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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 75)

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Loved it completely...
I ws so engrossed in the grave part...The emotions came out beautifully..Also the dialogues wr very natural yet heart wrenching...
Now im enjoying this pace of the story...
And i also dnt want romance in a hurry as it'll look fake...Just write this way...
Cont soon...

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
that was a very sweet update!.....loved the carnival parts especially.....and im glad that they are becoming so comfortable in the sense that they now have emotional bonding.....and hopefully this will help take away the bitter memories of the past....naina
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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
Nice part.Smile
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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
res..will update when I get home
 
Edited:

Chapter 26

-Such a sweet scene, when she admired him in his sleep…I loved the whole morning, how u described each little thing, it was really nice!

-Loved how she woke him up…

-''that girl fell in love with a guy and made miskakes, big mistake''  Awww…..my poor Nupur! *hugs*

-"truth was things like these were hard to erase they were etched into the heart forever." – So true!

-I totally loved Nupur's convo with her mother. It was very heart wrenching. Sometimes we don't tell our loved ones how much they mean to us until it's too late….and it was such a true dialogue. All the feelings you've put into that convo, was so real….

-Mayank is right….her mother would know. I was really so happy to see how Mayank was such a supportive friend in this part. He was there when Nupur needed him the most. Their bond is very beautiful and the imperfections just make it better.

-Nupur was so cute at the carnival….lol. Just like a little child. I loved the whole carnival part…took me back to my own experience at carnivals…

-Mayank  teaching her how to throw the rings ....Day DreamingDay Dreaming

-Awww….now, Mayu is admiring her while she sleep …so cute!!!!

-LOL, he screamed in her ear!!!

- the kiss was beautiful

 -the whole chapter was BEAUTIFUL!!!!



Edited by Ishita16 - 04 April 2011 at 10:28pm

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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 6:07pm | IP Logged
tht was soooooooooooo cool part
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Posted: 11 March 2011 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
what an update yaar.....i love the way their bond is growing..loved it soo much dear...........
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Superb update
nupur's comversation with her mom touched mt heart
thnx alot for the pm sajjal di
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thank god sajjal updated......
very nice part.......so update soon......

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