupur for what she did to mayank, but then again i think she is getting what she thought was true. She thought mayank genuinely loved piya, and she should bring them together, so now she has to face all..HE DID LOVE HER! and the reality is coming in front of her just as she imagined. While planning other's life she forgot that she may fall in that plan herself.

sorry if i am sounding mean towards nupur, but i just can't sympathize with's her fault!

rest it was excellent writing! vivid descriptions and just a simply perfect update, just like my princess..

Cont. soon and God Bless..

Nice comment Kinza but I can't completly agree with u on a certain things...I don't think whatever she did was wrong... How is it her fault anyways... She really loved him, and she still does... And if giving the man she loved the most his hapiness...what is wrong with it... Yes because of that she's suffering now, but what if she then told him i love you, and he was head over heels in lvoe woth Piya.. Wouldn't she be shattered then too...?It wouldn't make a difference....
If she's suffering its her fate she would either way be hurt... He might have accepted her then, but his heart and mind would be with Piya, and she would have been deeply hurt then too... Then whos fault is it? Nupur for loving Mayank or Mayank for loving Piya...
Sorry if this sound really mean, but i don't know why Nupur is the one to blame for her suffering...

Edited by princez_94 - 25 March 2011 at 11:24am

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-Khushi- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
lovely update sajjal...
bas kar yaar ab nupur ko aur mat rulaa....
aur haa next part jaldi update karna.......

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cutiepie12 Goldie

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged
i jus wish everythng turns normal for dem......OuchOuchOuchOuch

Edited by cutiepie12 - 25 March 2011 at 11:54am

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dynamic_doll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
fantastic update Sajjal!
luved the beginning of this chapter Embarrassed
but the end Cry
i hope Mayank has signed the divorce papers
i can't see Nupz in pain Cry
waiting for the next update
plzzzzzzzzz continue ASAP
nd thnx for the pm Smile

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crazymayurian IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
yes it made me really sad and i hope u will make me very much happy next time.but the update was so touching and osom

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Auroni.92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
I ws scared to read the promo but now im much relieved...
The fact that mayank is trying to move on give me a little ray of hope...Though this update ws sad but im happy that now he wants to see her happy...Mayank's heart is also piercing to see nupur in this vulnerable state and he's trying his best to make her happy...Its not at all easy to forget ones first love but mayank is trying to console her when somewhere she is the reason of his situation...Its more than enough for me and im utterly happy to see mayank in this way...And i know one day he'll surely forget his past and love her...
As usual u portrayed all the emotions perfectly...Nupur's pain, mayank's helplessness all seemed to be true...Brilliant writing...I love whatever u write and it feels great to see the progress...
Cont soon and nxt time a long one ok...Love u....Hug

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