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                                                                Part 25
                                                   I Want My Wife Back!
 
Recap: The gang is successful in sending Maya to jail.  Sumit is about to tell everyone about Maya's partner, but the lights go off and someone screams Armaan's name. 
 
They all were shocked hearing someone scream Armaan's name. 
" Yeh toh Riddhima ki awaas hain. " Armaan said worriedly.  At the same time, the lights came back on and Armaan searched for Riddhima.  He panicked when he didn't see Riddhima anywhere in the hall. 
" ARMAAN! " Riddhima screamed again.  They all ran outside and saw Vivek pushing Riddhima into a car and then getting into the driver's seat.  Armaan ran as fast as his legs would let him, but Vivek drove away. 
" RIDDHIMA! " Armaan shouted after her.  The boys ran to a car and followed Vivek.  With all the lights off, it became extremely hard for them to keep track of the car. 
Inside the car, Riddhima was trying her best to get Vivek's grip loose on her wrist, but that wasn't working.
" Vivek chhodo mujhe!  Leave me! "
" Shut up Riddhima! " Vivek got tired of this, and took out the chloroform he had in his pocket, and placed it in front of her nose, and she fainted.  Vivek smiled evily.  He looked in the rear view mirror, and saw the boys following him.
" Not this time Armaan, not this time. " Vivek smirked and drove the car in full speed and Rahul, who was driving the car, lost him. 
" Shit! "
" Kya hua? "
" We lost him. "
" Rahul tumhe gaadi aur tez chalaani chahiye thi na. " Armaan said, trying to stop the tears from coming out of his eyes.
" Amy agar main isse zyaada gaadi tez chalaata toh accident ho jaata. " Armaan looked outside the window. 
" Rahul, gaadi wapas hotel ki taraf le lo. " said Sumit.  Rahul nodded, and reversed the car. 
On their way back, Armaan couldn't hold his tears in for long, and he started to cry while the other 3 consoled him.  They reached the hotel where the girls were extremely worried about Riddhima, especially Anjali.  She cried uncontrollably while the others tried to console her.
" Anji, sab theek ho jaayega.  Sab boys gaye hain na Ridzi ko lene.  Don't worry. "
" How can I not worry Sapna?  Woh Vivek meri behen ko utha kar le gaya hain.  Agar ussne Ridzi ko kuch kar diya toh? "
" Kuch nahin hoga Ridzi ko.  She'll be fine.  Be positive. " Just then the boys entered, and they all went to them.
" Kya hua guys?  Ridzi kahaan hain? " asked Anjali.  The boys didn't say anything, just looked down. 
" Guys I'm asking you something!  Answer me for God's sake! "
" We lost them. " Anjali started to cry again, and they all tried to console her, but all in vain. 
" Main police ko inform kar deta hoon.  Woh apni chhaan-been shuru kar denge. " said Sumit.  They all sat down, and thought about what to do.
" Mujhe ek baat samajh mein nahin aa rahi.  Vivek ne aakhir aisa kyun kiya? " said Muskaan.
" Kyunki Maya ka partner Vivek hi hain. " said Rahul.
" WHAT!? " All the girls exclaimed together.
" Haan.  Vivek shuru se hi Maya ka partner tha. "
" Lekin tujhe yeh sab kaise pata? "
" Sumit ne bataya. "
" Kab? "
" Jab tum log shopping ke liye gaye the tab.  Molly tum girls ko issi liye shopping ke liye le kar gayi thi taaki main inhe sab kuch bata sakoon. "
" Lekin tumne hume kyun yeh sab nahin bataaya? "
" Kyunki main koi risk nahin lena chahta tha. "
" Toh ab toh batao. " Sumit told them everything and they all were shocked. 
" Oh my God!  I can't believe ki Vivek yeh sab kar sakta hain.  He's such a loser! "
" I know. "
" I just hope ki Riddhima theek ho. " said Armaan.
On the other hand, Vivek had taken Riddhima to a very old warehouse where no one would be coming.  He knew that this place would be the safest for him. 
Riddhima started to gain consciousness.  The noises around her were waking her up.  She opened her eyes, and looked around.  She tried to move her hands, but couldn't and she realized that she was tied up to a chair.  She started to struggle to get out of the chair, but she couldn't as the rope was tied very tightly. 
" Kyun koshish karti ho Riddhima?  Tum nahin nikal paogi. " Riddhima looked up, and saw Vivek standing in front of her. 
" Yeh kya mazaak hain Vivek?  Tum mujhe yahaan kyun lekar aaye ho? " Riddhima said in anger.
" Mazaak?  Meri feelings tumhare liye ek mazaak hain? "
" What are you talking about! "
" Aww... Riddhima, tum kitni bholi ho. Itna bhi nahin samajh pa rahi ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon. "
