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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged

hi....mere pyare pyare yaarlog..Smile..

mujhe bholl gaye kya???? Confused

main hoon....sukklover as ur Tama..Smile..

yaad aya...good..

i miss u all a lot dears...Cry.

my net is so slow yaaras..so i 'm not able to post my siggies..ConfusedOuch..

so, i write a one short...think that u all like that.if not plzzz donn't throw me ur jooti n chappls.LOL...

through it i want said u all how much i miss u all.....hope u all like it..Smile..

yadhain...

Date:14th Feb...

Hospital me do nurse apase me baat kar rahi hai...

"Yaar ajj ka din bhi duty..chalna Sir se chutti.."

"pagal ho gayi kya yaar...Dr.Sumit se dat nehi kana hai..main appne BF ko wait karne ko..."

"Tum log ja sakte hoon...ajj main sabhal lunga...jao"

"Ssss-i-r....." both nurse screamed..

"Jao..tum log...."

"Sir app akele kyase woh bhi ajj ke din....."

"Kyu...ajj kya hai.....haan tum logo ki V-day hai but mere liye koi special nehi hai"

"Bye...."

"Ok...Sir."

"Yaar yea sir ko kya ho gaya hai.....ajj ke din....sirf ek saal ki baat hai....yaad hai na pichle saal kya huya tha...haan yaar....Dr.Sumit ko ayse pahle kabhi nehi dekha tha yaar...kitna hypier ho gaye the.jayse ki woh unme nehi the...ayse to woh bilkul sant hai.hai na.....aur...."

"Aur kitna hot.......haiiiiiii"

"Tum log chup karoge....suspend hona hai.....tum logoko...Dr. ne jane ko kaha to jao na..."

"Sorry......Mother" both said together...

"Jao abhi......"

Mother Merry,everyone called her as mother.....Head Nurse of Tulip Hospital....

Dr.Sumit ki cabin....raat 2:00am

"Sumit beta....app ajj ghar nehi jayenge..."

"Nehi mother....woh....."

"Beta aggar ayse karoge to khud ki tadiyat kharab ho jayega to dusro kyase thik karoge....jao beta...."

"Mother...main thik hoon...."

"Son......jao.koi emargency hoga to hum appko bula lengy.....jana to bus 4th floor pe hai na.....jao son....."

"Hmmmmm"

Sumit appne cabin se chala jata hai....

"Hey God...plzzz mera son ka kuch karo.....ajj wohi din hai...jo mera son ka zingi ka sabse dhukh bhara din hai....god help my son.."

One bulinding....5th floor...

3rd of them Hospital....4th Dr. Sumit flat....n 5th now unknown to us....

Dr.Sumit....in lift..cilck bottom......floor 5...

Lift stopped at 5th floor...sumit ek chabi lake flat ke darwaje ke samne kada

hai....aur soch raha hai....

"Ajj ek saal baad mai yea ayi hoon....Ajj ek saal pahle.....jis din pure duniya appna pyar ko pane yea pyar ke sath manate hai.....ajj main akela khada hoon....tumhare ghar ke samne....soch raha hoon...andher jane ka haqk hai kya??"

Appna kapte huye haat se darwaja open karta hai....ek bandh flat jo piche ek saal se koli nehi hai kisi ne kya haal hoga usska....makdi ke jaal..dhul....kuch bhi thik se dikha nehi....phir bhi sumit ne light ke switch dundh liya..aur light on kiya....jaha log ko kuch dikhta nehi.kya kare iss flat ka rom rom uss ko pata hai.ek nehi aye to kya huya...light on karke hi usne dekha...ek photo...big size photo....uss photo ke taraf gaya aur appne rumal se saff kiya.....dekha kisika muskurata huya photo....jiske ware soch kar woh ajj bhi muskurata hai.....pure ghar me sumit ek baar gumta hai...hall se leke kitchen tak....ab bari bedrom ka.....jata hai jaha rakkha har ek chiz usski yaad di lata hai....sirf uha ki nehi iss puri ghar ki....bedroom ki kone me usski computer...

"On kyaru kya..??"appne appko hi sawal karta hai....

