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Dil Ne Mila Di Jodi : Maaneet FF (Page 75)

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by divareena

Lool love how geet affects maan's concentration.

Lool maan imagines him kissing geet and is having a hard time keeping his hands off her.

Even geet is attracted to him and I can feel the electric currents up to hereDay Dreaming.

Love the smart reply geet gives to maan by saying that at work she is his secretary.LOLLOLLOL

MSK will definitely win.LOL


thanx yaar for the lovely comment.

Yap, Maan will iwn and you'll beConfused in next update

Will update soon!LOL

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:02pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by -shamima-

Haha ok so it wasnt only dictation bu a whole lot more like drooling session but more in a denial way were both are tempted by each other and the desire for both break the limits that they created which is ergh geet you hate him or he hates or she hates you and you hate her lol the same ones both of them use to console their heart that their is only hatred no love which is so contradicting when they express the feelings like that and cover it up with hate lol and haha when geet goes this office not home and now maan is after her to find out what she meant which I think he and we all know anyways great update loved it and can't wait to read more Smile


wow! thanx for the detailed update. lol

Glad you guys loved the update.

Next part will be even great. That I can promise you!

Smile

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
Awesomeeeee update
loved it
superbb part
Haye..lolz maan teasing geet wanting ahem ahem haha
loved that.lolz
Hayee Maan getting all mad cause of geet haha
imagining kissing and all haye..lolz
Loved the part
continue soon
Thank u

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:17pm | IP Logged

Part 17


Next Day - @ KC


Maan waited for Geet. But she wasn't there.

Maan: Adhi, come to my cabin, right now.

Adi: S..ss..sir, yesss ssir

Maan: Adhi, where is Geet?

Adi: Ssssir kya usssne baataayyya nahi.

Maan: Kya?

Geet: She is on leave from now onwards.

Maan looked at the door.

Geet: Han Sir, I hope I told you about my wedding with a kadoos man.

So from today onwards, I am on leave. My to be grand saasu maa meri leave approve kiya.

Maan: How come u go on you wedding leave without my permission?


(Maan questioning Geet)


Geet: Do you remember sir, jis din my saasu mom came here, you promised her that final 3 days before my wedding, u'll approve my leave?

Maan: But,,, dekiye'..Geet..

Geet: Look adhi sir, he isn't fulfilling his promise.

The great Maan Singh Khurana is not a well good business man, u should fulfil promises sir..


(Angry Maan and teasing Geet)


Maan was super angry. He couldn't so anything as Adhi was there. So he approved her leave.

Geet came towards Maan and murmured in to his ears,

Geet: You thought you can get an answer for that question right?

You thought you can win, haha.. you lost Sir! I won!

See Adhi sirTongue. Your boss is breaking promises!

So sorry sir, I am on leaveLOL Byeee

As soon they left, Maan was super furious,

Maan: Geet, Geet handa challenged me?

She just prove she is a better player than me.. No Geet, I will not let go off you so easily. Let's see, who will win.

I will be clam for these 3 days, but after the wedding, let's see, all u responsibly is mine,

Then we will see how u escape from me and my questionsAngry


(Guys hold on to your breaths, Naughty Maan is coming outside! Lol )


Maan came outside and took his jeep.

Maan: Adhi, tell daadi that I will not be back until day after 2morow.

Adhi: Lekin Sir, it's your wedding day?

Maan: I know that'. But just tell her. I am going to the camp side.

Maan was so angry with Geet. How dare she challenged MSK.



(Angry Maan sitting in his Jeep before leaving)


Maan: Geet, you will have to pay extra for this action. You haven't seen real MSK.

I will never ever loose. Specially for a girl, who bhi thume, Geet Handa se'.

Geet who was about to catch the bus saw Maan. She knew she had made a very big mistake.

Geet was so afraid of the looks. He looked like an evil, a monster'.

Geet: Babiji, yeh meine kya kiya, yeh jan kar bhi ke une challenges and shart's pasandh nahi, tume une yeh sabh kaha.

Now he will surely knock me out. Oh my good heavens. What have I done.

Geet ran towards Adhi, who was stil shocked by Maan's behaviour.

Geet: Adhi sir, what happened?

Adhi: Nothing good geet. Tum ne yeh kya kiya, who sabh kehediya, who bhi mere saamne?

Geet: I know sir, I have made a great mistake. How can I say sorry?

