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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayur-arti.4eva

Kheya,
awesum part Smile
mayur were cute Embarrassed
and loved the way all of them care for nupz Big smile
so lets see whts mayank's plan behind all this Wink
waiting for ur update
really nice part loved it Clap


Krushi


bilkul teri tarha hai na nupur k frnd...
jayse tu hamesa meri care karti hai :)

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridi_onasis

kheya  i thought u forgot this...bt finally u updated...god nupur is getting him all wrong...and when she will get to know the truth she will hurt...nd then mayank will have no way to get her back...


ridi ki roshnee er comnt copy paste korso naki? Wink ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.Shocked ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Hey Kheya
It was awesome update
Just wonderful...

Loved myur a lot
so mayank is still flirty but he was so nice with nupur bcoz he wants to mke her mesmerized
and he was successful on it
i just hope nothing will gos wrong - and i hope mayakspaln wont hurt nupur
amazing update Kheya...

brilliant job
keep it up


thx faria api for ur lovely cpoomnt...

keep reading n criticize :))))

it will help to improve my writing
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Kheya,
thank god k tumne update kia.
i thot, u forgot abt this ff
amazing update 
mayur scene was so nice.
nupur was mesmarized by him...bt mayank only doing this for his plan...i dnt like it.
i hope, he'll realized his mistake soon.
nupur is so innocent...uske sath mayank kuch bura na kare.
plzzz
update soon.
thanks for the pm,.


thsx suja...

u reminded my ff!!!
 sory i was busy in some work dats y late update...

from now will try my best to b regular :)))
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kheya-mayur

Originally posted by ridi_onasis

kheya  i thought u forgot this...bt finally u updated...god nupur is getting him all wrong...and when she will get to know the truth she will hurt...nd then mayank will have no way to get her back...


ridi ki roshnee er comnt copy paste korso naki? WinkShocked


na toh.b/w wo ki comment korse ami sheitai kheyal kori nai...
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged
hey kheya ,
nice writing...Clap
but thoda hindi improve kar and ya typing mistake bhi he thoda..
so improve it...
ok MENE criticize kar liya LOL ab achhi baatein...

LUVED this part ...
ausum...
par mayank nupur ko sirf use toh nahi kar raha i mean is he just doing time pass like others???????????
next part me clear kardena...
aur woh bhi jaldi...Wink


luv,
khushi...

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khushisati

hey kheya ,
nice writing...Clap
but thoda hindi improve kar and ya typing mistake bhi he thoda..
so improve it...
ok MENE criticize kar liya LOL ab achhi baatein...

LUVED this part ...
ausum...
par mayank nupur ko sirf use toh nahi kar raha i mean is he just doing time pass like others???????????
next part me clear kardena...
aur woh bhi jaldi...Wink


luv,
khushi...



lolz.hindi to improve nahi honewala bcz dat not my language...
n ha sab kuch clear ho jayega...tune sari parts nahi padi kya? sari parts padegi to thoda bohot clear ho jana chahie

n typing mistake...i know bohot hai.will try yr...

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