Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

AN ff : Summer Memories Last Forever Pt 7,8 pg26 (Page 3)

mishti_17 IF-Stunnerz
mishti_17
mishti_17

Joined: 07 November 2009
Posts: 28536

Posted: 16 January 2011 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Hey Shale, new FF.. CongratsHug
This is a total different concept... Niki has a daughter.. Now waiting for the FF to begin.. Since yesterday I was feeling bad coz Khush's FF ended Unhappy But your PM came as a pleasant surprise... Thanks a lot..

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

wow123

wow123 IF-Rockerz
wow123
wow123

Joined: 23 September 2009
Posts: 8295

Posted: 16 January 2011 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Kalindi-

Hey Shale, new FF.. CongratsHug
This is a total different concept... Niki has a daughter.. Now waiting for the FF to begin.. Since yesterday I was feeling bad coz Khush's FF ended Unhappy But your PM came as a pleasant surprise... Thanks a lot..
thnx dear
 
 but i already begin the ff, You haven't read the first part dear. I pm u all after pasting the first part.
sabihaa. IF-Sizzlerz
sabihaa.
sabihaa.

Joined: 02 January 2010
Posts: 10625

Posted: 16 January 2011 at 5:15am | IP Logged
SHALEEEEEEE!!

OMG. You've started the FF. I was so excited when you PMed me.. and now, it's all starting.

I am so touched at your words, it really means a lot Shale. ILY a lot. :D

& WOW. What a beginning.. and what a daughter! She's chirpy like Nikki.. but I sense a lot of a certain Mr. Modi in her as well.

Hurry up & update. :P

<3.

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

wow123Amy_an

jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz
jyothi_cool
jyothi_cool

Joined: 16 May 2005
Posts: 12840

Posted: 16 January 2011 at 5:20am | IP Logged
amazing shale loved it cont soon

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

wow123cherry_an

wow123 IF-Rockerz
wow123
wow123

Joined: 23 September 2009
Posts: 8295

Posted: 16 January 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -saBii-

SHALEEEEEEE!!

OMG. You've started the FF. I was so excited when you PMed me.. and now, it's all starting.

I am so touched at your words, it really means a lot Shale. ILY a lot. :D

& WOW. What a beginning.. and what a daughter! She's chirpy like Nikki.. but I sense a lot of a certain Mr. Modi in her as well.

Hurry up & update. :P

<3.

 
Hey Sabii
 
I m glad you enjoyed it. My words are not enough to praise u for ur work u done for making this siggie. I liked it so much that you given what i exactly want.
 
thnx yes Alya is very much like her mom. Oh so you felt the presence of Mr. Modi without my mentioning in it.
 
I have given u the update dear some time back, Now u have to wait for next weekend. Can't help it before

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

sabihaa.

cherry_an IF-Stunnerz
cherry_an
cherry_an

Joined: 03 May 2010
Posts: 39599

Posted: 16 January 2011 at 7:58am | IP Logged

omg shaleHug

as i sed earlier that too manier timzz
itz so so b'ful as i expected 4m u! n way beyond that
coz itz diffrnt zara hatke!Embarrassed
i mean agen that showz ur maturness through ur storyline n style of writinggg..Big smile
i hav read many ffz on AN bt still ths is vryyyy much diffrnt nd apperd all new without ny repititn...
m sooo proud of u to select such a difficult storryline
coz wat u hav chosd iz so much challenging dearrrr! i really lov it to the core
first of all the way  u hav started ur ff
itz fab dear!Star
i mean comparing surroundingz wid her inner emotionz waz superb!Big smile
m happy that evn if she had bitter past bt still she iznt feeling that it waz her mistak bt took it az cherishble momnt of hr life!  that shwz ther tru lov....Embarrassed
there r manny smalll small thingz u hav writtn in ur ff thatz so amaziing!Big smile
lov alyaa-nikkki relatn, i mean itz mothr-daughtr relatn so it shud b spcl bt here shez th onlly parent n thatz y itz vryy stronger than nything! so adorableSmile
lov ther convo n nikkiz answerz to her belovd small cuttiee to mak hr undrsatnd smthinggEmbarrassed
N then alya having tinge of her fathr izz sooo good!
the way u hav describd iz completely awesom...
N sonia charactr iz too vry strongSmile
n now m vryy curious to c watz gona haappnn next??
as they hav reachd to there destinatn.....
 
the thing  i feel vry rare n unexpected n  coz of whch m soo excited iz
4 the first tim ther proffesn iz diff...they  rnt doczz...
so thr personalitiez wil deffer a lilSmile
so m really lukin 4ward to wat gona haapn??
n hw shez gona deal wid evrthingg!!!!
 
