Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 130)

drfizaahmed IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 16 March 2010
Posts: 30358

Posted: 09 May 2011 at 11:55am | IP Logged
hey Sajjal
it was a beautiful part...
wher mayank said the write words or my be she saw the right feel in his eys...thy way he is moving loved...
there little moments...the dinner...his feelings...her blush n nervousness...n her love...the most purest n dont have words ...
im loving it ...cant wait till mid of june
any ways thnks for the beautiful part ...see ya soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Wings-of-Fire IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 June 2010
Posts: 8667

Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
dont know what did i do to get so lucky and unlucky at the same time tonight! firstly a mesmerizing update and then the shocker of having no update till mid june! i'll miss you and this story surely.
take your time.this story is worth every wait.
SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 May 2010
Posts: 6714

Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
nice update.
fianlly mayank feels for her.
love their romantic scene.
update soon.
thanks for thepm.
kheya-mayur IF-Dazzler

Joined: 01 June 2010
Posts: 3336

Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
ginny09 Goldie

Joined: 06 August 2010
Posts: 2331

Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
i just totally fell in love wid thios part 
was so lost in it :D
hey plzzz give d next part soon 
n no promo part hi LOL
Mou. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 04 July 2009
Posts: 16744

Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
ok i was extremely happy with the update sajjal until i read ur note...mid june is so far! but i can understand what u must be going through right now...all my best wishes r for u& yeah i m gonna wait til mid june happily! ( hope u will not make us wait more than that)
coming to the update...
ahh it was a treat to read! i like the way nupur realized that mayank has moved on, though i was almost abt to scream in anger when he said'' i do love her and i don't think i will ever stop''  to be honest,i still don't get it, if he can't stop loving piya then how come he will ever start loving Nupur? coz in my opinion u can't love two person at a time the same way...i can understand nupur accepting the fact that he LOVED piya & That will always be a part of him coz what happened in past, cannot be undone...but if he still loves piya , can't stop it yet he felt he has started falling for nupur too...then i donno .i m not much convinced abt his feeling...but i guess Nupur got convinced with just that one look into his eyesEmbarrassed that one day he will love her like she love him.
"Nupur had never given him the chance to see her vunerable and he knew why know, but if he had ever known about her heartbreak or her pain, he wasn't afraid to say, he would have chosen her over anyone and everything." 
ok hjere agin i m thinking.why would he think like that if he never loved Nupur? isn't this lines saying even back then he would hv choose Nupur over piya just becoz he can never c her in pain .doean;t that mean even then he actually loved nupur only, but he just didn't realized it & mistaken his attraction for piya as love? uff mayank & his feelings - confusing me biiig time now!
No ownder Nupur can't read his eyes...but then i guess this confusion is what make this Mayank so close to reality ...& even Nupur.her feelings that u showed.that upto one point she loved him , made sacrifices for him .but then human hv much pain can one bear? after a point human mind ought to become selfish & start thinking abt her own& that's what she did.she started expecting the love in return of her own love from Mayank & she was afraid to get hurt again...both ur mayank nupur r so close to real characters...i totally appreciate this!

& yeah needless to say i love that ending with Mayank NOT kissing her...yes waiting for her is worth while & i think he still need time to understand her real worth in is life & until that happens, kiss can wait...

*sigh waiting eagerly that Mid june just come sooner this year!!!!!! & thanks a ton that u managed to update even in the midst of all the happenings in ur wishes for u! take care!

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:


C_O_O_L Goldie

Joined: 15 September 2009
Posts: 2440

Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
grt updt!!
finally they r moving forward...
bt plz try to updt soon if u can
waiting eagerly to read next part...
gopi06 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 January 2010
Posts: 4231

Posted: 09 May 2011 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
lovely updt dear
waiting for June to read next part..try to cont soon
thank for the pm

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
A LOT LIKE LOVE#2-part 40 pg 128(LAST PART)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 149 150

Author: barkha_90   Replies: 1198   Views: 549187

barkha_90 1198 549187 05 May 2012 at 3:10am by TANVI_SEXY
AR love story Part 23 P. 73- LAST PART

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 79 80

Author: ..Mira..   Replies: 634   Views: 324069

..Mira.. 634 324069 17 January 2012 at 1:00am by chcolaty
FF:Chance pe Dance last part..(part 22) (pg.36)END

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 39 40

Author: _Arushi_   Replies: 312   Views: 68617

_Arushi_ 312 68617 26 May 2011 at 10:28am by sweetnandu
may be(mayur ff)part last part-page 27

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 29 30

Author: adi_gupta   Replies: 233   Views: 91521

adi_gupta 233 91521 06 September 2009 at 5:26am by Yoshita0411
LOVE - AA ff PART - part 9 updt pg8

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Author: *~sneha~*   Replies: 76   Views: 31732

*~sneha~* 76 31732 30 August 2008 at 8:34am by teenorchid

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index