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PLKG90 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
Lovely!!!!!! can't wait for the next part!!!

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 6:49am | IP Logged
hahahahaha tat wz funny
poor maan....he sure wz embarrased!
loved it!
wonder how will maan take his revenge?!!?LOL

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-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Liked both tha parts
Its so wrong
Anyone will do anythg n will blame Geet n Maan believes
He is so bad
Im not at all liking him
I really want Geet to retort back n becum slim soon
Update soon

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LOVELY comments. thanks u all. billions of love and kisses…
one more on its way D

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part 5
concept 1

Shila and Geet walks to join the instructor. While maan and Birji sat on the side watching them.

Instructor- hello girls and boys.
Everyone- hello sir...
Instructor- I am Joe and u all can call me coach. Is that ok! He shouts....
Everyone jumps...
Coach- is that alright? He shouts again...Louder this time.
Everyone- yes coach.
Coach- good. Now... This teams age group is from 10-14. Beginners. There are 15 of you. Nun of you have never played football. Is that correct?
Everyone- yes coach.....
Coach- great... Let's start.....

Geet was the odd one out....
Coach- start with 3 lap now....
Geet stood there still. She wasn't even sure if she could do one lap. Was this man insane? Telling her to do 3 laps.
Geet- coach... Are you sure? I can't even run properly!
Coach- Geet.... Is that right?
Geet nodes....
Coach- if you don't try Geet... You will never achieve your goal......
Geet nodes again...
Coach- would you like it if your brother and his friend make fun of you.
Geet- no couch... She whispers....
Coach- I want you to speak louder Geet....
Geet- no coach...

Maan and Birij- sat there amused... They were rather enjoying it. They knew well geet could never complete single lap...

Coach- I want you to start with one lap. Jog slowly. Alright.
Geet nodes...
Geet- yes coach...
Coach- now.... Go go go....

Geet started to jog slowly... She was slow... But her aim was small. She had to finish all of this to shut her bro and maans big fat mouth. She brought this nice boots. She need to get some use out of this...

Geet started to jog. She could here her brother and annoying Maan laughing. Shila was very first... She already have finished all three lap and on the last one she decided to give Geet company...
Geet- you expect me to decorate room for him?
The whole hour session went by jogging for geet while everyone practices football. She had loose at least some weight and jogging is the best for this specially if a coach is there to shout when ever she stopped. She felt dizzy... But she still kept going. It was slower then walking pace but her aim is to finish the lap... Nothing els....
Shila- they are so mean...
Geet- I hate them all.
Shila looks at both and told them to shut up. Which made maan laugh louder.
Maan- oy geet... Puri din laga degi ka....
Geet ignore... Only few mote meter then she is done....

After the practice... Geet couldn't walk. She pulled a muscle. Her feet was hurting like hell. Her arm from stretching....
Coach Looked at Geet. She kept getting hot flash. It was clearly visible. Coach walked towards her...
Coach- well done Geet.
Geet was panting. Hardly could breath. Everyone in the team was really nice to her. They really didn't make fun of her weight. Everyone was very plight and gave her boost of hopes to come to the next lesson.
Rina- well done geet. You done very well. It's hard. Don't worry. I am sure in a week or two you will do two laps.
Geet- saci?
Shila- muchi... She smiles.
Coach- I want you to drink.... Not fizzy drinks but orange juice... Or any other flavor you like. Try to be healthy Geet. It will help you with your excerxise.
Geet- but... She was worried. She can't stay a second way from her junk food.
Coach- ok... One treat in a week. No more. I want you to start playing football soon.
Birij and maan walks closer...
Coach- your sister doing very well.
Both kept there laugh in.
Maan- yep! We have seen how well Geet have done... Didn't even touch the football.... Geet didn't like his words. It's her first day. Atleast he could say some nice words. Geet walks off in strop along with Shila.
Coach didn't like maans words...
Coach- if you can't motivate anyone... Atleast don't heart there feeling. For your kind information for her first day... She have done very well. Coach walks off leaving thoughtless maan....

Geet- you are so mean. At least a well done would be nice....
Maan- well dine my foot. You have told everyone.
Geet- for the last time I haven't told anyone...
Maan- yes you have... Otherwise how did everyone know???? Nothing staies in your big fat tummy... Does it?... Maan poles Geet tummy....
Geet- ouch....
Maan mocks- ouch.....
Geet was still breathless... Her face was bright red. Bit embarrassing... But it's just maan and bro.....

Maan Geet, Birji and Shila walks in khurana mansion. Geet and Shila walks in shills bedroom. Both quickly takes a shower and changes while maan and Birji left somewhere.

Shila- ignore maan bhi. He is just annoyed with you.
Geet- atleast he could have said well done... But nooo... He hav to show his stupid ego.
Taila shills mom walks in...
Taila- hello darling. How was your training?
Shila- it was great mom. Geet was really good. She have done one whole lap.
Taila was over exited. At last geet was doing some excersise. That was enough for them.
Taila- well done hunny. This call for a treat. She gave a Geet a bear hug.
Geet- thank you aunty. Geet blushed. Taila always knew how to pamper Geet. She was best at that with anyone.
Shila- mom make us fruit salad. Coach told Geet not to eat any more junk food. All healthy. He wants Geet to see play football with us.
Taila smiles... And leaves.
Shila- and mum... Send our dinner to maan bhis room. Geet and I will decorate his room... So he doesn't tell Darji about our football and makes is stop.
Taila- what? Why would maan do such thing?
Geet- you know his Girly pic... Everyone knows about them. And he thinks I have told them but I haven't.... She tried to sound convincing... I don't want to be his punching bag.
Taila laughs- don't worry He won't...

Geet walks in to maans room... They had few helpers to redecorate his room.
Geet- are you sure maan won't be angry at us!
Shila- no of course no......

Maan came home round about 9... He was so tiared that he didn't even bothered to turn his bedroom light on... He decided to slam his body to the bed. Which was across his door..... He lands.... Then shouts in pain..............

part 4

part 6

Next- Maan nurses Geet'Shocked why??? i thought it would be geet nursing maan'ROFL

sorry for the mistake' i am in a hurry' SORRy' thanks for all the love and support keyama
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 19 January 2011 at 12:10pm

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i know why..the bed would have been moved & he would fallen flat on the floor
love the update...conti sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

Edited by muskanp - 19 January 2011 at 8:24am

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loved it yaar..awsome one !!! precap is so so interesting ...waiting for it 

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