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***PARADOX***
concept 1
part 7


Merea- maan....
Maan- umm....
Mera- I am sorry for yesterday....
Maan snize..... Hacuuuuuu.....
Brij- got.... I always tell geet to control her mouth.... Control your one to.... Who have told you to drink soup from her bowl.....
Maan- who cares..... Hacuuuuuuu.... Ad Merra... It's ok... But my answer is still no.
Merra ran of crying again....
Brij- gos... Why can't she ask me out....
Maan- go ahead.... She is all yours.... Hacuuuuuu....
Birji- euuu.... Stay way from me... U GN give me ur and geets germs.....
Maan- hachuu.....
Briji runs off....

Maan managed to Leave early. He also started to get high fevers. He started to be greedy... Knowing his chef who won't be able to cook good dinner he make his way to Handa haveli....
Maan- Hacuuuuuuu.....
Geet was in the living room... Laying on the sofa with a spread.... Half sleep And half watching telly..... She peeps....
Maan- hachuuuuuuuu..... Move fatty.... Geet was tinny in height.... She moves....
Maan- hachuuuuuuuu....
Geet- euuuuu..... Snize somewhere els.....
Maan- I got it from you....
Maan- hachuuuuuuuu..... Move... Give me the spread. I am cold.... Spread was huge. Both managed to cuddle in on either side of the sofa... Geet still tirade and drowsy... She feel sleep again....
Rano walks in with soup. Bit shocked.... Now she have two to look after.....
Maan- mom... Hachuuuuuuuu.....
Rano- oh great. Maan....
Maan- sorry mom... Hachuuuuuuuu.....
Rano- I thought you could help me to feed geet... Now you are I'll as well.
Geet- hachuuuuuuuu......
Darji along with geets dad walks in....
Darji- what happen to maan? He quickly walks towards him And cks his forehead....
Darji- have you called the doctor?
Geet gives a maan a angry look. She is Ill to.... Maan ignores....
Geet- Darji I am ill to....
Darji- oh... I am sorry beta.... Have you called the Dr?
Rano- ji pappa....
Geets dad Cheks both forehead.... High fever..

Rano calls maans mum and dad to let them know... Maan is here and ill.... Soon as Darji left showing all the love to maan... She snaps.....
Geet- why do you have to get Ill at the same time as me?
Maan- I didn't invite the illness....
Geet- yea yea... I know.... Geet hides her self under the spread...
Maan wasn't that bad after taking medication.... His taste buds didn't disspear like geet... Her nose was blocked. Ear and barley could open her eyes....
She was resting her head on maans lap... Watching film.... Maan kept telling her not to... As it's 12 +. She refused... But she slept through out the film... Maan didn't care. He was more concerned on his food... Which Rano started to become tirade of cooking....
Geet- why don't you go home? You are not Ill....
Maan- umm... What to leave you those delicious food to make you more fat?
Geet gives him a glare....
Rano twists his ear..
Rano- so that's why you are here?
Maan- no... Of course no....
Geet hides her self under the spread again... Still on maans lap....
Shila along with Brij Dev... Yash walks in....
Shila feels geets forehead....
Maan- move Shila... I can't see the telly....
Shila- you not even ill anymore... Go home.
Maan- hmm... Ok let's go....
Shila- I am not going....
Maan- well then shut up. Because if I go. I will take all of you with me.
Geet takes another tissue from the pack which maan was holding....
Shila- euuuu.... Snotty nose....
Maan- do you want some? Take it....
Brij laughs... Maan throughs the tissue at him.....
Brij runs to the shower.
Geet- I have such a idiot brother.
Shila- yep....
Evening went well.... After the dinner everyone left....
Geet was still lying on the sofa.... Sleeping....

Next few days went by routine... Maan was always there as usal to eat geets food as she couldn't finish at all.... She hardly ate... She lost few kg. Maan was sure. Even Rano agreed with maan.
Maan- don't eat like a pig again fatty. Otherwise you will gain them back. Geet throughs a bread at him across the dinner table before Darji shouts at her....

2nd football practices....
Coach- how are you feeling geet?
Geet- good coach....
Coach- same thing again. I want you to finish the one whole lap....
Geet smiles...
Coach looks at maan. He was wearing his kit. All ready....
Coach- yes....
Maan- I will train Geet and shila... I play for team A. Sourthen house.
Coach smiles- yes go ahead....

