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Betrayal ~2~... AR FF: Epilogue Updated (Page 49)

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lil_desi_goddes

superb update, loved how you showed the sensitivities of the parents of the bride, when they are preparing for their daughter's wedding, it was soo sweet!
Thanks!  I'm glad you liked that part. 
 
Originally posted by princess_rashmi

gr88888 part,but short one
next time wanna biigggggggggggg part
continue sooon
Thanks!  I'm sorry, as I said, it was only a filler.  I'll try to give you all a BIG part.  I'll continue soon.
 
Originally posted by janu1610

Medzi.... nice part .
AR r awesome .Even i feel ethereal while reading their intimate moments.
They r cutest couple .They complete as well as compliment each other.
Do concentrate on your study .It always our first priority
http://imgfave.lg1x8z.simplecdn.net/image_cache 268270704680671.jpeg
thanks for pm.
love
ritu
Thanks!  Thanks for understanding.  You're welcome.
 
Originally posted by qt4ever

Aww!
Lovely part...
Muskan ke mood swings abhi se??
Hahaha
car scene was sho nyc!
Thanks!  LOL!  

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by meow23

veryy very cute prt
luvd d fite btwn shanky n padma
thnx 4 dpm
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Originally posted by jiyaa

awesome part
continue soon
Thanks!  I'll continue soon.
 
Originally posted by MadhuARKaSh

brilliant...
Thanks!
 
Originally posted by zara-20k

nyc one dear
Thanks!
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww medzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
ek baat bataaoo frm where hav u dne phd in writing hot nd romantic scenes

kyaaaaaa chakkar hai ??
tell tell
lol
arey ur my guru na cc how besharam im am al learnt from ur ff, armaan to mera role model hai
gaaaaaaariiiiiiiii mein shuruuuuuuuuuu waaaaaaaah waaaaaaaahhhh loll
omg that wasssssss sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo seeeeeexyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nd hawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwt as usual guru ji u to full time rooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu luv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

i ju luvvvv ur ff cant thnk how wil i surive wdout it  nd ue ending it
omg im soooooooooooo sad yaaaaaaaaaaaaaar il mis betrayal like anytnggggggggggggggggggggg bt ur studies come first mezzzzz

hheheh omg the kitchen sceneeeeee hayeeeeeee seriusly itna acha room hai wahaan bhejo na kamra lokkkkkkkkk nd dn uhmmmmmmm uhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm u knowwwww my ammmmmmmmmmmmmy is sooooooooo desperrate nd sexxxxxxxxxxyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy gurujiiiii

hawwwwwwwwwwww they were caught that was hilarious scene

itnaaaaaaaaaaa chotta parttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt snif snif bt luvdddddddddddddddddddddd ittttttttttttttttttttttttt hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

romance ki tumne dukaaan kholi hai haina madam
loll

luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnn coz i cant wait main bhi impatienc ki dukaan hunnnnnnnn
take care
nd jaldi se update dedooooooooooooooooooo
luv u luv u luv uuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Rida



Edited by chocolatefreak - 07 February 2011 at 12:23pm

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Medha.

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anushkajain

nice part Star
loved it Big smile
continue soon
Smile
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Originally posted by AMMY12

Nice part
thdanx d pm.
Update soon.
t.c.
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Originally posted by AR_LOVER

awesome part
loved it
cont soon
Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  I'll continue soon.
 
Originally posted by zarqaaahmed

great part!
lovd muskaans mood swings LOL
plzz dont end this ff so soon its too good to end :(
continue soon x
Thanks!  LOLzz!  I'm very sorry, but I have to end it.  I'll continue soon.
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by OpTiMiStIC.cUt

realllly nice and cute part :D:D:D
ager aisey short part miltey rahein daily tou i dont mind loool :P:P
Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  LOL.
 
Originally posted by DRarmaanfan

awesome part
loved it!!!!!
Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.
 
Originally posted by ujaja26

awesome part.
luvd it.
cntinue sooon.
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Originally posted by Iqbal Neha1

great part
Thanks!
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saniashzadi

hey Medz

lovely part dear....

loved AR moments...feels bad that u r ending this ff...but understands ur prob as well...all the best fr ur future works...

update nxt part soon

love

sania

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  I'm sorry.  Thanks for understanding.  I'll update soon.
 
Originally posted by ARKJ_4EVER

heya awesome part!!
AR r soooooo cute EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
n the kitchen scene was great with AR embarrassed.. n Armaan talks - salli...great one...lol!!!

n u're gonna end this ff bt ya studies r very important...good luck with it!!!Thumbs Up

cont soon n thank u 4 the pm
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chocolatefreak

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww medzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
ek baat bataaoo frm where hav u dne phd in writing hot nd romantic scenes

kyaaaaaa chakkar hai ??
tell tell
lol
arey ur my guru na cc how besharam im am al learnt from ur ff, armaan to mera role model hai
gaaaaaaariiiiiiiii mein shuruuuuuuuuuu waaaaaaaah waaaaaaaahhhh loll
omg that wasssssss sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo seeeeeexyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nd hawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwt as usual guru ji u to full time rooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu luv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

i ju luvvvv ur ff cant thnk how wil i surive wdout it  nd ue ending it
omg im soooooooooooo sad yaaaaaaaaaaaaaar il mis betrayal like anytnggggggggggggggggggggg bt ur studies come first mezzzzz

hheheh omg the kitchen sceneeeeee hayeeeeeee seriusly itna acha room hai wahaan bhejo na kamra lokkkkkkkkk nd dn uhmmmmmmm uhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm u knowwwww my ammmmmmmmmmmmmy is sooooooooo desperrate nd sexxxxxxxxxxyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy gurujiiiii

hawwwwwwwwwwww they were caught that was hilarious scene

itnaaaaaaaaaaa chotta parttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt snif snif bt luvdddddddddddddddddddddd ittttttttttttttttttttttttt hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

romance ki tumne dukaaan kholi hai haina madam
loll

luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnn coz i cant wait main bhi impatienc ki dukaan hunnnnnnnn
take care
nd jaldi se update dedooooooooooooooooooo
luv u luv u luv uuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Rida

Ridu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Meri jaan-e-man.  Kaise hain?  First of all, thanks for the teddy bear.  It's really cute!  P.H.D?  LOL!  Dikh raha hain, ki tu kitni besharam hain.  LOL  LOL!  Aise hi thodi na back seat mein bithaaya tha?  Thank you.  Kaan pakar kar sorry.  Even I'll miss Betrayal.  Lekin main OS bhi toh likhungi na.  I loved the kitchen scene as well.  Sorry yaar.  Lekin yeh toh filler tha na.  Abhi fillers itne lambe thodi na honge.  Haan ji.  Maine toh romance ki dukaan hi kholi hain. 
 
Love you, too Ridu.  Hug  *Tight hug* 
I'll update soon, and tu bhi jaldi continue kar, or else mujhse bura koi nahin hoga. LOL
 
Oh, and I love your last sig.  It's beautiful. 


Edited by Medzi_ARian... - 07 February 2011 at 12:37pm

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thnkuuuuuuuuuuu gurujiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
luv amna di 4 da sig shez awesme naaaaaa

u better update sooon main lol ur ff is far mre interestng nd hooooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttt so ur update is hell imp samjhi lol il update soon il tryheheh

luvvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Rida solyyyyyy Riduuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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