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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 70)

Fantasia. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
OMG..princess that was BEYOND BEAUTIFUL!!..till end a lone tear escaped my eye too!! magnificent..u alway make me cry..
the begginng dream..awwwww..poor nupur..well u see u have made me think like this for nupur too!! LOL, but yes poor nupur!, her sudden , "where are we?", cracked me up! ROFL
the room was beautiful..Day Dreaming, and nupur's reaction towards it was so giryl! LOL and then her awkwardness.Embarrassed, beautiful! Day Dreaming
the part where she blows the kiss to her mother..i am sure her mother had caught it and prayed for her..every mother does, whether she is with her children or not, she is there!!..praying..motherhood is something which cannot leave u, whether u have ur mother beside u or not..motherhood remains with the child till his last breath..*tiiiight hug*
and the ending was ever so beautiful..the kiss..the tear and most of all..mayank knew about it!
excellent, waiting for the next part..and i miss u princess...i hope u are having loadssss of u!
P.S - thank u sanam for updating on princess's behalf.

Edited by -Mehak - 05 March 2011 at 9:12am

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-Khushi- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 12:39am | IP Logged

nice part,..

so slowly mayank mayank is realising how much pain he has given to her.....
beautiful part..
Mou. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 12:39am | IP Logged
sanam...thank u so much for updating it on sajjal's behalf! so happy to c u here after so long...Hug

& sajjal.........thank u so much for this was beautifully written....i  so loved Nupur here...her dreams, her trying not to dream, her hopes & trying for nopt to rise hope,her satisfaction of being accepted only as a friend to mayank again..everything was beautifully portrayed. i specially love that part, when she kissed him thinking he is asleep & he pretend to sleep yet understood her silent tears!

*sigh......every time i read this FF, I sooooo wish i cud c it as a show with arti playing mayank & nupur in look so perfect as a story for a show!

thanks again sajjal, even at this important phase of ur life u continued writing this FF for us.........a tight hug to u for this & allthe very best for ur ya!Hug

Edited by Mou. - 05 March 2011 at 12:40am
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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Sajjal its truly beautiful...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
At first i ws shocked to see mayank so changed...But sigh.. it ws a dream...
I loved the small eye contact bw them...And then the last part ws heart-wrenching...Beautifully portrayed nupur's emotions...
Its hard for mayank to forget his past and move on but im glad that he's still trying...And i know it'll take time but one day his heart will also feel the love for nupur...Waiting for that day...
Thnxx for the update..Hug.Cont soon and thnx sanam for posting on sajjal's behalf...

Edited by Auroni.92 - 05 March 2011 at 1:10am
Wings-of-Fire IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 1:30am | IP Logged
firstly thasnks sanam for posting this on behalf of sajjal. and about the part-all i can say is i love the story. i'm glad that sajjal's continuing the story. 
ammuakhi Senior Member

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 2:08am | IP Logged
as usual awesome one sajjal......
thank you sanam for posting it;.....
try to continue soooooooooon............Smile
crazymayurian IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged
superb it;s so touching
-Samira- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
beautiful update hun
nups dream was so cute loved it
thanks alott Sanam for updating on behalf of Sajjal

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