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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 37)

..-Ayesshhaa-.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Wow! OMG! Awesome update Sajjal!

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Aww Sajjal................... such a beautiful heart went out to Nupur earlier and now i m happy she is paying it back..........i guess she has suffered a bit 2 much........

As for Mayank, yes he is coming around..............he needs to understand Nupur and her love........and what he told Samrat...........

but yeah i wish he removes those pics of Piya , they are kinds irritating........ i mean he calls her his wife, and keep pics of his ex..........dodo

and plz do complete this FF.......................plz plz plz..............i will be very hurt, if u leave it in middle
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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged


I knew you will... I hd intuition since last few hours.. Nd came here


That was a huge update.. I realised it now while scrolling.. Lol...
But I loved it!

U hv showed so many emotional mixes in this one
I love this jealous Mayank Sharma :)
And ofcourse my Nupur...

Cnt wait to read further
Plz complete it... Embarrassed

This time let Mayank confess first, :)

Take care
Sry for short cmnt
Running out! Big smile
Will miss u :)
Bt will be back soon

Edited by -sam- - 06 February 2011 at 6:56am

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Mou. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
by god i just read ur last one & u updated !!!!!!!!Big smile yeeeeeeeeeeeeey!


bapre! things move forward so fast here sajjal..i must say i didn't expect everything will be so normal between them after Nupur's reaction to him in last update.......i mean i thought he will be a bit hurt  or regret.....but its okk.i love this naughty mayank too.who love to stare at her & love to irritate her in kind of sweet way! Embarrassed& even after every fight. the end ...he actually agrees to do what nupur asked him to doLOL.,take her to shoppiong.paying the bill like a man, going for the party , & of course getting jealous of other guys who found nupur "the most beautiful gal in the world"etc etcLOL.he changed a lot after that words he get from her i guess!!!!!!LOL
love the way everyine was praising them & calling them love birds situation!!!!!!! & the dance in rain.mayank-nupur& dance in rain r one deadly was beautiful sajjal!Embarrassed
& then the confession of was heart touching deeply she love this guy.from the moment they met she loved him & this same guy was punishing her , hating much pain was there in her words! she is so helpless from her heart..she couldn't even try to hate him....the feeling inside her was so dep for him.* heart goes out for Nupur!!!!!!!..Ouch

& abt critisism...plz don't rush things here .i loved the previous pace at which it was going honestly.this update i felt things moved a bit faster! & why u want to complete this FF so soon? i don't want u to compromise with the story! take ur time.i m happy to wait for this one!
take care!!!!!!Hug

Edited by Mou. - 03 February 2011 at 12:09pm

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AmyArTiMayUr IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
PART 21Big smile
First thanks a million Meethi for dedicating that part to me...i totally loved itHug

And then the part itself...hehe...loved their fight in the car...and it was sweet of him to actually bring food for her...he seems genuinely concernedBig smile Loved the Sayank scene....the way Mayank tells Samrat that when you love someone, you do whatever you can to make them happy, which is very trueEmbarrassed
i was laughing my head off when Mayank kept asking dadi questions about Nupur's whereabouts...lolsLOLLOL someone is finally worried and wondering what is going onLOLLOL Loved the way he confronted Nupur and she told him off straight about what she thought and that everything did not have to be about him only...she actually made him realise that she can indeed live her life without himBig smile it was GREATBig smileBig smile of course that is just an understatement...lols...but i had to say something naLOLLOL

PART 22Big smileBig smile
The double smile indicates i totally LOVED the it more than onceLOL
The best parts being the way he teases her in the mall, and then of course the reunionLOLLOL someone is getting jealousLOL okay first he got affected by how pretty she looks in the sari and then the jealousy...ROFL...poor guy had to pull Nupur away from Aditya by forceLOLLOL and then the dance and the drinkingLOLLOL and the bestest part was the dance in the rain...reminded me of Khuda JaaneEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Then the way she speaks out all her feelings to him and Mayank has no answer to give her at wonder what she will do when she wakes up and remembers all that she told him...or maybe she wont remember....but i wonder what Mayank will do now...and what effect her words will have on himWink So i CANT CANT CANT wait to read the next soonBig smileBig smile
Yeah i also loved Mayank and Dadi's God this dadi is pretty ROCKINGLOLLOL she was talking to her husbandLOLLOL so cute...but i loved the way she talked to Mayank and explained things very nicely to him....loving her Big smileBig smile

Love ya lots meethiHug and pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee update soon and yeah...i will ALWAYS love this story even after you are done with is one story that is VERY close to my heartBig smileBig smile

Edited by AmyArTiMayUr - 05 February 2011 at 11:51am

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
resDay Dreaming


no need to say that again this part was awesomeClap, and do me a favour... plzz suggest me a better synonym for "awesome", i m tired of using this word on ur updatesLOL

I was very happy with jealous Mayank, but I hope Mayank doesn't drift away from Nupur again, because the first time he came to know about her love for him, he was angry... Confused

and plzz do finish this FF plzz plzz plzzSmile

thanks for de pmSmile

Edited by jiya_angel - 03 February 2011 at 11:23pm

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