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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 14)

sariska_mnarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Wow sajjal

wht an upd8

loved gunursam scene in d bedroom

n gunjan's moodswings


but my mayur awwww

I feel bad for nupur

hope everythin will b fine sooooooonnnn

n even with gunjan

I'm kinda scared for her

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-SAISakura16- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged

Part 19

-" dadi, don't force me into his life, let him come to me": I really feel bad for Nupur…Mayank is being too mean to her. Ya, she has kind of played with his life but he has no right to be so harsh to her. I really like her decision to let him come to her…I was waiting to see the same thing.

-Poor Sam: chinese food @ 8 in the morning? LOL. I really love how much he looks out for Nupur…going to extent of warning his bro again and again.

-Sajan scene where gunjan's mood swings was evident was nice!

-I'm so happy that Gunjan finally accepts Nupur's decision. She was starting to irritate me a bit in the last couple of parts, though I understand her emotions & feelings.

-Again, I just LOVE SANU!!

-The little Mayur fight in the room in  the morning was nice to see…it was more of a loving fight rather than their earlier ones.

-Seriously that was THE LIMIT! Mayank doesn't have to take his anger out on Nupur. She was just calling him for dinner and that too because others were waiting for him. If it reminded him of Piya, what can she do? So glad to see Nupur push him away. How much can a girl take? I really hope Mayank yearns for her love before Nupur accepts him. She suffered too much already and he is making it worse…


The last part really made me cry for Nupur...Being hurt by ur husband like this is worse than how much it hurts to not be able to call him your own.



Edited by Ishita16 - 01 February 2011 at 5:15pm

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..-IronyDied-.. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 5:30am | IP Logged
you know what saj......everytime i read your update i feel this ff more and more interesting.......
my my amazing part...........awesome ......dadi is a sweet heart....she really loves nupur thats the only reason she told mayank to sleep in the guest room......bechara samrat.....chinese an that too 8 in the morning....samrat and mayank teasing part was really enjoyable...nupur and gunjan is just too sweet.....ah! finally she forgave nupur....mayank is doing injustice to nupur ...what is her fault????.....but no worry he will have to come back to her only.......
and one thing i also agree nupur is not piya......but if she wants she she can become like piya...but piya can never be like her......and also she dont need to be like that piya......
it was awesoe and mindblowing part.......
continue soon


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agreatperhaps IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Awesome update.. Wassup with Gunjan? Any complications???
Mayank screamed at Nupur?
Gunjan wants Chinese at 8?? 
PM me
Update Soon...

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-NightDreamer- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 6:24am | IP Logged
It was superb one ....really mindblowing but pplzzz update it fast da next part....asap...pplzzzzz...waiting eagerly...

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-DreamzGirl- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 7:43am | IP Logged
nice one ...............

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perkilicious IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged


awesome update!!
ok  so d starting i thot mayu was caressing her hair lol.......but awwwwww dadi is so sweet...........n nupz cudnt believe that shez actually married nw,........awwww......i really feel sad for her......
thnk god finally gunjan forgav nupz.........n sam is so funny......poor he...chinese at 8
i liked d sayank scene too it was nice light scene........n then dadi bang on i just love her...poor
n yea i hope gunjan discloses her prob soon to sam.....
sam nupz n gunjan scene was so adorable......n the bathroom thing.....i liked it.....mayur were behaving so normal ......was so happy readin that......but the endinOuch i knw mayu is hurt but nupz is like sufferin so much...........i just want them to start afresh......but yea thats not so easy........
anyways do update soon.......
thnx for d pm......sorry for being late!
ur just amazing sweety.........d way u write is just awesome........!!ClapStarClap

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 23 January 2011 at 6:12am

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kirti123 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 8:32am | IP Logged
just amazing'
enjoying the story
its just beautiful
thanks for the pmSmile

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