n lov ur style of writing n nikki narrating her life her past n present her feelingzz...SmileSmile
 
in short
i lovvvvvv ur 1st part
n so ur ff! itz so intrestingBig smileHug
n so beware!!!!  itz excellnt so that meanz m gona mak ur life hell by spammin ..ur thrdLOL
bt az u hav mentiond that u gona post onlyy in weekendz! tu bach gayiiiWinkBig smile
 bt stiil mai adaat se majbuur hoon ya!Embarrassed
cnt help it! ill try not to trbl u!
bt cant promisEmbarrassedWinkLOL
 
waitingg eaglyy 4 next part
each n evry part iz gr8t!!
n  lov it to bitzzzzz
 
tc dear
n update soooon
wil b waiting 4 ur pmm!!!!!!!!!
regardzHug
-chaituu
 


Edited by chaitali_an - 16 January 2011 at 8:03am

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

wow123Amy_an

cherry_an IF-Stunnerz
cherry_an
cherry_an

Joined: 03 May 2010
Posts: 39599

Posted: 16 January 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by wow123

@chaitu i liked ur dhamkedaar entry where u reserved three slot instantlyLOLLOLI m gald u liked the characters which very less as compare other.WinkStory revovles only this two and other characters comes n go but no significance of much. I know now u going to make my life hell now onward. Saying update but i'll tell you i provide u update only on weekend. I can see you already started pestering me on my thread but behave urself on my thread.LOL
meri entry toh dhamakedaar honiii hi chiyye na dear
or wo bhi tere thrd pe to zaruur honi chiyyeWinkHug
arey i waz soo excited ke pagalon jaise post krtii rahi maiLOLLOL
waz soo excited coz of charactrz ! n diff concpt!!Big smile
u hav provd uaself one mor tim gaaalThumbs Up
n i lov u 4 that1!!  u alwaz hav somthing unpredictabl in ua mind...
i knew u agen gona surpriz me wid ths thatz y ths tim i dint pressuriz ma mind to think..or to guess muchh1
coz  i knw i wil neva reach to ur imagination..WinkLOL
so mai chup hi baithiiii!Embarrassed
 
@bold--hum besharam logomese hai
-yeh behav krna hume nahi aata
or sikhna bhi nahi hai samjiiTongueTongueBig smile


Edited by chaitali_an - 16 January 2011 at 8:10am

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

wow123Amy_an

Amy_an IF-Rockerz
Amy_an
Amy_an

Joined: 15 December 2010
Posts: 6696

Posted: 16 January 2011 at 9:09am | IP Logged
 
Shale, you are an awesome writer..ClapClapClapClapClap
 
I just loved the beginning.. A perfect beginning for another matured story..Scene is simply outstanding, marvelous and amazing..ClapClap
 

You know I'd gone out for a movie with friendz and practically rushed back home just to read your FF.. and itz just brilliant.StarBig smileBig smile

I actually visualized the whole cute conversation between Nikki and Alya, the way you expressed it..  Alya ' name is so cute n awwwww d kid is so sweet n adorable..

I loved the way you've described Nikki's feeling.. Its so beautifully captured..

And there is a spice of Mystery in the storyShocked
 
"Even in Pune, with only her daughter's gray eyes and her face texture to remind of him, his memory was never far from her. She couldn't begin to count the many times she laid in bed, big enough for two and imagined him beside her. Abandoning the reality, his firm, toned body intertwined with her own giving pleasure and taking it to the delights of passion, sharing with each other once again that very special something that had existed so briefly in what had seemed to be another world. Now she doubted her own decision that it was wise idea to come here once again where memories haunted her relentlessly forever.

"Mommy, we have reached" Alya's squeal in delight recalled her mother quickly from her wanderings. Nikita step out from car with her daughter and roam her eyes around whole camp and remembering all the past memories which she had spent here. Some memories she never want to live again but this place bring her more close to those memories which she accepted or not but cherish her whole life. Nikita closed her eyes to erase those memories from her mind but his face appeared to her with those same passionate eyes looking at her."

OMG.. . you are going to kill me with this mystery till your next update..CryCryCry

How could you expect me to work on my next update when you leave me restless with just beginning of story' Am finding difficult to concentrate on my ff now.. OuchOuch

Now am desperately waiting for Abhi's entryDay Dreaming

 
Please do not make us wait too long for next update' Please update soon..
And you definitely deserve a big Huga nd lods of ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 


Edited by namy_an - 16 January 2011 at 9:11am

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

wow123sabihaa.

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Summer romance: Iqbal Neha FF Part 6

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 13 14

Author: jasminerahul   Replies: 106   Views: 5870

jasminerahul 106 5870 02 November 2010 at 7:55am by kmh2rockzz
When Summer Comes(AR) Sry Pg8

2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Author: moda.vintage   Replies: 56   Views: 5037

moda.vintage 56 5037 07 September 2009 at 11:44am by moda.vintage
Summer Affairs: Pg.40 Ch.15(last)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 51 52

Author: neha9   Replies: 411   Views: 110502

neha9 411 110502 24 August 2009 at 5:36pm by Shafoo
Summer Love: Page 67 LAST PART!

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 68 69

Author: neha9   Replies: 545   Views: 155870

neha9 545 155870 19 August 2009 at 7:37am by love_KYPH
Bewafa-LAST PART(pg.44)2nd to last(pg.43)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 55 56

Author: simplyconfused   Replies: 441   Views: 131355

simplyconfused 441 131355 07 February 2006 at 9:12pm by nabz8888

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index