" What? "
" Yes Riddhima.  I love you.  Aaj se nahin, balki tab se jab se maine tumhe pehli baar college mein dekha tha. "
" Kya bakwaas kar rahe ho tum Vivek?  Do you even know what you're saying? "
" I know very well what I'm saying.  Tumhe paane ke liye maine kya kuch nahin kiya.  Jab maine tumhe pehli baar dekha tha, toh tab hi mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya tha.  Arre main toh tumse kehne bhi waala tha ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon, lekin ussi din Maya ne mujhe bataya ki tum toh Armaan se pyaar karti ho.  Mera dill toot gaya tha.  Kitna roya tha main.  Lekin phir maine soch liya tha ki main tumhe haasil kar ke hi rahunga.  Maine Maya ko tumhare khilaaf bhadkaya.  Usske dill mein tumhare liye nafrat payda kar di.  Usse uksaaya taaki woh meri baat maane.  Phir ussne woh hi kiya jo maine kaha.  Tumse maafi maanga, tumhare saath achhe se rehna, sab kuch mere plan ke hisaab se chal raha tha.  Lekin ussi din, ussi din tum dono ne aa kar humse kaha ki tum aur Armaan shaadi karne waale ho.  Mujhse yeh sehen nahin hua.  Jiss din Maya ne tum par humla karne ki koshish ki, maine Maya ko bohat maara tha.  Itna maara ki woh hill bhi nahin sakti thi.  Ussne tumhe takleef di thi na.  Toh phir main ussko kaise chhod deta?  Huh?  Phir maine ussko apni taraf kar liya.  Sabse pehle toh humne woh natak kiya tha.  Woh hi, Maya ki maut ka naatak.  Phir main ussko Malaysia lekar gaya.  Dad ka business already vahaan tha, toh maine Maya ko Maya Saxena bana diya.  Ussko badal diya maine.  Ek saal mein maine Maya ko ek tomboy se, hot and sexy Maya bana diya.  Phir maine hi humaari company ka proposal Armaan ko bheja.  Phir jo bhi hua, woh toh tum jaanti hi ho.  Bechaara Armaan.  Tch, tch, tch, tch, tch.  Sab kuch humare plan ke hisaab se chal raha tha, lekin tum logo ne yeh chaal chal di.  Maya toh jail ke andar pohanch gayi, and I don't give a damn about her.  Woh toh thi hi bewakoof.   " Vivek explained everything to her.  Riddhima was shocked listening to all this.  She had never thought in her wildest dream that Vivek would turn out to be like this. 
" You are disgusting Vivek!  Maine kabhi socha bhi nahin tha ki tum aise nikloge! "
" Oh come on Riddhima!  Please ab mujhe yeh lecture matt do.  Ab main aur tum humesha saath rahenge.  Humesha.  Main tumse shaadi kar lunga, aur hum ek doosre ke saath apni baaki ki zindagi guzaarenge. "
" Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya?  I am married! "
" Main nahin manta iss shaadi ko!  Tum sirf meri ho Riddhima.  Aur ab main dobara uss Armaan ko humare beech mein nahin aane dunga.  Never! "
" Tumhe jo karna hain kar lo!  Main sirf Armaan ki hoon.  Only his! " Vivek got furious and slapped her across her face.  He fisted her hair and brought her face very close to his.
" TUM SIRF MERI HO RIDDHIMA!  ONLY MINE! " He left her and went out.  Riddhima started to cry.
" Armaan.  Please mujhe yahaan se le jao.  Please Armaan. "
On the other hand, the gang was talking to the police officer. 
" Mr. Amit, kya aapko pata hain ki Vivek Mrs. Riddhima ko kahaan lekar gaya hoga? "
" No sir.  Agar hume pata hota, toh hum Ridzi ko yahaan kabka lekar aa gaye hote. "
" Hmm.  Kya aap mein se kissi ne bhi uss car ke baare mein kuch notice kiya? "
" Ji haan.  Yeh raha Vivek ki car ka number. " Sumit gave the officer the number.
" Thank you Mr. Sumit.  Yeh humari bohat help karega.  I promise you Mr. Armaan.  Hum aapki wife ko zaroor dhoond lenge. " Armaan nodded and the police left.  Armaan stood up, and started to go to his room.
" Armaan. " Muskaan called out.
" Please Muski.  Main kuch daer akele rehna chahta hoon. " Armaan left for his room and closed the door.  He sat down on the bed, and joined his hands together.  He remembered the way Riddhima was screaming for help, but he couldn't do anything.  He went and took her picture and sat down.  He caressed her picture as the tears flowed freely out of his eyes. 
" I'm sorry Riddhima.  Main tumhe uss Vivek se nahin baccha saka.  I'm very sorry.  But I promise you.  Main tumhe wapas la kar hi rahunga.  I'll bring you back to me. "
The night went by in a jiffy for everyone and they never knew the Sun had risen. 
The gang gathered up in Armaan's room to talk.  They noticed his puffy and swollen eyes, and knew that he hadn't slept the entire night, and neither could they.
" Armaan, thoda aaraam kar lo.  Tumhari tabiyat kharab ho jaayegi. " said Molly.
" No, I'm fine. " They all looked down.  They knew that there is no point in saying anything to Armaan.
 
