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***paradox*** THREAD 1 (Page 57)

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***PARADOX***
part 4
concept 1


Maan sat in his room fuming like a volcano. He couldn't believe him self. Maan sing khurana dressed up like a girl for that stupid Geet and Shila. I was so happy then that we have female in our family. Now I regret every moment & that Geet. She so have to pay for this.

Next day...

Geet was supper exited about her new football club. She brought her red shoes in to show it to Shila. Who also wanted join the football club.
Shila- have you brought one for me?
Geet- oh no! I completely forgot. Tell maan he will buy you one.
Shila- when at you starting?
Geet- from today. Birji and maan taking me...
Shila- I am also coming.
Geet smiles...
Geet- oh yea... Do remember maan dressed up as a girl when we born... When he was 6. And those picture... He cuddled both of us in his arm...
Shila- oh yea.... She was laughing. And he changed in to girls cloths to blend in with us.
Geet nodes with a smile...
Maan walks in with frustration. Brij teasing him from behind along with Dev and Yash.
Maan couldn't take it anymore... He looks back and shouts at everyone...
Maan- SHUT UP.... His voice echoed through out the school.
Geet bumps in to maan who was giving her pure evil glare. Angry....
Geet- I haven't told anyone. It was Birji.
Birji along with Tony and few other girls was killing them self laughing. Pulling his cheek.
Geet- promise I haven't told anyone.
Maan- tujce to me bad me dekh lungi...
Geet- but I haven't done anything. Promise. I never lie....
Tony- well done Geet. Now we know why he never dates a girl.
Maan gives Geet another glare... She was about to cry...
Suddenly a girl came from the crowed... And holds maans hand....
Mera- is it that's why you refuges me maan?
Maan- what? What the hell.... He was getting really P off now. Obviously any news that relates to him the whole school will want to know. And it's defiantly like Chinese wishpear. Mera defiantly taking this in a wrong way.
Tony- maan... This is hilarious. One news and ....
Maan just couldn't take Any more laugh anymore.... He screams out- SHUT UPPPPP....... With his one shout everyone went quit... Even the teachers.... Wondering what's the matter.
Mr milen- Maan! What is this? Why you making so much fuss?
Maan- sorry sir. Maan didn't remove his gaze from geets. Who was about to cry any minute.
Mr milen- everyone back to your class. He shouts... And in matter of minute everyone disappeared...

Geet sat in the classroom. Still a bit scared.
Geet- why when Birji does something... I get the blame. Specially with maan.
Shila- ignore both. They are an idiot.
Geet- but what's my fault. He said he will Se me later. I hope he is not planning anything bad for my football club.
Shila- yea... He also play...
Geet distracted- not for the same club
Shila- yea... That's right.
Geet- I am scared... Last time he told Darji. And I was grounded for whole 2 months. I don't want that again. Geet started to cry... What if he cancels my football club. And then....
Shila- don't worry. Bro won't do anything. I think you should try to cheer him up. Decorates his room....
Geet started to become exited...- that's a great idea....
Shila- maybe pink.... She mocked and burst out in laugh....
Geet- mazak math kar yar... I don't want him to tell Darji and stop my football practices. He uses me as a punching bag when he is angry... I need some protection...
Shila- that's so bad yar. Bro does use you as a punching bag. We should protest.
Geet- yes... No.. No... No... Are you crazy? I will decorate his room. That will cheer him up.
Shila- I will help you to.
Geet nodes.

Maan couldn't control his anger at all now. He sat in his classroom. Birij couldn't help him self not to laugh. While Merra crying for complete wrong reason. And everyone... Just couldn't stop staring at maan. Imagining him in a pink dress.

Maan snaps off as the bell rang. His face was bright red in embarrassment and in anger.
Birji- maan! Maan! Stop... Maan....
Maan didn't even give a dam care. It's all because of his sister.
Birij- comen man! Calm down! It's not that bad.
Maan snaps- just wait and watch what I do to your sister.
Birij- comen... She is still a baby.
Maan- baby my foot. She knows how much I hate those photo... But no! She had to blubb out. Nothing satis in her bug fat mouth.
Birij- comen yar... It was just a joke. Everyone will forget everything by 2moro.
Maan- I don't care...
Birij- ok... Calm down. We have to take Geet to the football practices.
Maan smirks- let's see geet... How long you can play football for.

Geet and shila stood by the gate. Geet was shaking. Couldn't even look at Maan. Shila trying her beast not to laugh. After all no one could Imagine maan in a pink dress.

Drive to the pitch was silent. Geet sat between maan and Shila. She didn't look at him at all. Whole trip was silent.

Geet and Shila quickly ran to the changing room. And came after while wearing there gears and boots. Maan was bit surprised seeing Shila join as well. It looked like elephant and rat.
Maan- I never knew you want to play as well... Where did you get the kit?
Shila- umm... Bro... I mean Dev gave me his.
Maan nodes- let's go'

part 5

next- Football practice' geet have to do one whole lap'Shocked



Hay you all' thank you so much for all the love and support' THANKYOU THANK YOU THANK YOU
LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS' HEHE' lucky day' i finished my work early' here is the 2nd one for the day :D
hope u love it'
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 19 January 2011 at 11:38am

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
gitss soo cutteeeeeEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
 
i m greedy i wnt more!
 
 
i think nw maan will make fun of geet....LOLLOL
n then whn he goes 2 his room n see geet decorated fr him he l feel guilty..
anyways woteva u think is gonna b awsum lov it!EmbarrassedWink


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awesome update....lovong track...!!!Smile

gosh maan is so angry wid her....hey babaji geet ko bacha lena...Cry

looking forward to how maan is going to take his revenge...!!

meera is really dump....how come she think like that vo bhi apne MSK ke liye...lolz...poor meera...!!!






Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 18 January 2011 at 1:24pm

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oh my god geet is in trouble hope maan doesnt do anything stupid plz but loved whn mera started crying

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great part.
cant wait for the nxt update.
do continue plz.
thx.

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lovely update keyama......geet nd football..lets seeLOLLOLLOLLOL

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oh my god!!! poor geet i feel sorry for her......i mean its not her mistake.......god what maan will do now.......anyways love them both......imagine our maan in pink dressROFL......heheh funny......update soonWink

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