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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 60)

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No need to say sorry hun! It's fine, I'm still the first one..Wink



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edited... yayyy me firstParty

wow... finally they are moving on... i like this changeSmile
and they are happily going for the honeymoon... i m super happyBig smile
i could imagine the expression Samrat and Gunjan had LOL

thnx for the pm SajjalHug


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Part 24

-Another awesome part!! Did I mention how much I love your writing? Every word is so perfect!!! ClapClap

-Majan convo: I felt bad for Mayu…how much he just wanted to see Piya once more…so sad. Gunjan is right… Mayu is just too scared to fall in love again… I'm happy he accepts it. Acceptance is the first step in getting over fears.  Big smile

-"her presence slithers through me like the wind...even with her being here i know she lies in my heart.....its all becoming so hard'' – Nice line!!  

 

*Mayur bedroom scene: Nice description of the atmosphere as well as the sequence of actions/reactions/gestures…Shirt buttons and Mayur!! I totally loved their talk about love…and how there should be a warning sign …You've said some beautiful things in that convo…Clap

"...Heart has its reason which reason knows nothing of ..i guess in the end there is really no explanation for this love...'' – Nice quote!Clap

-I was glad to see them talk about bringing Piya into Mayu's life and then him saying how it was unfair to her as well. It was kind of nice to see them caring more about how much the past has hurt the other person and not themselves.

-"i miss my friend my bestfriend the guy who use to make me smile .the guy who was there by my side when i needed him, and the guy who understood me without me having to say it..thats the guy i want..i want my bestfriend back'' – Aww….that was so child-like. Embarrassed

-" its hard to let go...but its harder because i don't have my bestfriend by my side'' – How true!! Life is so much harder without your best friend by your side...Cry

-Then they became friends again!! Wow…such a sweet moment!! A moment we've all been waiting for…then Mayu teasing Nupur about the blushing..so cute!! Embarrassed

-"there was just something about tonight that made her smile and know tommorrow would be another great day." – Yes, finally they are going to be happy!! Smile

-Morning scene was cute! Mayu has already packed their bags…awww!! "you look like a monkey" comment…LOLLOLLOL

-Sajan eavesdropping………LOLLOL and then their reaction at Mayur leaving for honeymoon...LOLLOLLOL



Edited by Ishita16 - 10 March 2011 at 10:11pm

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