At the warehouse...
 
Riddhima woke up and found herself on a couch.  Vivek had moved her to the couch as he decided to be nice, so while she was sleeping, he had moved her.  Riddhima was surprised at first, but then she realized what happened.
" Arre waah.  Tum uth gayi?  Accha hain.  Chalo hum saath mein breakfast karte hain. " Riddhima looked up and saw a happy Vivek standing in front of her.  She immediately stiffened up as he sat down beside her.  He made a morsel and held it in front of her mouth, but the turned her face away.
" Kya hua? "
" Mujhe bhook nahin hain. "
" Kyun? "
" Mujhe wapas jaana hain. "
" Kahaan? " Riddhima looked at him, straight in his eyes.
" Mere Armaan ke paas. " She emphasized on Armaan's name.
Vivek became angry.  He grabbed her hair and pulled her close.  He took the morsel, and made her forcefully eat it.
" Ek baat kaan khol kar sun lo.  Tum kahin nahin jaogi! " Saying this, he left her with a jerk, and left.  Riddhima cried very badly.
" Armaan... please aa jao. " She cried even more.  Her eyes suddenly fell on Vivek's phone that had dropped out of his pocket.  She took the phone and wiped her tears. 
" Iss mein Armaan ka number zaroor hoga. " She flipped through the contacts, and saw Armaan's name in it and hit the dial button.
Armaan, who was still sitting with everyone, picked up the phone without looking at the caller ID.
" Hello? "
" Armaan. " Riddhima smiled a little.
" Riddhima! " Armaan stood up immediately and so did everyone else. 
" Armaan... please mujhe yahaan se le jao. "
" Riddhima tum kahaan ho? "
" Pata nahin.  Vivek mujhe yahaan behosh kar ke laya tha.  Yeh koi- " Before she could finish, Vivek took the phone out of her hand, and slapped her making her fall on the floor.
" AHHH! " Armaan flinched as he heard her scream. 
" Riddhima! "
" Riddhima nahin, Vivek. "
" You b******!  Tumhari himmat kaise huyi Riddhiam par haath uthane ki? "
" Meri himmat dekhna chahte ho? " Vivek scoffed.  He put the phone on speaker and walked towards Riddhima who was on the floor.  He grabbed her by her hair and she screamed for help. He shut her up by smacking his lips onto hers, and he kissed her hard.  Riddhima tried her best to break apart from him, but his grip was much stronger.  Riddhima pulled his hair, and he broke apart from her.  Angry at this, he started to beat her up brutually, while Riddhima just screamed for help.
" STOP IT VIVEK! " Armaan yelled into the phone and he finally stopped as he was tired.  Riddhima just layed on the ground, crying bitterly.  Vivek took the phone and took it closer to Riddhima.  Tears welled up in his eyes as he heard Riddhima crying.
" Dekh kiya?  Yeh to sirf trailor tha Armaan Mallik.  Poori picture main abhi dikhana nahin chahta.  Aur haan, Riddhima ka khayal apne dill aur dimaag se nikaal do.  Wof sirf meri hain.  Got it? "
" You'll regret this Vivek. "
" Let's see who regrets what. " Vivek disconnected the call, and left.  Armaan looked at the phone and threw it on the bed in frustration.
" Kya hua Armaan? " asked Rahul.
" Riddhima ka phone tha.  Woh... Vivek ke kabze mein hain.  Woh... woh... Riddhima ko... bohat maar raha tha. "
" Uss ki himmar kaise huyi meri behen ko haath lagaane ki? "
" Main uss Vivek ko maar daalungi. " said Muskaan.
" Armaan, mujhe zara tumhaara phone dena. " said Sumit.  Armaan gave him the phone, and he started to look for something. 
" Got it!  Hum Vivek ka pata jaldi laga sakte hain. "
" Kaise? "
" Vivek ka phone hi humari help karega.  Hum usske phone ko track kar sakte hain.  Then we can find where Ridzi is. " Sumit explained.
" Sumit tumhe jo karna hain, karo.  I just want my wife back. "
" Don't worry Armaan.  We WILL get her back. "
In a matter of no time, they all had figured out what to do.  Sumit had called the police officer, and they had been successful in tracking Vivek.  They prepared their stradegy and they all were ready to get Riddhima back. 
With the tracker in their car, they caught Vivek and followed him everywhere he went.  For about an hour they followed him, without letting him know about them.  After that, Vivek secretly went to an isolated place.  He stopped, and Armaan stopped behind some trees.  Vivek got out of the car, and went inside the same warehouse that he had kept Riddhima in.  Armaan got out of the car, too, and followed him.  He went inside, but didn't see Vivek anywhere. 
" Yeh Vivek kahaan chala gaya? "
" Mujhe dhood rahe ho Armaan? " Armaan looked back and saw Vivek looking back at him with an evil smile. 
 
