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Betrayal ~2~... AR FF: Epilogue Updated (Page 14)

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 7:22am | IP Logged



FINALLLYYYYYY !!!DancingDancingDancing
yaaaaaaaaayyyyyy i was so busy from last few days dint get the time to comment on ur ff, even i hadnt read last 5 parts lol. but finally i read them
meedziiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ur so unfair first u leave ppl speechless i mean completely speechless nd then u ask 4 comments very badddddddddddddd !!!
ok so ya my bigg comment now lol

ok well i dont think whatever i wud say wud do justice to ur ff lol still let me try hhehe
ok awesome awesome awesome fabulous marvelous kashlicious perfect beautiful
EmbarrassedEmbarrassedgreeeeaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttt fantastic wonderful wait aur kya bacha ummmmmmmmmm
luvlyyyyyyy nd outa of ds world
i soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvu nd ur ff medziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii jaaanuuuuuuuuuuuu
lol hehehe thnx 4 the pm yar
ok now ur ff is a brilliant peice, ur one roking fabulous writer
ClapClapClap
ur ff is so romantic and hawwwwwwwwwwwwwwttttttttttttttttttt seriuslyyyyyyyyyyThumbs Up
love it to no limits, i am addicted to it,
b4 joining if i was used to chek daily for ur update heheh nd lol i read ur each nd every part like 5 times nd still cnt get enough of it
coming to the storyline
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww
such a brilliant concept laayeen kahaaan se yaar ??
now armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnn aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hez soooooooooooooooooooooooo cute adorable luvng mr passionateeeeee no toooooooooooooooooooooooooo passionateeeeee, nd wow so carng nd charmng wat a character yaarrr
nd their luv story nd their luvstorys whole journeyyyyyy
omggggggggggggggggggg its awwwwwwwwwwwww chhhhhhooooooooooo chwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet nd adorableeeeee
nd oh wow armaan nd riddhima married yaar seriusly hez da best hubbyyyyy awwwwwwwww
nd heheh i luv all the scenes specially their uhmm woooooooowwwww yaaaar theyre so haaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwtttttttttttttttt nd intense luv u 4 how flawlessly u write
and omgggggggg their confessionnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn medziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
that was soooooooooooooooooooooo beautifulllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll no no no actually if there is a word better than perfect awwwwwwwwww yaaaaaaaar so simple elegant still so perfect nd different
and wooooooooooooooowww i really luv the drunken riddhima heheh i had read that part like ummmmmm 6 times, armaan and riddhima r soooooooooo sexy hawt nd beautiful togedr woooooooowwwwwwww gal u write so amazinglyyyyyyyyyyyy
ok nowwwwww mayaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa nd vivekkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
now where wil i get a chainsaw to cut their heads offf
um seriusly pissed and angry wid dem
where were they wen god was giving things like kindness mercy luv nd brain to ppl ???
y cant they get da hell outa of my perfect angels lifeeee
killlllllllll themmmmmmmm yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
ugh u want help wait um cumng need to kill them togedrrrr
and omgggggg da ganggggggggggggggggggg
theyre all like the chocolate icing on ur cake inda ff
awwwwwwwwwww such a beautiful bonding nd family awwwwwww they all look so fabulous togedr lol i luv the gang scenes totallyyyyy nd my god theyre lol so humerous i laugh like maniacs nd my bro thnks im gone mad seriuslyyyy hehehe
ok now after so many parts uve finallllllly brought armaan nd riddhima togedr woooooooooowwwww yaar that part was chooooooooooooooo beautiful cnt describe in wordss

now i really hope maya nd vivek get the hell out of their lives nd all f them liv happily ever after
nd yaaaaaaaa AR scenes omg omg let me breathe again
theyre sooooooooooooooooooo romantic passionate luv them totally yaaaaar keep writing dherssaaaaare scenes like these lol
nddddddddd
CONGRATZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ on ur 2nd threaddd c it was ought to happen ur such a brilliant brilliant fabulous writer
nowwww keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep writing nd i need the OS very sooooonnnn
and i just luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv ur fffffff
and ya nt to 4get da funnyt scenes r omgggg heheh lol
ok so now tell me did i smewat did justice to ur ff well i know cannt do it evn if i write da whle night but as promised a long comment hehe
andddddddddddddddddd luvds the recent update armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
oyye hoyyye
nd omg he was embarrassed nd plz ask him to rub off the lipgloss plz heheheh
nd finaallly maya baby is such a fooool wud party wen she is all gone
nowwwwwwwww jaldi se agla update dedena or mujhe pm kardenaaaaaa
luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Rida
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
lovely part
 maya partner in crime is vivek
 

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 7:54am | IP Logged
hey awesome update dear
loved it!!!!!!!!!!
pls cont soon

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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by qt4ever

Gr8 part!
I think Maya's partner is definitely vivek...
The lip gloss thing was awesome!
Thanx 4 pm
cont soon
Thanks!  Let's see who it it.  You're welcome, and I'll continue soon.
 
