Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 - Page 56

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 13 years ago

ressssssssssss

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
thank u so much sajju

will edit it soon

editttttttttttttttttttttt

this is the 3rd time- i m crying today

1st one when bangladesh had lost its 6th wicket.........

2nd after reading jiyas OS

and now after reading nups conversation with her mom on graveyard.

it was really very heart wrenching convo.
my heart ached while i reading this update.

but later felt good when she was enjoying the carnival
loved it so much
very beautiful update as usual

thanx a lot for ur mind blowing update
keep updating

Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago

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Fantasia.

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Posted: 13 years ago

post updated on pg 73..😳

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nanchie sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesomeeeeee update

loved it

mayur were sooooo cute and adorable

continue soon

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-NightDreamer-

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Posted: 13 years ago

It was mindblowing im speechless by goz wat a superb update.....luved mayur each n evry scene....specially nupur she was really cute n sweet...👏

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Gul

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Posted: 13 years ago

Its beautiful really so cute

This update have all the essence emotions ,Love cuteness and sweetness of Life

thank U so much for this great part and Pm

Cont soon

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samira

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Posted: 13 years ago

Salam Sajjal 🤗
it was truly fantastic update hun
the part nupur at her mam's grave really made me cry
mayank want nupur's happens atleast he changing now

so we can wait their romance

as long ur writing those beautiful updates 😉

u rally amazing writer sis masha-allah

thanks for the pm

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Auroni

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it completely...
I ws so engrossed in the grave part...The emotions came out beautifully..Also the dialogues wr very natural yet heart wrenching...
Now im enjoying this pace of the story...
And i also dnt want romance in a hurry as it'll look fake...Just write this way...
Cont soon...

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Naina

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Posted: 13 years ago

that was a very sweet update!.....loved the carnival parts especially.....and im glad that they are becoming so comfortable in the sense that they now have emotional bonding.....and hopefully this will help take away the bitter memories of the past....naina

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SAISakura16

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Posted: 13 years ago

res..will update when I get home

Edited:

Chapter 26

-Such a sweet scene, when she admired him in his sleep…I loved the whole morning, how u described each little thing, it was really nice!

-Loved how she woke him up…

-''that girl fell in love with a guy and made miskakes, big mistake'' Awww…..my poor Nupur! *hugs*

-"truth was things like these were hard to erase they were etched into the heart forever." – So true!

-I totally loved Nupur's convo with her mother. It was very heart wrenching. Sometimes we don't tell our loved ones how much they mean to us until it's too late….and it was such a true dialogue. All the feelings you've put into that convo, was so real….

-Mayank is right….her mother would know. I was really so happy to see how Mayank was such a supportive friend in this part. He was there when Nupur needed him the most. Their bond is very beautiful and the imperfections just make it better.

-Nupur was so cute at the carnival….lol. Just like a little child. I loved the whole carnival part…took me back to my own experience at carnivals…

-Mayank teaching her how to throw the rings ....😍😍

-Awww….now, Mayu is admiring her while she sleep …so cute!!!!

-LOL, he screamed in her ear!!!

- the kiss was beautiful

-the whole chapter was BEAUTIFUL!!!!

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 13 years ago

tht was soooooooooooo cool part

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