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~]]wanna make u mine[[~ AR note on 37 (Page 7)

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

woowww...HOT....HOT...haan......

sounds really cool...

do continue soon...

thnx for the pm...........

thnx dear and u too r really give naughty comentsWink

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kajenrsmecxi

hey salina, well its my turn to support you in ur new lovely FF, add me to ur PM list, the concept and the plot of the story is very interesting, hope Armaan comes on track with Ridhimma's help :) Do continue sooon and btw CONGRATZZZZZ FOR UR NEW FF! 
& yay the part was beautifully written.
hey thnx alot for ur support i really need it and to liking my story..thnx for the coment
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Awesum start
plzzzz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gupta.aditi20

loved it..............
pls add me to pm list
thnx dear
yeah sure i will
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vidu87

hey vry nyc concept
cont soon
thnx 4 d PM
thnx alot dear
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
 he guyys thora galdi nahi ho gaya i mean u know second part second hi day main well read it and plz dont forget to coment.
 
 
Enjoy...
 
                                   ~Wanna amke u mine~
 
         
 Riddhima enetered in her master room "
 
"woowwwwwww yaar riddhima teri to nikal padi , i know that i am too rich but man look at this house and my room" she said while twirl around the room.
 
"but ye i have to join the college that goona be so awsome man and yeah not to forget hot hot boys .its gonna be soo rock" she again twirl and landed n her bed.
 
 
3 PM new york
 
 
riddhima was sitting in her room and get hell board she has nothing to do in this house . so she thing to have tour of this house .
 
 
Billy has told her that he cant give her his compeny bcz last moment he remember his important meeting and after promise her that he will give his whole one day he left for work .
 
 
Riddhima goes toward kitchen and see so many workors are doing thier goj so sincerly  so with no voive of foot  she walked inside .
 
 
"HI EVERYONE"She yelled every jump from her raised voiced and looked at her questionaingly.
 
 
riddhima burst in to laughter.
"
 
HA  HA HA HA HA HA look at ur face guys HAHAHAHA " she coutiue laughing withous notice thier scary face.
 
 
Riddhima stop laughing and relize she is only one who was laughing and gave every one nervous laugh .
 
 
" i am sorry i dont have any intention to scare anyone like this.but what can i do i have this habit u know" she again give nervouse laught to every one but after not getting respose she said" OK i thing i should live now"
 
 
she started to leave the kitchen but stop  when some one tapped her shoulder.
 
 
Riddhima turned aroud to see a elderly women standing with a sweet smile on her face.
 
 
" beta apap india se aye ho " she asked in motherly tone.
 
 
 " JI" riddhima nodded inocently scared if she yelled at her.
 
 
An elderly women smiled .
 
 
" apko hindi ati hai" Riddhima asked her.as she felt revield to see her calmed nature.
 
 
" ha beta aur mujhe bhi hindi ati hai" she replie" waise mera naam " shehnaaz bi hai , aur tumhara"
 
 
"RIDDHIMA"  she replied
 
 
" bohot pyara naam hai" SH. B said "beta bhook lagi hai apko "
 
 
" nahi wo actuall i am just getting boared" she replied
 
 
" ohh i understand " Bi said to understanding her condition
 
 
 
 
" to phi.."
 
 
 
 TRIN TRING
 
 
 bI was intrupted by a phone call
 
 
 she talked a person on other side and noded.
 
 
 
Riddhima nitice a worrid expression and too got worried.
bi sab theek to hai " Rids asked while keeping her hand on her shoulde this what everyone admire about her
 
 
 
" ha beta sab theek hai but actually bade saab ka phone aya tha aur wo apni ek important file ghar pe chhod gaye aur ghar main filhaal koi bhi naukar free nahi hai." She said to remeber if any was free for this task.
 
 
 
After listen bi relied she said quickly " bi ap fikr kyun karti hai main hun na main diyayungi." no other option is better to killed the boring time and yes she also can find some hoty for her. YUPPY.
 
 
 
 
 
Bi smiled to see her concerned." theek hai main driver se keh deti hun wo tumhe le jayga."
 
 
ridz nodded
 
 
Bi goes toward study room and bring some fat file.and handed to riddhima.
 
 
Ridz take the file and lef for the office.mallik empire
 
 
" wow kya office hai yar.. " riddhima said to see the interior mallik office.
 
 
riddhima was walking in the office but get stoped by one of the receptionist
 
 
" excused me madam may i know who r u" the receptionist asked
 
 
" Fikr mat kar tere office main chori karna nahi ayi hun" riddhima replied with annoying face, Samajhti jya hai apne aap ko churail kahi ki. make up to dekho bhoot bhi dar jayega.hump!
 
 
" What"
 
" beheri ho kya"" ridhz get more annoyed
 
 
" excused me i cant understand what r u talking about" rceptionist said with confused face. Indians r so confusing.
 
 
" le main to bhul hi gayi ye angres to abhi tak dudh pite hai."ridhz muttered to herself.
 
 
" actually i come to give this file to my uncle" ridz said
 
 
" and who is ur uncle" recp asked
 
 
"what u r asking me who is my uncle"Rids said with anger
 
 
" NO" rcp replied with straight face
 
 
" Billy mallik" ridz said with confidence.
 
 
" hahahahaah" rcep burst in laughter " u can take whatever and whoever name u wanted to take oh poor girl" recp continue laughing
 
 
 
"What happing here"
 
 
recp stop laughing and got straight to identify the voice.they both turned arouned and see bliiy mallik was himself was standing there.
 
With confused look.
 
 
riddhima run and hugged him
 
 
" ohh i so much miss u uncle"
 
 
" me too sweet heart" billy replied while hugging her back.
recpet git scared now she gone man
 
 
she gave riddhima nervouse smile and say " sir she asked me about u nothing else"
 
 
Billy turned towardsriddhima and said" beta kuch kaam that"
 
 
" haan uncle kaat to tha leking mujhe nahi apko"
 
 
"malab" billy asked
 
 
 
 
" ye file uncle ap ghar pe bhool gaye the" she said.
 
 
" ohh thnx beat "
 
 
" my pleasure uncle.
 
 
then suddenly one empley come and inform him that he have to come in meeting room , everyone is waititing for him.Billy nodded and saidto riddhma that she cango home and left.
 
 
Riddhima see billy retraining fugure and turned to receptionist
 
 
 
" hupm chrail" and leave
 
 
recptionist made a face and turned to go towards her desk.
 
 
 
riddhima stop and looke at theoffice and think to herself" ab aye hai to kyun na ek tour ho jaye , kya pata koi sona munda mil jaye.
 riddhima start roaming around the corridors when suddenly  her eyes catch the desirable name.
 
           "
 
                                ARMAAN MALLIK "
 
 
" hmm zroor billy uncle ka beta hoga dekte hai kaisa hai" she starting to opening the cabin door and slowly see what hepping inside.
 
 
but the next second her eyes widden in horror.
 So guys thii is just  second  part . iwill try to update tomorrow.
 
love u
 
salinaSmile
 
 dont forget to comment and click like buttonWink
 
 
 

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
nice part Star
loved it Big smile
continue soonSmile
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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
ridz is so hilarious

update soon

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