Originally posted by meow23

d prtner in crime is vivek.. ryte.. n maya as falln in d trap..
waitngg 2 c more climax
thnxx 4 d pm


Let's see.  You're welcome.
 
Originally posted by prachi_mjht

mindblowing part yaar

thanx for pm

continue soon

Ho na ho, maya ka partner vivek hai na?????????????

yaar yeh curiosity ab shaant nahi ho rahi hai,

plz reveal it na
Thanks!  Let's see who the partner is.  I'll reveal it soon.  You're welcome, and I'll continue soon.
 
Originally posted by AR_LOVER

awesome part
loved it
cont soon
Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  I'll continue soon.
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cute_girl17

hey dear..nice part..loved AR moments:)
hate this maya..pls jaldi se ab iska chapter close kardo  forever 
thanx for the pm and continue soon:)
Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  Maya ka chapter jaldi khatam ho jaayega.  You're welcome, and I'll continue soon.
 
Originally posted by jiyaa

nice part
Thanks.
 
Originally posted by akshad

awesome
Thanks.
 
Originally posted by saniashzadi_10

hey Medi...

lovely update...AR morning part is so sweet.....finally they started to act on their plan...interesting that maya fell into a trap in one go....now i am sure that its vivek who is behind that all...i think boys gang share this secret with girls also so they can also beware of that mystery person....

really nice update..

update nxt part soon

love

sania



Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  Let's see who it is.  I'll update soon.
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zara-20k

great part dear
Thanks!
 
Originally posted by arshbest

heyy

awsome partt and i have a feeling that maya's partner is vivek!!!????

thx for the pm

continuee soon

sakshiStar

Thanks!  Let's see who it is.  You're welcome, and I'll continue soon.
 
Originally posted by shilpI007

Hey midzi.......
awesome part.......
completely loved it.......
awwwwwwww AR so cuteeeeeeeeee...............
i know maya patner is vivek.......wow maya believe armaan, how much she thinks that she is intelligent but she is fool.......
Thanks for pm
cont soon


P.S: i really like when u said that u update then n all or u update before ur promising date........keep it up

Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  AR are very cute.  Let's see who the partner is.  You're right, Maya is a fool.  You're welcome, and I'll continue soon.  Yea, I'm surprised at that, too.
 
Originally posted by MadhuARKaSh


nice part medzi will u plz make a VM on AR/KaSh on this song " Tu Jo Nahi hai to " from woh lamhe plz. dis s one of my fav song.
Thanks!  Sure. :-D


Edited by Medzi_ARian... - 21 January 2011 at 4:16pm
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon



love
Riddss
Thanks!  I'll continue soon.
 
Originally posted by anushkajain

awesome part Clap
enjoying AR  romance very much
loved it
continue soon
Smile
Thanks!  I'm glad you like it.  I'll continue soon.
 
Originally posted by kashfull

lots of mystery, the guy is vivek naa?
waiting for next part.
AR romance is hot
Maybe.  I'll continue soon, and I'm glad you liked it.
 
Originally posted by -poornima-

mindblowing update

loved it so much
AR romance scenes were awesome
good to see AR together like this
The scene Armaan was embarrassed was very funny
they also found maya's evil partner good
looking forward for both of them to getting fro their deeds
continue soon


Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  The scene was very funny.  I'll continue soon.


Edited by Medzi_ARian... - 21 January 2011 at 9:09am
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Posted: 21 January 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chocolatefreak




FINALLLYYYYYY !!!DancingDancingDancing
yaaaaaaaaayyyyyy i was so busy from last few days dint get the time to comment on ur ff, even i hadnt read last 5 parts lol. but finally i read them
meedziiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ur so unfair first u leave ppl speechless i mean completely speechless nd then u ask 4 comments very badddddddddddddd !!!
ok so ya my bigg comment now lol

