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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 120)

AmyArTiMayUr IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
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Finally im getting time to edit my commentLOLLOL

It was a wonderful update...loved every bit of it...Big smileBig smile

Mayank getting possessive and not wanting Nupur wearing a short dressLOLLOL

Then complimenting her..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

The funny moments at the zoo...LOLLOL i loved it when she said "MAYANK" and the monkey turned to look at herLOLLOL

I loved the way they can freely talk about the past and Nupur can easily say out her feelings to him Big smile

Then the rain...hayee...i too love playing in the rain...its such a wonderful feelingBig smileBig smile

And the way he was admiring her...the forehead kissEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Then the medicine part and then finally her wanting him next to her in bed and him obliging without a word...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

It was so so so so so awesome...every bit...and i was grinning sooo much throughout the whole updateBig smileBig smile

Wanted to know what Mayank was thinking when Nupur asked him to get into bed beside her...hoping i get to read that part tooBig smileBig smile

Otherwise the story is going perfectly well...do update ASAP...i cant cant cant cant...absolutely CANT WAIT!!! Big smileBig smile

Hugs and miss ya Smile


Edited by AmyArTiMayUr - 30 April 2011 at 9:09am

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lovely update...i loved the innocence of that last scene...along with the cuteness of the first scene...my favorite line was: "when i was afraid of everything, i was never afraid to love you"...she had waited so long for this moment...and im so happy she finally got it!...cant wait for the next update...naina

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
wow beautiful update
just loving itSmile
felt like just keep on reading and never ends'

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
reading it now..feel like after such a tiring journey ... a person find peace ...the journy tht hold so much pains is finally giving the joyous moments..
 
loving the way she is always so ease to express her feelings to him
n last part was ...even i took a deep breth f releif...
 
beuatifull it is ..n pls let it go the way its going
 
perfect ...

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
*sigh... what r u doing sajjal? i always try to predict that may be in next update  ur story will move like this & that & u always manage to surprise me...now this having their chilhood home back in Goa & this sudden rain surprise...i didn;t imagine it at all like this...but i surely liked it...keep it up gal.i m amazed but i really like this Nupur who is not afraid to admit what is on her heart ...she talk abt it so openly with mayank now..its great actually, now they r both passing a crutial stage of their relationship & its really unique the way u r showing it...
waiting eagerly for the next update!!!!!!!!
P.S: hope u unreserve some post that u reserved soonWink LOL
love yaHug

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
everything in this update was perfect...awesome...

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
wow me to totally in mayur dreamland...Day Dreaming .Day Dreaming .Day Dreaming .Day Dreaming .Day Dreaming .Day Dreaming .Day Dreaming .Day Dreaming .Day Dreaming .Day Dreaming 

loved dis update...awww 
starting from da dress scene where he refuses her to wear it...Blushing Blushing  Blushing Blushing
n da monkey mayank scene ws soo perfect...LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

n deir walk around da zoo n deir convo...jus totally amazing...loved da fact dat nupur always speak right from her heart n is not ashmed to admit her love for him...Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed 

n da rain...how cn any1 forget da imp od rain in mayur life...Smile Smile Smile Smile  Smile Smile Smile

n da last scene..it ws da best...deir cuddling up ws soo perfect...loved it to the core...Approve

tczzz
loads of loveSmile


Edited by cutiepie12 - 30 April 2011 at 1:07pm

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update. ...cont soon

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