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~]]wanna make u mine[[~ AR note on 37 (Page 13)

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ammy_ka_ashu

dont tell me he's having sex in the office room! oh ammy ammy ammy


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lovedd the fast fast update! keep em coming!!!
let watch whats nextWink

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 9:45am | IP Logged
heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon




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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
awesome
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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
hey salina
grt strt and nice concept
loved it .......
continue soooooooooon


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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
thnx fro all the coment guys
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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 9:39am | IP Logged
so sorry for the daelay i am so busy now a days guys . i really cant find the time for updating any part well i have to just for all of u.
 so here the next part
Enjoy.....
 
                          ~]] wanna make u mine[[~
                                          
                                       [[part ~ 3 ]]
 
 
 
Riddhima eyes wided in horror to see the whole room was dark there is no light just a dim light for see the surrounding and she can also hear some noises in the cabin
 
 
 
 
" ye cabin main itna abdhera kyun  , oh god plz hepl me u know na mujhe andhere se kitna dar lagta hai aur uppar se ye ajeeb si awazen" riddhima prayed for herself and enter in the cabin slowly without making any noice
 
 
 
Ridz look around  but cant recognize anything bcz of darkness.
 
 
 
she move toward the small white couch and hide herself behind the couch , thnx to dim light of the room.
 
 
 
then....
 
 
 
 
 
 I Wanna Make Love to you Lyrics:
Either you with me or against me
Tell me what you wanna do
Do you wanna be with me
Baby you lookin' so good tonight
I can't control myself
I wanna take you home with me
And lay you on your back
Take off all your clothes
Make love to you like you never ever known
And I'ma take my time
And give it to you right
I wanna make love to you all night
               
 
 
a very  sexy girl come , remove her coat and throw it up in the air , which landed on riddhima face.she goas towards a men who is sitting on the master chair andsit on his lap her both legs are around his waist and a men are cressing her thighs.( yes girls he is none other than our hero ARMAAN )
 
 
 
 
" oh god ye dono kya kar rahe hai , plz i hope meri thinking galat ho" rids prayed to her god.
 
 
 
 
I just wanna make love to you
(I'm gonna give it to you so good, baby)
But we got to do it right
(Oh you got to do oh)
I just wanna make love to you
(Just hold the back of my head)
I don't wanna fuss and fight
(As I
stroke you back and forth)
I just wanna make love to you
(real slow, real slow)
But we got to do it right
(nice and easy, nice and easy)
I just wanna make love to you
That what I'm gonna do all night long, y'all
I don't wanna fuss and fight
Ain't no one gonna interupt our love making
 
 
 
rids cant see the man face bcz  of the darkness n the cabin  but she can bet he has most amazing body in new york.
 
 
 
 
then he  stand up with girl still on his lap un doing his shirt and buttons of his pants.
 
 
 
 
 
the handsome man take the girl toward the small bed which is in the corner of the room  and make her lay down on bed . Then start removing his clothes in hurry to stop his fast running sex hormones.
 
 
 
 
 
 
24/7, 365 days of the year
All I wanna do is just have
your body near
All I wanna do is do you so right
[ Find more Lyrics on
http://mp3lyrics.org/9QU ]
All I wanna do is make love to you all night
24/7 365 days of the year
I'll do anything to have your body here
Let's fly high, like the bird we call a dove
Let's fly high when we makin' love

I just wanna make love to you
ooh But we got to do it right
I just wanna make love to you
I don't wanna fuss and fight
I just wanna make love to you
But we got to do it right
I just wanna make love to you
I don't wanna fuss and fight
 
 
 
 
rids eyed widen when he start rmoving his and that girl under wears.
 
 
 
 
 rids closed her eyes in disgust and fear to see such thing bcz according to her this a very very bad thing and she is still not used of thing kind of moment.
 
 
 
I just wanna make love to you
(that's my mission baby)
But we got to do it right
I just wanna make love to you
I don't wanna fuss and fight
I just wanna make love to you
But we got to do it right
I just wanna make love to you
I don't wanna fuss and fight
I just wanna make love to you
Lyrics: I Wanna Make Love to you,
 
 
 
she feel like she is watching  a BLUE FILM .ridz start to get sweaty  and her  eyes got teary to see and heard thier noises of wet kisses .how she is regretting to come such a disguting people cabin.Rids start panick when she heard thier loud moans and groans.
 
 
 
NO she cant  handeled now this she have to do some thing to get out from the cabin .She covered her  ears from her hand and start thinking
 
 
 
" God this is so gross, plz god ji kuch kijiye mujhe yaha se nikal ne ke liyen i cant handel this shit any more noq" rids requested again wiped her tears with shaky hands.
 
 
 
Then god listen her wish in a wrong way.
 
 
 
                                   !!!"THUD"!!!
 
 
 
 
A glass vase got broke from the push which is come from riddhima back.
 
 
 
Everything got stop in the room ,the noises and (ahem ahem) Winkactivities and everyone get alert.
 
 
 
ARmaan get up from the girl and hurriedly wear his pants
 
 
 
 
" what was it" armaan thought.
 
 
 
And his eyes got the glimpse of red scarf.
 
 
 
" hey who is it" He yelled
 
 
"SHIT" riddhima covered her face from scarf and run to save her life.
 
 
 
 
ARmaan  got shocked to see a girl  in his cabin
 
 
 
" how on earth she manage to come in y office"
 
 
 
 
He did not think furthure and run behind her to catch her .what if she is come from some of a magnize department, then he   cant save his life from his dad lactures and the these magazines  news  for which new york people always hungry for ,specially if it realated to mallik's
 
 
 
 
Riddhima run fast as much as she could .
 
 
 
 
" oh god kahan phasa diya mujhe " rids said to her self and run more fast to  some one behind her .
 
 
 
 
 
While running she collied with food trolly which is carrieng a chocolate cake.A big chocolate cake landed on the marble floor with the hard thud. which make all the floor very slipry.
 
 
 
 
waiter grab riddhima arms and asked her for the money.
 
 
 
 
 
" abe chor ganje kya kar rahe hai ,tera cake giraya hai ghar thori na abe chor," rids screamed
 
 
" first pay for the cake. which u have spioled" waiter  barged in british accent.
 
 
 
Rids got angry more, to see his  yelling , she bent down ,take fistfull cake and rub the chocolate cake all over his face.After recieving a fist ful cake on his face his hand automatically loosened from riddhima hand .
 
 
 
 
" le kardiya pay,  ganje " she yelled.
 
 
 
 
rids realise that her arms got loosened from waiter grip, so she got the oportunity and run again fastest to see the person behined her was no longer far anymore and suddenly...
 
To be continued......
 
Dont cursed me guys i know i have ende this part on a very  bad moment but serously  guys i cant write anumore bcz now my hands are hurting really badly and i have to do my homework too so plz understand my problem i have my exams next week so i have to study as well.
 
 
so plz  do long coments and click like button.
 
love u alll
 
salinaSmile
 
 

 
 
 
 


Edited by salinashah - 19 January 2011 at 10:54am

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awesome part

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Posted: 19 January 2011 at 10:00am | IP Logged
hey Salina...wowww awesome part...:)
omg...i was right...aww poor Ridz had to see her future love or husband with sumone else...lol
but luved the cake part...:)
thanx for the pm n cont soon...:)
tc :)
Preet <3


P.S. Gud luck for exams..study hard...:)

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