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untamedtigress IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
plz dear we want concept 1 fast and regular and the concept 3 too we know we're being greedy but sab chalta hai wen it comes to keyamz updatesWinkLOL

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Ballumau Groupbie

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged
all 3 r nice but i like the last one :)Smile

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swetha10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
all three are gud.. liked concept 1 more..

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FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
updates on its way… xxx

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punjabi.princes IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
which concept have you chosen??

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 2:12pm | IP Logged

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princess163 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by FIRESafiReFIRE

updates on its way' xxx
me waiting.......
how much time?

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FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 January 2011 at 2:20pm | IP Logged

part 2
concept 1...

Maan- Geet move! Otherwise...
Geet- other wise what?
Maan- move you fatty... Maan snaps out.
Geet looks at him in anger. She was embarrassed and top of it he was calling her fat...
Geets eyes was bright red. She could murder maan with those eyes.
Maan looks back... Bit petrified... Then in one bang she shuts the door on his face. Maan managed to remove his foot just on time...
Brij walks up...
Brij- what happen?
Maan- ouch!
Brij- hmm...
Maan- I just called her fat!
Brij- that's because she is....

As the evening went by... Everyone started to play hide and seek except Geet... She was crying her eyes out in her room... While maan downstairs feeling a bit guilty... He wasn't sure him self....

Geet laid on her fluffy bed. Annoyed.... Everyone made fun of her weight. What could she do if she doesn't loose any wait. As she spoke she shoved in some more crisps in her mouth. There was fizzy drinks on the side table... Whole evening the children enjoy there day without Geet....

Next day... Bc to school...
Geet slowly walks in. She was looking a bit pale... Shila was a bit concerned.
Shila- what happen geet? Tu thik to hi na? She feels her forehead.
Shila- umm.... It feels fine...
Geet- I didn't eat my breakfast. & I am so hungry.
Shila- why did you skip breakfast?
Geet- that idiot cousin of yours. Never helps me with HW! And after I am all done... When sweet Yash helps me.... After that he decided to show his ugly face and offers help. And when I refuged he called me fat..... She makes a baby face.
Shila- skipping breakfast won't help you to loose weight. It will make you Ill .
Geet- what els way I could do to loose weight then?
Shila- umm... Exercise. Use Brij jim.
Geet- no... Maan also sometime use it. It stinks like them. I will ask mum and dad to make me one...
Shila- or.. We could go for a jog every morning. Fresh air and more effective.
Geet nodes...
Dev and Yash joins...
Yash- hi babes... What's up?
Shila- me and Geet planning to go for a jog everyday. Would you like to join?
Yash- why don't you join football club with us?
Geet and shills mouth fell right open...
Geet- umm... Football and me? Are you crazy? I can't even move from here to there with out stopping & you want me to join football.
Yash- it will help you to keep track of your body.
Geet- no! No... No...
Shila- I will join.... She said teasingly while looking at Yash.
Geet and Dev gives her a look.... They knew well Shila had massive crash on him... While Yash had no intention....
Geet- alright... But you won't laugh and anticipate with me.
Yash- sure...
Dev- so... Shall we start from 2more morning and afternoon.
Geet- what? Twice? No! What?
Yash- you want to loose weight na!
Geet- of course...

Later on lunch Geet goes ad mets up with her bro to buy all the necessary gears....

Brij & maan were with his other friends. Talking. They had there year 11th exam soon. It was in summer but maan wanted to prepare early. After all it's his final year. He wanted set  a Big example.

Rony- oy Brij there comes your fat sister.... There all friends laughs... Brij was so embarrassed.
Brij- when this girl will lose Some weight...
Maan and others laughs...
Brij- she makes me embarrassed everywhere.
Maan laughs louder...

Geet looks at them all... Not happy the way they were all laughing at her....

Geet- bro... I need to go shopping.
Maan- I think food shopping.
Tony along with few other girls laughed louder....
Geet felt so hurt. She felt like crying he eyes out. This was normal but today it felt 10x wars... He made fun of along with some girls to. They were slim and pretty. Really beautiful... She felt so ugly between them. There was tears welding up in her eyes... She stopped...
Birji- shut up yar... Stop it.
Geet felt a bit better... But maans teasing hurt her the most.
Birji-why? And what for...
Geet- Yash will help me to learn football I need my boots... Umm football boots. One with hoop. And pink.
Everyone stopped laughing instantly... Whole area went dead silent... Maan just looked at Geet... His face looked like... Someone just thrown a thunder on his head.
Maan- w- w- what? WHAT?
And then one by one everyone started to kill them self laughing.
Birji just stood there like a statue along with maan.
Geet looks round. Tears were building up now and any moment it will erupt.
Geet- b- bro.... She couldn't even speak.... Maan looks round.
Maan- shhh... Shh gyes....
Geet hurries off... Her leg seems to give up. She couldn't even run properly because of her body weight....

Maan- is she insane?
Birji- nodes....
As they walked towards the big exit gate both maan and Birji watches Yash and Dev shaking hand. Laughing there head off.

Yash- that was hilarious. Did Geet really think we will teach her to play football. Have you seen how fat she is? She won't be even able to kick the ball. Running way is far way thing.
Dev- and- and the best bit was when she asked her bro to buy her boots....
Both gave one another high five... Killing them self laughing.
Maan & birj looks at then with crossed arm.
Maan puls his brothers ear and drags him home along with him while Birji gives a very angry look to Yash.
Birj- change... You still have times.

Geet locked her self in the room. Crying her eyes out again. Birj walks in...
Ranno- what happen? Why Geet is in tears again? I have told you to look after her. She is your only young sister. What type of brother are you?
Birj- it's Yash and Dev.
Ranno- I don't care. She is your sister and I expect you to look after her....
Birj- yes mum.

Maan walks in with Dev...
Maan- hi mom...
Rano- hello beta. Rano gives Dev an annoying look and walks in to the kitchen to male dinner.
Maan- I expect you to apologies.
Dev- yes bro.

All three walks in geets room. Her room was half pink and light sky baby blue... It was beautifully decorated.
Geet laid on her big fluffy bed. Under her duvet along with pillows everywhere.
Birj- Geet....
Geet- go way... I hate you..... They couldn't even her her voice as she was hiding her face on the pillow.
Maan looks at Dev to apologies.
Dev- I am sorry Geet...
Geet- I hate the most & Yash. Go way.
Maan- stop it Geet. How could you even think you will play football?
Geet sits up... Her eyes was bright red.
Geet- why? What's wrong with playing football?
Maan- it's not a girl sport.
Birji- it's ok maan. Let's go shopping. I have rang the local children football club. You will be joining there soon.
Maan- what? NO!
Birji- it's ok maan. Let's go. Wash your face and your snotty nose.
Geet jumps up with heaps of happiness looking at maan who is defiantly not happy with her playing football. Specially with boys. Geet shows maan a tongue and runs in to the bathroom.

next- shopping for Pink Boots with hoop' maan still not approvingAngry

HAY YOU ALL' THANKS FOR ALL THE VOTES AND LOVELY COMMENTS'. concept 1 have won with 159 votes' i will also type concept 3'. but not now' later' :D 
pls pls pls do leave me some lovely comments and like' and thanks for al the one you have left' loved them' thanks for all the love and support' love keyama
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 18 January 2011 at 6:16am

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