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We Belong Together (Part - 31 - Page 143) (Page 6)

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
hey this is good.....

i am a lil worried as the story has started with lot of negativity..... but that only brings hope that things will get better as the story go ahead...

as msk has mentioned Sameera i am also looking forward to their relationship history in the next few  updates.....

as you have mentioned geet regretting her decision to marry him i am presuming that the maan's past will be followed by the entry of geet in his life.... how they met, why and how they married and what happened in last 6 months of their marriage, why their relation is on a brink of breaking up and what are the photographs about....

if you try to cover these aspects in detail then i think you will easily manage the coming 20-25 updates... or even more depending on the story line you come up with....

i am also predicting that the other person on the call with Shasha is Sameera who is trying to throw geet out of his life...so may be after telling about the past and bringing the readers to the present status of their relationship may be a track where they decide to go separate ways...  i mean divorce  then as according to the law they cannot legally divorce until and unless they spend a year together.....so may be they are forced to live six more months together and how their lives change and their relationship develop along with tasha, shasha and sameera playing vamp team and dadi and may be some other a friend or sis of msk playing cupid for them...

whatever i am predicting or saying are simply suggestions and my the follow up is just my instinct....
but this ff is totally your work and imagination and i am looking forward to how you deal with the story..... also an earnest request if you could increase the length of you updates a bit... i mean till we get in the mood of the story it ends... also one more suggestion i have been following the forum for quite sometime now so if we are running a ff i have seen the ff response is very good for the ones which have regular updates and also may be 2 updates in a day to start with...once people start following your ff you can come down to one update a day.... this is just my suggestion..i also started a ff but because of some work i am not able follow up with it and i am seeing the lack i9n response.....

please take no offence to any of my suggestion i am not doubting any of your creativity or story telling skills as i found the start very intriguing i just was forced to share my views out of curiosity....

do add me to ur pm list...

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bono_jostna

wow!! Nice part...feeling sad for both. This sasha!! Always creating problem...
Update soon..wanna read more!

hahaha!! thanks. yea i mean how can i 4gt this tiny lil evil sasha. it dsnt matter if she left the show bt she is a part of my story. ;)
hansasma Senior Member
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by libra25

hey this is good.....

i am a lil worried as the story has started with lot of negativity..... but that only brings hope that things will get better as the story go ahead...

as msk has mentioned Sameera i am also looking forward to their relationship history in the next few  updates.....

as you have mentioned geet regretting her decision to marry him i am presuming that the maan's past will be followed by the entry of geet in his life.... how they met, why and how they married and what happened in last 6 months of their marriage, why their relation is on a brink of breaking up and what are the photographs about....

if you try to cover these aspects in detail then i think you will easily manage the coming 20-25 updates... or even more depending on the story line you come up with....

i am also predicting that the other person on the call with Shasha is Sameera who is trying to throw geet out of his life...so may be after telling about the past and bringing the readers to the present status of their relationship may be a track where they decide to go separate ways...  i mean divorce  then as according to the law they cannot legally divorce until and unless they spend a year together.....so may be they are forced to live six more months together and how their lives change and their relationship develop along with tasha, shasha and sameera playing vamp team and dadi and may be some other a friend or sis of msk playing cupid for them...

whatever i am predicting or saying are simply suggestions and my the follow up is just my instinct....
but this ff is totally your work and imagination and i am looking forward to how you deal with the story..... also an earnest request if you could increase the length of you updates a bit... i mean till we get in the mood of the story it ends... also one more suggestion i have been following the forum for quite sometime now so if we are running a ff i have seen the ff response is very good for the ones which have regular updates and also may be 2 updates in a day to start with...once people start following your ff you can come down to one update a day.... this is just my suggestion..i also started a ff but because of some work i am not able follow up with it and i am seeing the lack i9n response.....

please take no offence to any of my suggestion i am not doubting any of your creativity or story telling skills as i found the start very intriguing i just was forced to share my views out of curiosity....

do add me to ur pm list...

Phew!! that's quite a lot you have written. bt yes i think we both r thinkin on the same lines. mayb jus 1 or 2 more updates on the present n swoosh we move back to maan's past n then geet's entry into his life. the present is negative bt then every bad thing comes to an end soon. n sorry about the slow replies, bt ill try to update n to reply 2 most of the comments here. no offence taken. ;)

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:02am | IP Logged
great going......
nice FF.....
add me to PM....& cont. soon

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
ClapGreat FF...pls add me in your pm list..and update soon...I am liking the suspense with which the story has started...great going

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kahkashansakina IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Lovely Awesome update ,keep cont 

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ambbiha IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
awesome ClapClapClapClap
omg MSK and geet married how can he believe like thatShockedShockedShockedShocked
sasha i hate her to core is this sam is the one who s on call  to sashaAngryAngryAngryAngry
continue soon

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
AWESOME POST...LIKED IT A LOT....PLS ADD ME TO UR PM LIST.....

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