"Itne dinno tak on nehi kya ...try karta hoon.....ussne to sab sikhyatha...ok..."

thodi mahenat ki baad open ho hi gayi.....

Welcome note...."WELLCOME TO KUMKUM'S WORLD"...

pure PC ko chack karta hai sumit...kyuki ajj tak kabhi bhi ussne usski PC ko chuya bhi nehi....

PC me ek chiz milta hai usse Diary....open

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hai...main kumkum...sayad abhi saygal but kuch dino yea sallo baad main banhi jau Mrs.Kumkum Sumit Wadhwa...hopefuuly yaar...yaar main kitna line marta hoon uss kaduse Sumit pe but dekho to woh mujhe ghass hi nehi dalta...sadu kahi ka.....but kya karu...bhacpan se ajj tak usske sath hi raha hoon....woh humesha mera khyal rah ta hai...aur main usse parisan...sach me school...collage sath me hi ....phir proffeson..woh to kismat ne phir se ek kar diya...woh sadu...khabhi kitna pass ata hai mera.mujhe lagta hai ki........par sadu..kadush usse kon badle ga....ajj tak koi bhi V-day mujhe dinaar to dur ek phool tak nehi diya.kanjoosh.....kya usse nehi pata ki main usse kitna pyar karta hoon.....but nehi woh kyu bolega....appna attitude jo kyam rakhna hai.....chalo iss saal ki yea hai kasam main usse I LOV U bolungi.phir dekhte hai...par yaar yea to boys phale bolte hai..but yaar main kahaki tipical girl hoon...haina...ok...

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duffar.....stupid kya kya bolu uss ullu ke dakkan ko...kya sach me kuch samajh ta nehi yea samjhna nehi cahata....pata nehi....sumit kyu kyu kar rahe hon mere sath..agar pyar nehi karte to bolo na...woh bachpan ke din abhi bhi yaad hai jab tum mere liye ek bade ladke se lad padi the...aur college humesha mera class note sambhate the khud madical ka hote huye bhi meri SW ki notes....main nehi bhool sakti...clg ki dance compitition...drama..har baar mujhe laga ki hum dono ko karib la raha hai..par sayad aysa kuch nehi....par sach me kuch bhi nehi...haan sumit bolo na...aur woh uss raat barish dance...kya woh sab kuch bhi nehi...

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pata hai ajj hum logo ko bich thoda jhagda ho gaya....nehi mainne nehi ki ussne kiya..main to bol rahi thi ki iss baar v-day kam se kam mujhe ek card to do...pata hai ussne kya bola.....ki in fisul ke baat pe usse bharosha nehi..aur....aur woh mera bf nehi to woh mujhe card kyu de.....woh mera BF nehi.....kya sach mein....in haar roj jo khouyab meri dil mein tha woh sab kya savh mein meri sapna tha....siwaye aur kuch nehi....kya in 20 saal mein sirf hum dono sirf dost usse bad kar kuch nehi....ajj feb 12 hai...pata hai..unho ne mujhe new PC gift kiya......pata kyu itni dino tak mere paas PC nehi tha....kyuki hum dono ne milke ek swpana dekhe the ek hospital ki....jo 1st jan ko open huya..mere dad ke paas ek building to tha but purana sa...usske dream mere liye mere jaan se bhi jyada pyari hai......iss liye ab tak main usse kuvch nehi bola....but ajj sab pure ho gaye hai.....usske doctor banneka....yea hospital banane ka...sab puara ho gaya....bus meri dream hi adhura rah gaya..

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sumit itna rude mere sath kyase asakta hai...haan....kal se ajj tak phone nehi uthaya...kal main bhi ghar nehi apayi par woh aysa kyase kar raha hai mere sath....par thik hai.....kal main usske sath.....yaar..ok ajj main kuch jayada nehi bolunga.......but kal jaroor bolunga sumit se.....

I LOV U...WILL U MARRY ME SUMIT????

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Next every page blank.....

"Kya yea last page hai.....iss ka date .....woh 13th feb..."

"Woh meri wajase.....agar main usska.....damm god...main to sirf usske liye surprize...but"

Flashback...

ring......again ring....again n again almost 100 times...

time:near 7pm

date: 14th feb

place: near tulip hospital

one track creash with a bike....all hospital staff...rush to there.....OMG...bike rider was a girl.......oh frik!!!.yea to Kumkum hai.....