Maan was already build up. He just turn 16... While geet nearly 11. Geet was still a kid. She was so tiny and chubby... She did really look like football. She only came to just over maans whist... Same with shila except she is skinny. Anorexic. Everyone moans at her to eat more... But she seems to not put any weight at all....
Maan started to shout as Geet started to jog. He walked with broken hand as Geet jogged. And shila along... She decided to keep geets pace....
Geet- stop shouting at me.
Maan- what els you expect me to do? If you go slower then a snail.
Geet- did you come here to help me? Or stop me?
Maan- umm... Both....
Shila- bro... Stop it. She will cry again....
Days went well... Geet enjoyed her lovely football session... Maan was bit more nice and started to shout less as her lap finishing time started to improve day by day....


Khurana house...
Avantika- how is geets football training going?
Maan- good... She improved allot... First day it took over hour to finish... Now round about 50-55 minute... She have long way to go. But she is improving. She have lost weight.
Avanika- that's great. Darji and veer already have heart problem. We don't want geet to get in any serous illness...  Specially at this age....
Maan- shut up mom... She is perfectly fine. She is only 10. Soon as she started to grow in height she will naturally loose weight.
Avantika smiles... And kisses maans forehead....

Back to training.... It's been just over month Geet and shila have started to play football. It's been amazing. Shila have improved allot. She finishes he 5 lap in 6.7 minute. While Geet was still working with one lap.
Her weight have gone down to over weight.... Maan kept a track...
Maan- hurry Geet... I need to go.
Geet- what's wrong with you?
Maan- look... Hurry otherwise I will make you do 2 whole lap 2moro....
Geet gives him a glare and stands on the weighing machine....
Maan- ok... 46 kg.... Come here... Geet stands in front of him.... Maan holds her by shoulder..... Stand still.
Geet- I am. Stop moaning at me.
Maan gives her a glare.... He measures her hight... 4.2 ince.... BMI... 29...
Maan- maybe 6-7 more month... Then you are done... U will be back to normal weight.
Geet- when you taking your bandage out?
Maan- umm.... This week.
Geet- before my 11th birthday? She asks excitedly....
Maan- yes...
Geet gives him a wide smile....
Maan ignores...
Maan- mom she is not a obese anymore.... Just over weight.
Rano- that's amazing....
Geet smiles- can I have ice-cream as a treat mom.
Maan- no...
Geet- per ku????
Maan- mom... She will waste all my effort that I have put in for past month.
Geet looks at maan annoyed...- only reason you were with me because your hand broke. You had nothing better to do.
Rano- don't talk like that... He still Helped.
Geet- but I didn't eat ice-cream over a month now.... I love bro. maan is so cheap.... Atleast bro buys me ice cream...
Maan- yea yea... And that's why you transferred from obese to over weight....
Geet makes a baby face for ice-cream....
Rano smiles- fine... I will make a mango flavor one...
Maan- that's unfair.
Rano- hmm....
Maan- I asked a mongo flavor ice-cream.... You didn't make me any.
Geet- she is my mum. Go and tell your mum.
Maan gives her a glare....


Next- angry maan...Angry


hay you all' thanks for all the love and support' ty so much. LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS :D here is the next one' OO angry maan' i wonder why???
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 21 January 2011 at 5:37pm

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 9:59am | IP Logged
where is concept 3 updates

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 10:02am | IP Logged
Muhahhahah. 2nd.
Lovely update. Wonder why masn is angry.
There relationship is opening up. And maan. Owow he shut her mum up. That shows how much care he have for Geet.
Lovely update. Pls update soon.
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Edited by BadGirlKiss - 20 January 2011 at 10:15am

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THANXS A LOT

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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Loved it yara...*the most innocent heart in this universe is of child*... Whatever it may be..:.. Even if maan is planning to take revenge.. But his heart will be pure... Continue soon chap..

Edited by SimplyAparajita - 21 January 2011 at 4:27am
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Posted: 20 January 2011 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Y is maan angry now..... Loved it..... Good she is lossing wheight....

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loved it yaar....so cute one ..maan helping geet ..

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tat was soooo cute....
maan is being caring,n i loved tat....

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