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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 144)

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Posted: 10 July 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by itstheclimb

roshnee i have been suffering along with all of you, sajjal doesn't even let me read the parts earlier i have to read it when she sends to me to post!!Ouch
Its been months since this story started now i want to see a proper ending..!Thumbs Up

you really want this thread to be spammed? you're sure sajjal wont throw her sandal at us after ruining her thread?

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Posted: 10 July 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
brilliant update
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Posted: 10 July 2011 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
O dear that was extremely Amazing update
So Finally jay is here Hope Mayank will realize his feelings soon
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 10 July 2011 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
tht was so nice jealous mayank was to good
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Posted: 10 July 2011 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
Woow Sajjal glad u updated
it was wonderful update hun
loved mayu getting  jealous
Plzz Sajjal try to update next part soon
n make mayu suffer little bit Angry
 
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Posted: 11 July 2011 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Meeettthhhiii...what a fab fab fab part...:-)

Mayank was drifting away more and more as they got closer to home...and that picture!! Urghh! But im loving it that Mayank is getting jealous...im loving it A LOT..hehe..and Jay sounds like he will be playing cupid now..giving the love a direction...i am so eager to read what happens next..so plz plz plz update ASAP:-D

Hugs and kisses..i miss you...
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Posted: 11 July 2011 at 6:50am | IP Logged
ahh.. so here is d update finally!Smile after so long... but it was worth d wait...Clap i always love d way u portray d turmoil within, d pain, guilt, helplessness, hope etc..Clap in short u r a pro in all these..Hug n m so happy dat mayu is showing signs of jealousy n dat too openly..Day Dreaming i so hope dat mayur comes closer in d coming updates.. Day DreamingBig smile

well kp writing n rocking.Thumbs Up god bless.Smile
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Posted: 11 July 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
)This is very good ff
i am really enjoying reading it.
I m really loving bonding between Mayur as a frnd & as a Hubby wife too.
you write very beautifully.Big smile
story was going so smoothly till their honeymoonBig smile
you had written very beautifullyBig smile
i had enjoyed each every part.Embarrassed
I was so enjoying to reading that Mayank taking initial steps & Nupur was understanding that Mayank needs times & she was ready also.
but i have one complained. I m in the minority or only one who is thinking like that only.
i personally feel that there are too much 3rd angle or person for mayur love story.
1st piya to realize nupur loves mayank then dadi who got married to Mayur now this jai to realised mayank that he loves nupur.
I was so happy to read earlier part where Mayu is realising slowly.
i really loved 1st half of this 31st part but didnt liked Jai one sorry Ouch.
I personally feel that he should not interfere in their lifeOuch (I know he is helping as a frnd but stillOuch). becoz to know their feelings towards each other they need 3rd person each & every time so how long their relationship gonna work.
it would be treat to watch how mayank going to realise his feelings towards nupur Embarrassed  & her importance in his life without any1 interference.
(I didnt like jai gestureLOL sorryOuch don't think i hate jai nope i m thankful to him but not in this chapter LOL)

Sorry if i hurt you or offended you but i really loved this ff Spcly Mayur & i really dont want third person in Mayur story . At the end of the day it is ur ff.
you might have other plan or i might be thinking some other way.

A big hug to you writting beautiful Mayur ffHug
Thanks Sanam for posting thisSmile.

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