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Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 (Page 100)

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Dil Khush updateEmbarrassed.................simple yet passionate.............Mayank n Diya conco was great..........every gesture of Mayank showed how much he wanted her in his life.............he conveyed her with all possible ways that he was actually SORRY for his mistake................adorable  MayuEmbarrassed.................Fabulous update.............n please wrap up word hurtsOuch................!!!

Congratulations...............its 100 pagesClap.......................!!!


@ Fari dear i reciprocate ur feelingsEmbarrassed...............feelings r mutual dear................itna mutual itna mutual itna mutual ki kya kahun BY GOD...........i feel shyEmbarrassedBlushingROFLROFL....................!!!


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Congrats on 100 Pages!!!Party
 
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"a devil she was when she wanted to be ofcourse" – LOL I just love that!!

 

Opposites attract!! Big smileWinkLOL

 

WOW! Sudden reaction from Mayu!!Embarrassed Aww…we love that strand of hair, don't we??? And she couldn't continue her angry look…EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 

 "hope for something new that seemed to raise a hope in her tangled up heart also. no wonder she was mad for this man, one look into his eyes and she was already planning when they'd have their first child, typical of her." – Awww….so cute! Big smile

 

"just like these beautiful i wish for you to fill your scent in every part of my life.

                                                                                     -mayank" – how sweet!!! Day Dreaming

 

" Was this how he was suppose to feel, no it wasn't he himself had made it clear to nupur that he could only remain friends with her than why was he suddenly expecting alot more from her." – A nice change in Mayank….ClapBig smile

 

" if you save a dance for me on the floor, i might rethink that forgiving you part" – Awww….Big smileEmbarrassed

  

'' sometimes i think if i hadn't come back, maybe piya and mayank would still be together. i seem to be the cause of their friction'' – I really feel bad for her…but I don't know what to say abt her. Though I believe Mayank & Nupur were always meant for each other and Piya is the one who came in the middle. Big smile

 

 

''Mayank you can't live in fear. life is about taking risks, not being afraid to go after what you want'' – I totally agree with Diya!!!! ClapClapClap

 

'' It never is my friend. That's why it's called a risk  and about wanting her badly, you want her so much that it scares you because the truth is you took it in your stride when piya left but if nupur were ever to leave, you would break and i don't mean in the tears kind of way i mean she gives meaning to your life and you know that mayank. Your scared and if you let that fear run you that i can gaurantee one day it will come true''  - Ok, I just LOVED this line….u have a way with words!!! ClapClapClap

 

 '' i will say good for you, but i haven't forgiven myself yet'' – awwww…..Cry

 

 

The dance was just BEAUTIFUL!!! And the kiss was just so magical!!! Day DreamingBlushing

 

'' i told you, i want you in my tommorrow regardless of my past '' – I'm really happy!! Big smileBig smileBig smile

 

"when you walked out of my life it really hurt me, but when i saw you that day on our doorsteps it was like something within me woke up...i can't explain it and i don't want to either because truly i want to feel it'' kissing her forehead he walked towards the sofa where he had placed his pillow and comforter,"  - OMG!! Beautiful Sajjal!! Seriously ur words just make me feel the emotions of the characters!! Ur writing is magical!!! ClapClap



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Hey Sajjal, sorry for updating late - I totally forgot I had a reserved post here ...

Anyways, first of all, Congratulations for 100 pages in the second thread :D
And the flow of the story is beautiful ... the way you are bringing out their feelings is just perfect - you know, always somehow I tend to be partial towards Mayank in this story and try to justify his behavior and his feelings ... But this time, I felt bad for Nupur when she saw the divorce papers ... 
But in this update the way you showed them taking steps towards each other - the song was perfect and I really loved the conversation between Dia and Mayank ... And the dance was just beautiful :)

Do not think of wrapping the story before it's perfect end - you cannot so that! And you definitely succeeded in putting the sweet moments - they were like the cherry over the cake :)

Great update Sajjal :)


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Originally posted by -Sajjal-

what if  i'm just updating a promo! or a note...WinkLOL
btw, thank you guys!Hug its all due to you all i have reached here.
 
We would still "like" it!!! & like to comment on it!!! LOLLOL
 
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I sooo loved this update... finally, oh finally Mayank is moving ahead.... gosh!! I sooo loved Diya, wohoo girl!! for saying the words I hv been wanting to say to Mayank since so long... Thanks a lot for the pm Sajjal

~jiya~

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oopsie!! I forgot to congratulate you... yayyy!!! 2nd thread reached 100 pagesClapPartyHug
but wht's this?Shocked who allowed you wrap up dis story so soon... don't ever do thatEvil Smile

~jiya~


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i am late!! so no point of reserving now..Cry, but still RESERVED! LOL

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*sighs* - absolutely beautiful.. Day Dreaming Day Dreaming.

Princess u write romance with so much passion, but it always seems so wrapped up in decency, excellent!. The small efforts by mayank were so adorable, but again - it is my mayank who had to make efforts, what about the hot shot nupur? Angry

anyways, she looks cute waiting for him. Diya's words were very deep and i loved the bonding all four of these friends shared.

The ending was it!, what more wold nupur want! next morning will definitely a new beginning.

cont. soon and God bless..love u..



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Hey Sajju
wanna hug u for ur mind-blowing update
u know - this update was extremely beautiful.........

Dil khush hogaya- i feel rally happy after reading this update- now a broad smile is on my face- and it happens just becoz of u- thank u so much dear.......

I Loved every bit of it..............
loved th way mayu trying to make her happy.......... the flower giving part was really nice
just like these beautiful i wish for you to fill your scent in every part of my life.
                                                                                -mayank

How sweet sajju.....Now i m loving maynak.LOL

Id definitely fall in love with a guy who writes such for meLOLLOL

When mayank came out of the washroom,, as he had expected she was gone,a part of him had felt she would have stayed when their eyes had met for a bare moment before he pulled into the washroom but no here she was gone without a care in the world. Was this how he was suppose to feel, no it wasn't he himself had made it clear to nupur that he could only remain friends with her than why was he suddenly expecting alot more from her.


Oye hoye kuch tou hua hai------------ kuch hogaya hai
do char din se -lagta hai jaise
sab kuch alag hai , sab kuch naya hai
kuch tou hua hai------------ kuch hogaya hai........

yes darling now definitely maynak feeling something special for nups- actually he has a special corner for nups in his heart ................
Btw diya-mayank convo was very nice and sensible. loved Dia here.

And then the most beautiful part- the dance part with the beautiful song
ahhhhhhhhhh it was so magical and mayurish.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
he didn't know what made him do it, but he leapt in slowly and placed his lips on her soft lush cheeks and kept them there for a moment or so, feeling quite vulnerable when he had to pull back. Nupur blushed and hid herself in his chest and hugged him.


GOSH Sajju -it was  fantastic yaar.............
a small gesture of mayank- which made our nups happy .........
See how much happy was nups after long time................

So finally mayank signed d divorce paper- thanx GOD
i loved him when he said---------' i told you, i want you in my tommorrow regardless of my past '

now i m really very happy sajju
thanx again for ur wowest and awesomest update
and yah- congrat- u reached on 100 page.
May ALLAH bless u dear
plz update next part soon..


Note: mere pari dosto- ap logo bhi humse itna pyar karte hai main nehi janti...
By GOD- i m speechless......... Mehak, Amy, Valiah- thank u guys...lol

valiyah yup-our feelings r mutual and we cant deny it.
love u all guys and this time fari special HUG for u.....







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