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so everyone i am here again  remember me well i am salina shah . i have written my first  FF  on AR ~{ I am back to take revenge}~  and    this is my second one.guys plz tell me how is it read it and comment. pordon me for any mistake.

 
 
 
 
Billy mallik the most powerful person in new york he has every thing what a person dream in his life. but Billy mallik is not happy with his power because his  power r not going to get back his son on tra ck armaan mallik. his one and only one .how much he wanted him to be a good person but turned totaly opposite of it. he cursed his own deeds how he wish he can looked after his son after his wife  departure. ,Billy was sitting on his chair and looking at his wife poterait a long tear come out from his eyesto think his past .
 
 
 
billy was lost in his thaughts when his servent come and inform his friend arrival. shakan gupta a most famouse bussiness tycoon in korea and billy childhood friends .
 
 
billy welcome shashank whole heartedly .he was very happy to see his friend after a long period of time he missed him so much only he knew it.
 
 
"kaisa hai  mere dost  " billy said while hugging shashank
 
 
 
"main to theek hoon tu bata kaisa hai". shanky  replied while hugging him back.
 
 
 
"jee raha hoon bas " billy said with teary eyes .
 
 
 
sashank got worried to see him like this.
 
 
 
"oye kya hua tujhe sab teekh to hai aur ye mera beta armaan kahan hai." shashank said while searching for armaan in the house.
 
 
 
" hoga kahin kisi ke satth bed room main" billy muttered..
 
 
 
 shashak take him towards the couch and made him sit .
 
 
 
"bol ab kya baat hai" said shashank..
 
 
 
 bily narrated him his son condition and  deeds.
 
 
 
shashank feel bad for his friend.
 
 
 
" dont worry  billy tu itna udaas kyun ho raha hai sab teekh ho jaye ga "shashank said to esure his friend.
 
 
 
"kab jab main marjaunga.tab." Billy said to angry on his son.
 
 
 
" tu thora waqt de armaan ko i know he goona be fine "shashank said
 
 
 
" yeah i hope too"billy sigh
 
 
 
 "are meri beti riddhima kahan hai . ab to kafi badi ho gayi ho gi wo  " billy asked
 
 
 
 "main yaha hun uncle" billy looked up and see such beautiful angel standing in front of him .riddhima come and touched his feet.billy stop her hugger her tight.
 
 
 
" betia per nahi choo ti" Billy said and kept his nad on her head.
 
 
 
" oh uncle ap bhi na bilkul nahi badle " riddhima said
 
 
 
"lekin tum bohot badal gayi ho itni badi ho gayi" billy said
 
 
 
 "thnx uncle aur ap bhi utne hi handsom hai " riddhima winked at hin billy smiled at her antics.
 
 
 
" ok beta ab baate baad main , jao jake araam karlo. robort riddhima ko uskla kamra di kha do." servant  nodded and lead her to her  master room.
 
 
 
" bacche kitne bade hojate hai aur pata bhi nahi chalta" billy sai to see riddhima retraining figurs
 
 
 
" han pichle mahine hi usne apna 18nth birthday celebrate kiya hai" shashank smiled to see his doll.
 
 
 
 
" are padma bhabhi nahi ayin" billy asked
 
 
 
 "nahi wo 2 din baad a rahi hai ." shashank smile to remember his beautiful wife.  
 
 
 
 
riddhima kafi khubsurat aur sanskari hai jiske ghar main bhi jaye gi usa ghar khusiyon se roshan kar degi." said billy.
 
 
 
 
"so to hai. U know billy bohot zyada shararti ho gayi hai wo. " shashank complained.
 
 
 
 
 " are shashank wo hai kitni abhi to wo 18 saal ki hui hai abhi to use apni life enjoy karne do. " billy said while laughing to remember her antics.
 
 
 
" sahi kaha billy bachhe kab bade ho jate hai pata hi nahi chalta."shashak said.
 
 
 
 
"pata nahi shashank mujhe thoda aheeb sa lag raha hai ajeeb sa haan pata nahi kyun but aisa lag raha hai kai saal baad kuch bohot achha hone jaa raha hai." billy said.
 
 
 
They both smiled.Are they both thinking the same thing?.
 
 
 
                       what gonna happen now? will iddhima entery in armaan house are going to make some chage in his life.?
 
     To be continued...
 
 
    to know  that keep reading it .
 
     so guys tell did u like it or not. .
 
       Dont forget to comment and press like button.
 
love uAll
 
salina shahSmile
 
 


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                          ~ INDEX~

                                       Part One
   
                                      Part Two
  
                                     Part Three
 
                                    
                                     Part Four
 
                                    Part Five
 
                                   Part Six


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         ~character sketches~

 
ARMAAN MALLIK: The handsome and eligeble bachelor in new york he has everything what a men  could dream of.he never belive in love and relationship.this word has never exist in his life.but he love his dad but never show him.Girl are crazy for him and are ready to do anything for him.he love to play basketball match and love to do  sex and more sex.he age is 25
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Riddhima Gupta:Dont judge her by her innocent look she is very very naughty .she is 18 years old girl she  recently had finished he school and are going to join the college in new york. She is very naughty and crazy for his dream boy. 
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Billy mallik: Amaan father and very rich person.
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shashank gupta:He is riddhima father and padma's husband n also a very famous bussinesman in india and very good friend of billy.
 
padma gupta: riddhima mother and shanky wife .love her daughter to core.
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 Mallik mansion
 
 
 
Bedrooms
 
 
 
 
 
Living hall
 
                  stairs
 
        Dining table
                            cieling
                     Garden
 
            Fountain
   
  Swiming pool
 
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:14am | IP Logged
nice start
great part....
 
pls continue
and pls dont forget to pm me!
 
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hey salina nice one.....
thankssss for the pm...
do contnue soon...
armaan ko badallna pade ga kyun ki dont like him to be dirty....plzzzz...
hehehehe..
Love,
Sharon...!!



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