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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 84)

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Chapter 27

-He is admiring her a lot these days …lol.

- I loved their little argument about what to do for the day…it was such a Mayur moment..lol

-Waterfalls are truly beautiful and serene!!! You just never get tired of seeing them…I've been to Niagara Falls so many times yet it never fails to amaze me!

-She is happy because he is happy ….awww….& in last part he was happy because she was….so sweet!

-LOL….the monkey convo was just too cute!! Typical Mnish convo…lol. Aww…I just love them to bits!!!

-Meeting with Diya & Yash was good…looking forward to their evening together.

-LOL, Nupur was so cute when she put that Paanipuri in his mouth after fooling him…

-"it was still there taunting her every second, that she was still there with him. it didn't matter if she was in his life now because the truth was first love always remained." – Aww…my poor Nupur!! Though she knew he loved Piya, it still hurts her to know that he still loves her…I couldn't stop myself from getting sad.

-"mayank could never be hers but she would always belong to him till her last breath" – True love….you keep on loving them whether they love u back or not.  

-''it made me feel connected to her'' Mayank whispered still facing away."

 Aww….now he is making me cry too…though I still hate Mayank-Piya jodi..lol

-"i know for sure the only person i want in my life is my best friend.'' – Glad to see that he has decided to move on…

-''i don't love you, but i'm trying ...because if theres one person i want in my tommorrow its you nupur.'' – Another genuine dialogue from Mayu….

-"an unknown feeling sprouted within him and it made him sad seeing her like this far away from him.." – awww…..

- I feel sorry for both Mayu and Nupur…their past is still haunting them. Hope to see them moving on from these obstacles from past. Another wonderful part!!!

 
 
@Kinza - LOLLOLaww....didn't realize I was the first one..lol.


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OMG! so the past again knocks and mayank had not signed the divorce papers..MAN! what else worse could nupur face.

U very well know that i am completely against nupur for what she did to mayank, but then again i think she is getting what she thought was true. She thought mayank genuinely loved piya, and she should bring them together, so now she has to face all..HE DID LOVE HER! and the reality is coming in front of her just as she imagined. While planning other's life she forgot that she may fall in that plan herself.

sorry if i am sounding mean towards nupur, but i just can't sympathize with her..it's her fault!

rest it was excellent writing! vivid descriptions and just a simply perfect update, just like my princess..

Cont. soon and God Bless..



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hmm... i really don't know wht to say... i was happy in the beginning, the waterfall was so pure and beautiful... but then in the end, i felt really really bad for Nupur.... 

Mayank did not sign the papers!!! Hmm... somehow I'm not angry at him... because I can understand his emotional state at that time, and why he didn't sign the papers...

but what about Nupur? will she ever get that love?

but, one thing made me happy, that at least Mayank is trying to move on... at least he is valuing their relationship now... and he cares for her, though as a friend, but still he cares...

I just hope everything gets fine in due course...

Thnx for the pm Sajjal

~jiya~

P.S. Mehak and Ishi ne kya competition lagayi thiLOL


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This part made me cry! You are a great writer! It made me feel like i was right there witnessing everything! I hope Nupur gets happiness she deserves.............. Beautifully written! 

continue soon...

Vrinda! :) 

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as always beautifully written
felt happy to see them happy and feel really sad to see them cry 
but just love your writing 
hope you continue soon'
thanks for the pm
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beautiful update...
 
i really feel bad for Nups...how much she loves him but Mayank...sigh!
 
he dont deserve her love...she sacrificed so much for him but he gave her just pain in return,,he should move on,,,i hate Mayank in ur FF..

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