i am really enjoying reading it.
I m really loving bonding between Mayur as a frnd & as a Hubby wife too.
you write very beautifully.😃
story was going so smoothly till their honeymoon😃
you had written very beautifully😃
i had enjoyed each every part.😳
I was so enjoying to reading that Mayank taking initial steps & Nupur was understanding that Mayank needs times & she was ready also.
but i have one complained. I m in the minority or only one who is thinking like that only.
i personally feel that there are too much 3rd angle or person for mayur love story.
1st piya to realize nupur loves mayank then dadi who got married to Mayur now this jai to realised mayank that he loves nupur.
I was so happy to read earlier part where Mayu is realising slowly.
i really loved 1st half of this 31st part but didnt liked Jai one sorry .
I personally feel that he should not interfere in their life (I know he is helping as a frnd but still). becoz to know their feelings towards each other they need 3rd person each & every time so how long their relationship gonna work.
it would be treat to watch how mayank going to realise his feelings towards nupur 😳 & her importance in his life without any1 interference.
(I didnt like jai gesture😆 sorry don't think i hate jai nope i m thankful to him but not in this chapter 😆)
Sorry if i hurt you or offended you but i really loved this ff Spcly Mayur & i really dont want third person in Mayur story . At the end of the day it is ur ff.
you might have other plan or i might be thinking some other way.
A big hug to you writting beautiful Mayur ff🤗
Thanks Sanam for posting this😊.
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