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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 2)

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 2:41pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by -Sajjal-

^^ there won't be a next time. I promise.Embarrassed


I believe you...Embarrassed Btw i Sajjal i was just wondering i read ur old fanfic "confession of a dangerous mind" but u discontinued it... I'm very curious it was really interesting.... Are u ever going to re-open it or is it gone? I'm just curious cause i didn't know u have written more fan fictions i thought "Hum jho na ke paye" was ur first ss... so is it gone or is it hope? because i would love to read it, i wish i knew about it before...Ouch 

-Laiba



Edited by princez_94 - 16 January 2011 at 2:41pm

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
congratulation for new thread.............

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
RESBig smile

2nd thread...congrats hunBig smileBig smile

Edited:
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY 2nd thread...party party partyLOLLOL I am sooo PROUD of you meethiBig smileBig smile I wasnt even expecting an updateBig smileBig smile Btw mera PM kahan hai?? you forgotten kya?? OuchOuch

Anyways today im happy so i wont hold a grudge against youLOLLOL Btw how is your hand???Big smile Hope betterBig smile

Okay im not going to compliment your writing...you know how GREAT it is...and if you meant ME by the Amna you mentioned in your speech then sweety, im soooo OVERWHELMED though i dont realise and know how i inspired youLOLLOL but nevertheless, thanks a million, MeethiHug

Okay my FAV FAV FAV part of this update was the veil and the wedding part and this: without any hesitation nupur image suddenly came into his mind, when he had lovingly put his mother's veil over her. Everything flashed in mind from his fight with nupur at the beach to their wedding. The moments he had spent with nupur replayed in his mind over and over distancing him from piya.
Mayank sat back down on the bed and saw the picture of him and nupur on the dresser. He picked it up slowly and stroked it with his thumb .....

It feels like he is slowly getting over his past and thinking about his present and future...im LOVING this sooooo muchEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Hope they realise what they mean to each other.....EmbarrassedEmbarrassed sorry im posting such a short comment....am really tired....tell you more through PM InshAllahBig smileBig smile


Edited by AmyArTiMayUr - 16 January 2011 at 3:51pm

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
great you finally updated!.....i really liked this chapter....though im confused as to what mayank is feeling at the end of the chapter....i hope hes finally softening up to nupur......i liked the picture scene and the sanu conversation.....will wait for the next update!.....naina

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 3:51pm | IP Logged

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edited... 

And yes i edited today because if i delay it more i might not be able to edit for a few days...


Firstly Sajjal that was one the most beautiful update u ever written. U have written many parts but some parts touch ur heart... and i can proudly say this was one of them... I'm just in awe right now... seriously Sajjal mind blowing update...  Clap 

As per the story i'm extremely happy the way they got married and the red veil was just the cherry on the top... Embarrassed

I'm worried for Gunjan, is something wrong with her or the baby? Ouch

& finally i got the fight... i loved start of the fight but the last part was a bit painful. It feels like Mayank has become heart less... Hope he soon realize his feelings... but i loved the small cute scene in the temple at least there is some progress....

For the SG track... This is a MN-SG ff so it would be necessary ...

Awesome update Sajjal loved it to bits... My absolute favorite part till now...Embarrassed'


-Laiba



Edited by princez_94 - 16 January 2011 at 4:19pm

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princez_94

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Laiba....you are on a reserving spreeLOLLOL

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 4:00pm | IP Logged
tht was really nice part congrats for your new thread

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AmyArTiMayUr

Originally posted by princez_94

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Laiba....you are on a reserving spreeLOLLOL


Excuse me...Shocked I feel so hurt... Jab apne he aise baat kehte hai...Cry

Okay enough nautanki... In fact not this time Amina... For maybe the first time i reserved and edited on the same day...LOLBig smile lekin zyada khush matt hona this may be the first and last time... LOL

THH ke second thread ki khushi mein, meine aaj he unres kar diya hai...Embarrassed


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