Will Armaan be able to bring Riddhima back?  Will Vivek be punished for his sin?  Keep reading to find out...
 
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Hey guys.  I know that you all, especially Maitree, would love to kill me for this part, but I promise, the next part will make up for it.  Please do leave comments.
 
Note:  Guys, I'm thinking about ending this FF in a few parts.  I think that after a few parts, the FF WILL become a drag, and I don't want that to happen.  Also, my exams are gonna be starting very soon, and I really have to pay attention to that.  Please try to understand guys.

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Hey thanks for the update
Nice part but I am so mad right now, I knew it was Vivek from the start as Maya's partner.  He is so cheap but I'm glad that they were able to track him down.  I feel so bad for Ridz, that Vivek beat her up.  Please update the next part soon.  Really cant wait to read what happens next.

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
great update :) i knew it was vivek :D
i wonder wot vivek will do???
update soon!

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OOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
Shocked
that part wasssssssssssssssssss amazingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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omg omg omg that vivek i knew it he was the culprit
dumbo idiot
hawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww he hit ridz
armaan ki riddhima ko maaraaaaaaaaaaa
u better make armaan kil da hel out ov hm he desrves it
awwwwwwww poooooor riddhima this moron ugh
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but beautfuly written yaar
luvly jus luv ds awesome twist in ur story
ab to 100 times ho higaya hga that i hav tld u how awesome wonderful fantastic writer u are

ab jaldi se continue karoooooooooooooooooo and lol hmara __________________ discussion yaad haina i want the part reallly
ROFLROFLsoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnn

and cant wait 4 ur next update
jaldiiiiiiiiii se updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee karo

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ammy_ka_ashu

omg that was sooooooo good!

yaar yeh vivek bhi na!

uff!

omg cont. soon!
Thanks!  I'll continue soon.
 
Originally posted by sweety7395

Hey thanks for the update
Nice part but I am so mad right now, I knew it was Vivek from the start as Maya's partner.  He is so cheap but I'm glad that they were able to track him down.  I feel so bad for Ridz, that Vivek beat her up.  Please update the next part soon.  Really cant wait to read what happens next.
You're welcome.  Thanks!  Yes, he is very cheap.  I'll update soon.
 
Originally posted by zarqaahmed

great update :) i knew it was vivek :D
i wonder wot vivek will do???
update soon!
Thanks!  You'll find out soon.  I'll update soon.
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awesome


thanx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal

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Originally posted by Kamal_23

awesome


thanx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal
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