One nurse rush to sumit......"Dr.sumit plzzz jaldi ayiye...woh madam."

Sumit just hear madam n run.he knew all nurses called her as madam...run towards the main enternce......

"Kuuuuuuuummmmmmmkkkkkkkuuuuuummmmmm"

"Nurse rush to OT....jaldi...."

sumit push kumkum's chest....again n again...

"Open ur eyes.....KK.plzzzzzz......i.i.'m ssoooorryyyy...."

"wake up kk.wake up...."

"Dr.Sumit...behave like ur self....controll urself...."Dr.Rohit said..

n added "Nurse inhe bahar le jao...."

"Nehi mujhe meri kk se dur karo....plzz rohit...."sumit cried....

"plzzzz sumit..."Rohit said clamly..

Sumit barah to jata hai but uss har nurse ko puchta raha...One nurse said to sumit..."sir.madam is sinking...."

Sumit just hear n rush to OT...Dr.Rohit..."i'said na sumit...just out of here..nurse ready the sock...."

Sumit just stand there...

"1...2.3..on"Rohit tring to KK's heart responding....but no reaction in 1st time....

"Again nursh...1.....2222...........3......on"

But no responce again..they try again n again.....now Sumit could deal wid it more....he rush to kk..n push her chest wid his hand....."wake up kk....just once open ur eyes....iii..mmmmm sorry.....i again say sorry...plzzzz wake..."

he push her...rohit just stand there.he is sumit's frnd.....so he know how much he lov kk....so he just near to sumit n said...."KK is no more sum...woh aur khabhi akhen nehi kholegi.....sorry frnd"

Sumit imedeatly push him...n said"tere jaysa dost hone se dusman hona batter hai"

Rohit bina kuch bole usske paas kada rahta hai.....

Sumit again turn to kk.....n kiss her lips passionetly....n said"I lov u....plz wake up...ajj v-day hai.....chalo dinner pe jaynge plzzzz akhen kholo.kk."

rohit again said him...jark him bitterly....n said"KK is no more sum....plzzz contorll...."

he just mad on rohit.....noone saw him like that before....turn to kk"u cann't die...u cann't leave me along....u cann't die kk....plz wake up...wake up"

that very day on V-day the whole world celebrate wid their lov..he n she always being 2gether in that day.but today he 'll tell her how much he lovs her that very day.but..he lose every thing in that day..... his lov.....his frnd....his life ...his soul..everything...

suddenly his phone rang.n he come back to the present....one dark room....n kk's pc infront of him...he ingnore the phone.....

then again he back in his past...later he come to know....that day him dinn't pick up his phone or not responce sms....so she get worried...she just want to reach him.so she run her bike so fast....at neat tulip.....she creashed wid that track....but then all so she just want to near him...

oance again his phone rang 4 alarm it 5am....he back to scenes....

move the mouse.to set the cursor...on the last written page of kk's diary..

he wrote yea i'll.....marry u...becouse i lov u soooo much...

just after kk written line will u marry me??


 
video cread goes to rah4sukk
plzzzz

 

lov,Heart

Tama



Edited by sukklover - 17 January 2011 at 11:14am

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wonn't any one like it..CryCry...

65 views no comment......CryCry

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
tama zaberdust yar...alfaz naheeClapaur shath mein rona bi aya kumkum bechariCry.hayeee 'sumit kiss kumkum lips passionetly....n said"I lov u...'EmbarrassedDay Dreaming.aur video bi..Day DreamingEmbarrassed

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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hussain juhi come back soon.we miss u alot.......................................................................................Cry

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged
sooooooooo nice thanks
love u juhi

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
OMG....OMG...OMG........Embarrassed
what a OS dear......
Really it is very good......Clap
while i was reading ur Os......i hav tears in my eyes......CryCryCry
You remind me of golden Days of ou "Sumkum"......Smile 
Amaizing work dear......Clap
and that video is the Highlight of ur  OS.......Big smile
Hatts off to you dear........u r star......StarStarStar




Love you all....Heart

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wowwwwwwwwwwww amazing tamaWink Big smile

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