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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 68)

Bhawna_arti IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Amazing part dear.Big smile

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-NightDreamer- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
By speechless.Day Dreaming.hw wonderfullyn Day Dreaming
beautifully Day Dreamingu describe each n evy sceneDay soo touchd hw can any1 write sooo deeply....i want 2 give u jaadu ki jhappi sanam... words r left 2 describe....Embarrassed 
luved mayur each n evry scene...wat was da most specially it was only abt mayur.Day Dreaming..!!

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-ISakuraS- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
res - promise to edit both my posts by next weekend...I want to comment on everything...Smile

Part 25- Another beautiful part!! ClapClap

-The first part shocked me!!! It was cute though!! Esp the part where Nups tell him she lived with boys before and he drops her on the floor…LOLLOL. It's sad it was just a dream but it is too soon for such close scenes…they both need time to move on from what have happened in their past.

-"he belonged to someone else, he loved someone else." – Aww…I felt bad for her. Poor girl she loves him so much !! Cry

-"His friendship meant the world to her, because if it weren't for this friendship she would have never come to know how much she would have loved him one day." – Loved this line!! Big smile

-"Yes she was content with life, after going through a rough time, this was the most happiest she had been in a long time and she couldn't help but smile ....." – I'm really happy to see that she is happy with this new improvement in their life. Poor girl has suffered so much and it really feels great to see her happy. I still remember the scene where she sat on the beach talking to her mother…it is one scene that is still so fresh in my mind..Cry

-"they had just come out of the worst days of their lives ....and for a better tommorrow they just needed time to stand still for the moment being, neither could they move forward or go back..." – WOW!!! Another favourite line!! Big smile

 -"He felt good seeing her smile, after giving her many tears the least he could do was make her smile." – this is the Mayu we love so much!! He is such a sweetheart!

-Notepad and pen? LOLLOLLOL

-the kiss to her mom was such a beautiful part!!CryClap I'm glad Mayu was also there with her!

- '' i'm glad to have you in my life nupur''-another beautiful dialogue!

-Nupur admiring Mayu when he is sleeping was really a sweet moment!! I love such scenes….Embarrassed

-"Mayank eyes flicked open touching his cheek slowly he sighed in remorse and sadness, he could hear her silent tears but he just could not get himself to move......" – I hope all these barriers b/w them will soon go away….Embarrassed

Edited by Ishita16 - 10 March 2011 at 10:35pm
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x.Heena.x Goldie

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
Awww...wish it was longer but it was brilliantt...loved the progress...I love how nupur knowing he doesn't love her is still happy to admit she loves him...and shows it too...that takes gut and is really TRUE selfless love!!!

Update realllll soon pleaseseeee
Faria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
Sanu thanx a lot for posting it on behalf of sajju

and sajju thank u so much for updating our fav ff-- yaar tu mahan hai.LOL

Sajju seriously this update was Wonderful
At first i was shocked when was reading it- Maynk was carying Nupur- By GOD ye kaise ho sakta hai???
then i thought may be they were just enjoying  their trip- obviously as a friend.
ahhhhhhh i can feel Nups Pain -She loves him a lot.
but now she is satisfied with his frship only.
i hope maynk will fall for her soon and love her back unconditionally..

but today i loved a simple lyet beautiful sentence of  Mayank
'' i'm glad to have you in my life nupur''
after long time maynk said something good to NUPS which made her happy.
and the last part was really painful and touching
i just wish nups will get all the happiness of the world.

Beautiful  update sajju
simply mind-blowing
keep it up

Take Care

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sumonetolub IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
beautiful update!.....i have a feeling that nupurs dreams will come true on this trip....they better!.....she deserves happiness now!.....and it seems mayank will fall for her soon enough....cant wait for the next update Smile.....naina
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Posted: 04 March 2011 at 6:16pm | IP Logged

Fantastic update....cont soon

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