ok well i dont think whatever i wud say wud do justice to ur ff lol still let me try hhehe
ok awesome awesome awesome fabulous marvelous kashlicious perfect beautiful
EmbarrassedEmbarrassedgreeeeaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttt fantastic wonderful wait aur kya bacha ummmmmmmmmm
luvlyyyyyyy nd outa of ds world
i soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvu nd ur ff medziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii jaaanuuuuuuuuuuuu
lol hehehe thnx 4 the pm yar
ok now ur ff is a brilliant peice, ur one roking fabulous writer
ClapClapClap
ur ff is so romantic and hawwwwwwwwwwwwwwttttttttttttttttttt seriuslyyyyyyyyyyThumbs Up
love it to no limits, i am addicted to it,
b4 joining if i was used to chek daily for ur update heheh nd lol i read ur each nd every part like 5 times nd still cnt get enough of it
coming to the storyline
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww
such a brilliant concept laayeen kahaaan se yaar ??
now armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnn aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hez soooooooooooooooooooooooo cute adorable luvng mr passionateeeeee no toooooooooooooooooooooooooo passionateeeeee, nd wow so carng nd charmng wat a character yaarrr
nd their luv story nd their luvstorys whole journeyyyyyy
omggggggggggggggggggg its awwwwwwwwwwwww chhhhhhooooooooooo chwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet nd adorableeeeee
nd oh wow armaan nd riddhima married yaar seriusly hez da best hubbyyyyy awwwwwwwww
nd heheh i luv all the scenes specially their uhmm woooooooowwwww yaaaar theyre so haaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwtttttttttttttttt nd intense luv u 4 how flawlessly u write
and omgggggggg their confessionnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn medziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
that was soooooooooooooooooooooo beautifulllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll no no no actually if there is a word better than perfect awwwwwwwwww yaaaaaaaar so simple elegant still so perfect nd different
and wooooooooooooooowww i really luv the drunken riddhima heheh i had read that part like ummmmmm 6 times, armaan and riddhima r soooooooooo sexy hawt nd beautiful togedr woooooooowwwwwwww gal u write so amazinglyyyyyyyyyyyy
ok nowwwwww mayaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa nd vivekkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
now where wil i get a chainsaw to cut their heads offf
um seriusly pissed and angry wid dem
where were they wen god was giving things like kindness mercy luv nd brain to ppl ???
y cant they get da hell outa of my perfect angels lifeeee
killlllllllll themmmmmmmm yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
ugh u want help wait um cumng need to kill them togedrrrr
and omgggggg da ganggggggggggggggggggg
theyre all like the chocolate icing on ur cake inda ff
awwwwwwwwwww such a beautiful bonding nd family awwwwwww they all look so fabulous togedr lol i luv the gang scenes totallyyyyy nd my god theyre lol so humerous i laugh like maniacs nd my bro thnks im gone mad seriuslyyyy hehehe
ok now after so many parts uve finallllllly brought armaan nd riddhima togedr woooooooooowwwww yaar that part was chooooooooooooooo beautiful cnt describe in wordss

now i really hope maya nd vivek get the hell out of their lives nd all f them liv happily ever after
nd yaaaaaaaa AR scenes omg omg let me breathe again
theyre sooooooooooooooooooo romantic passionate luv them totally yaaaaar keep writing dherssaaaaare scenes like these lol
nddddddddd
CONGRATZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ on ur 2nd threaddd c it was ought to happen ur such a brilliant brilliant fabulous writer
nowwww keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep writing nd i need the OS very sooooonnnn
and i just luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv ur fffffff
and ya nt to 4get da funnyt scenes r omgggg heheh lol
ok so now tell me did i smewat did justice to ur ff well i know cannt do it evn if i write da whle night but as promised a long comment hehe
andddddddddddddddddd luvds the recent update armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
oyye hoyyye
nd omg he was embarrassed nd plz ask him to rub off the lipgloss plz heheheh
nd finaallly maya baby is such a fooool wud party wen she is all gone
nowwwwwwwww jaldi se agla update dedena or mujhe pm kardenaaaaaa
luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Rida
HugHug
Hug



Itna lamba comment?!  Maar daalegi kya? LOL  First of all, thank you sooo much for the teddy bear.  It's very cute.  Haww... I'm bad?  Abhi comments maangti hoon toh kuch bura karti hoon kya?  Apni taareef sunna achha lagta hain. LOL  Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you.  I'm very glad that you like my FF sooo much.  You're most welcome for the PM.  Bas, idea aa gaya.  Armaan is very adorable.  Even I love the drunken Riddhima.  Thank you for the compliment.  LOL!  I love writing the gang scenes.  Even I laugh like a maniac after I finish reading my own part.  Thank you once again.  OS bhi jaldi milega.  Abhi idea toh aane de.  Mere dimaag mein at least 1,000 ideas ghoomte rehte hain.  Sab ek saath toh nahin likh sakti na?  Itna lammmmbaaa comment dene ke baad bhi tu mujhse pooch rahi hain ki tune justice kiya ki nahin? Shocked  Woh bhi jaldi de dungi meri maa, abhi start toh karne de!  Hug
 
Originally posted by cute.arsh

lovely part
 maya partner in crime is vivek
Thanks! 
 
Originally posted by Drarmaanfan

hey awesome update dear
loved it!!!!!!!!!!
pls cont soon
Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.  I'll continue soon.

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