Adhi: Abh tum kuch nahi kar payenge.

Geet: Kya? Why?

Adhi: He went to the camp side and will not be return until the wedding day.

Geet: KYA????????? Omg! What have I done.. how am I gonna tell this to Daadi.

Adhi: I have no idea Geet.

Geet: Who kaha gaya, tell me, I'll find his and tell him Sorry.

Adhi: No one knows that place Geet.

Geet: What? Damn, I am a fool, a damn fool.

Adhi: Tume yeh sabh batane se pehele soch nit hi Geet.

Geet: I know sir, this is my mistake. But but, how am I gonna clear all this mistakes?

Adhi: I have no idea. Don't think I am being rude but, yeh sabh tumne akele kiya, abh tum he hi kuch kar sakte .. I am going. All the best

Geet: I know sir, no one can help me.

Everyone knew Maan usually had a soft corner in his heart for Geet although he never showed it. Geet as well knew it.

That's why she thought no one else can help her.


(Geet can't take the pain anymore)


3 days Passed and both had sleepless nights, restlessness. Both missed each other. BUT in different ways.

Geet's Haalat:


(Geet Missing Maan)


Geet knew, she was missing him. Damn so missing him that she even had to take sleeping pills to sleep.

Maan where are you? I know you are angry with me, but plz come in front of me' Kill me if you want, but PLZ don't saty ways and give us pain..

Geet, did you just said Pain' Stop it geet'. But she couldn't help herself from calling him day by day..

She was out of control' His phone has been switched off for the past 3 days and today is there wedding day.

Geet: Plz Babiji, send him.. send him soon' I can't see Daadi is this situation.


Daadi's Haalat:

Daadi who had a very tough 3 days without Maan. She knew he must have face some kind of trouble. But didn't know the reason.

Her whole day passed with payers and phone calls.

But she knew, Maan will never disappoint her and he will surly come for the wedding.


Maan's Haalat:


(Furious Maan)


Maan was still furious with Geet, he knew Adhi will not think anything negative about him, but she has no right to talk to him, challenge him in that way.

Although he missed her, his undying anger stopped all the emotions, he wanted her, but not to feel her, but to teach her a lesson.

Maan: We will see Geet, today is our wedding day and no one will trouble me on my challenge.

Coz for others this challenge will be something ordinary.

But for you, I know this will be extraordinary..

And Yes, I will win' I will get my answer and my revenge.

Miss Geet Handa, Opz.. To be Mrs. Khurana, be ready'' be ready to accept my sharth in front of everyone and be redy to answer my question''.

I am Maan Singh Khurana, I will not step back so easily.

Wait and Watch!

There was a faint smile in his lips'



Precap: She murmered: Maan, I can't do that, Embarrassed

Maan: Yes you have to, isn't it Rahul'?

Geet: Sabke samne?Confused

Rahul: Oh Geet, don't be shy'. Just do as I say!

'''''''''''''''''''..

Sneha: Your challenge will be a rapid fire'

Geet: OMG! This is a joint plan isn't it?Ouch



So guys, hope you all loved this part.

Sorry to disappoint those who waited for the question and answer, but look @ the Precap'.

Hope you'll love that part..

After 15 part, Maan and Geet ready to get married in this part' What a relief.

Plz plz plz leave a comment after you read this.

This will help me to improve my imagination.

Plzzzzzz Hit the like button.

Sorry for the mistakes in typing. I wrote this in a great hurry.


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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:27pm | IP Logged
awesome dearClapClapClap
omg precap seems to be very very interestingWink
waiting to see how MSK takes his revengeEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
loved the update.....................
geet ne yeh kya keh diya maan se aur woh bhi adi ke saamne............
sher ko cheda hain toh sherni ko bugathna toh padega................
cant wait for the nxt update for the rapid fire..............

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

loved the update.....................
geet ne yeh kya keh diya maan se aur woh bhi adi ke saamne............
sher ko cheda hain toh sherni ko bugathna toh padega................
cant wait for the nxt update for the rapid fire..............


hahaha! wait and see, sherni ko keise bhugathna padenga! lol

You will gonna love that!LOL

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by puth

awesome dearClapClapClap
omg precap seems to be very very interestingWink
waiting to see how MSK takes his revengeEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

his revenge will be something naughty, that is the only clue i can tell,

u can go head thinking some options! hehehe!Smile

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