Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139 - Page 13

Wow Sajjal..awesome update....
Mayank confuses me so much...sometimes he's sweet to Nupur,smtymes he shouts at her...I feel so bad for Nupur...what mess did she get into?

Waiting for Mayank to realise that Nupur is the right gal for him...but seems like u r gonna make us wait 😆😆....
Update soon..and dnt shorten the updates...make it longer if u want...😉😆
😆

Ahhh one more MNish update sajjal...
Just loveeeed the bathroom part...Mayank in towel..😍😍..The wink of nupur just cracking me up...Really he has nice abs...
The gunur part ws adorable...And i love Samrat for alws being there for Nupur whenever wherever she needs a companion...
Mayank ws rude in the last part...When will he understand her selfless love...But i can wait long for their reunion...
Cont soon with another long update!!! 😆😆

nice update.

Wao sajjal Great part

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me read it ages ago...will comment soon InshAllah😃

loved the gunbur n sam scene

wow....

Hii Sajjal 🤗 * A tight hug* (since meeting you after long) 😳

Gosh , second thread!!! yay

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! 🥳

From where to start now???? 😕

Well, first of all Thanks, for writing Nupur- Jay scenes, but Mayank didnt feel jealous , wats the use?

So, now Please please make Mayank Jealous... Pleaseee 😳

Mayur are married, I still dont know how I wanted to see them
Its true I wanted them to be together 😃 *MayUr forever*
But I still hate Mayank
He is behaving so badly, 😡

SaJan track is also nice..

I love SaNu and Gunur scenes more than MayUr 😃

I want to see angry Nupur now... so that Mayank manaofies her 😳

I have many demands 😆, I hope aap hamari maange puri karenge,
aakhir

"Hume haq hain"

And one more demand

REMOVE PIYA'S PICS PLEASEEE!!!!

*****

Ok so done with my demands, I want to tell you

You are an amazing writer...
You write so wonderfully yaar, I wish I was your student 😳 *Really Genuine wish*

So you could have helped me in learning and improving 🤗
I always liked all my language teachers, they used to pamper me!!! 😆


Now enough, are you bored?
I dont think so,


So please "Meri maange puri karo"
1. Make Mayank jealous
2. Show some anger in my Nupur
3. Take out Pia's pics
three are enough for now...


Very well written
I love everything in this story! 😳

Take care
Love yaa 🤗


Edited by -sam- - 13 years ago

very very nice update sajjal..

Salaam Sajjal n hugs 🤗

sorry i couldn't comment the last 6th parts

but i readed all of it

i'm really speechless hun

i really feeling bad my nups  bad

but i hope mayu realise soon wat he 's doing 😔

can't wait to read other parts

again sorry can't write much comment as i'm using mobile

i hate using it

thank u so much for all the pm's

Love Samira