Betrayal ~2~... AR FF: Epilogue Updated - Page 11

Originally posted by: chocolatefreak

FINALLLYYYYYY !!!
yaaaaaaaaayyyyyy i was so busy from last few days dint get the time to comment on ur ff, even i hadnt read last 5 parts lol. but finally i read them
meedziiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ur so unfair first u leave ppl speechless i mean completely speechless nd then u ask 4 comments very badddddddddddddd !!!
ok so ya my bigg comment now lol

ok well i dont think whatever i wud say wud do justice to ur ff lol still let me try hhehe
ok awesome awesome awesome fabulous marvelous kashlicious perfect beautiful 😳😳greeeeaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttt fantastic wonderful wait aur kya bacha ummmmmmmmmm
luvlyyyyyyy nd outa of ds world
i soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvu nd ur ff medziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii jaaanuuuuuuuuuuuu
lol hehehe thnx 4 the pm yar
ok now ur ff is a brilliant peice, ur one roking fabulous writer👏👏👏
ur ff is so romantic and hawwwwwwwwwwwwwwttttttttttttttttttt seriuslyyyyyyyyyy👍🏼
love it to no limits, i am addicted to it,
b4 joining if i was used to chek daily for ur update heheh nd lol i read ur each nd every part like 5 times nd still cnt get enough of it
coming to the storyline
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww
such a brilliant concept laayeen kahaaan se yaar ??
now armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnn aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hez soooooooooooooooooooooooo cute adorable luvng mr passionateeeeee no toooooooooooooooooooooooooo passionateeeeee, nd wow so carng nd charmng wat a character yaarrr
nd their luv story nd their luvstorys whole journeyyyyyy
omggggggggggggggggggg its awwwwwwwwwwwww chhhhhhooooooooooo chwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet nd adorableeeeee
nd oh wow armaan nd riddhima married yaar seriusly hez da best hubbyyyyy awwwwwwwww
nd heheh i luv all the scenes specially their uhmm woooooooowwwww yaaaar theyre so haaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwtttttttttttttttt nd intense luv u 4 how flawlessly u write
and omgggggggg their confessionnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn medziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
that was soooooooooooooooooooooo beautifulllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll no no no actually if there is a word better than perfect awwwwwwwwww yaaaaaaaar so simple elegant still so perfect nd different
and wooooooooooooooowww i really luv the drunken riddhima heheh i had read that part like ummmmmm 6 times, armaan and riddhima r soooooooooo sexy hawt nd beautiful togedr woooooooowwwwwwww gal u write so amazinglyyyyyyyyyyyy
ok nowwwwww mayaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa nd vivekkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
now where wil i get a chainsaw to cut their heads offf
um seriusly pissed and angry wid dem
where were they wen god was giving things like kindness mercy luv nd brain to ppl ???
y cant they get da hell outa of my perfect angels lifeeee
killlllllllll themmmmmmmm yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar
ugh u want help wait um cumng need to kill them togedrrrr
and omgggggg da ganggggggggggggggggggg
theyre all like the chocolate icing on ur cake inda ff
awwwwwwwwwww such a beautiful bonding nd family awwwwwww they all look so fabulous togedr lol i luv the gang scenes totallyyyyy nd my god theyre lol so humerous i laugh like maniacs nd my bro thnks im gone mad seriuslyyyy hehehe
ok now after so many parts uve finallllllly brought armaan nd riddhima togedr woooooooooowwwww yaar that part was chooooooooooooooo beautiful cnt describe in wordss

now i really hope maya nd vivek get the hell out of their lives nd all f them liv happily ever after
nd yaaaaaaaa AR scenes omg omg let me breathe again
theyre sooooooooooooooooooo romantic passionate luv them totally yaaaaar keep writing dherssaaaaare scenes like these lol
nddddddddd
CONGRATZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ on ur 2nd threaddd c it was ought to happen ur such a brilliant brilliant fabulous writer
nowwww keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep writing nd i need the OS very sooooonnnn
and i just luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv ur fffffff
and ya nt to 4get da funnyt scenes r omgggg heheh lol
ok so now tell me did i smewat did justice to ur ff well i know cannt do it evn if i write da whle night but as promised a long comment hehe
andddddddddddddddddd luvds the recent update armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
oyye hoyyye
nd omg he was embarrassed nd plz ask him to rub off the lipgloss plz heheheh
nd finaallly maya baby is such a fooool wud party wen she is all gone
nowwwwwwwww jaldi se agla update dedena or mujhe pm kardenaaaaaa
luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Rida
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