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[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) (Page 82)

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 4:15am | IP Logged
Yay! Another update

Thalia and d one who inspired u r extremely lucky. Their is something very special abt ST. They're beautiful together.

Bedroom 2 is in danger of catching fire. Call for Fire brigade. Chocolate'll now onwards remind me of this part. Gauri is super loud. Downstairs won't help, SG need an outhouse.

RS r adorable. Gauri is torturing poor Senna. Their wedding night is going 2 b explosive.

I luvd these lines "I am glad Shashank didn't show, because I really don't think Shiv would have ever settled down if not with Gauri."

Pls continue soon
P.S. Devi u r amazing. Not only u write beautifully, u also put an extra effort in ur updates like I love u in different languages. I simply luvd it.

Edited by wilddevil2010 - 05 February 2011 at 4:17am

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 4:30am | IP Logged
Wow!! Bedroom 4 wala scene was so sweet!! Awww-types!! 

Second "Aww" for Bedroom 1 wala scene...

Bedroom 3 wala scene.....umm...Still not over visualizing MS as Rathan!!

Bedroom 4 wala scene.....well I am too tongue-tied to say anything!
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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
ClapClapClapit is 1 of d beest update so far i realy loved d way gauri expressed her love in diff languages, choco midol is somethin which touched my heartHeart. shiv's parents conversation was sooooo good, senna n rathan were cutely passionateEmbarrassed 
the best part of this update was all couples were having d best moments of their lives except to some extent 4 senna n rathan as they hv 2 wait a bit, SG loving eachother witout any hidden secrets n MUsBig smileBig smileBig smile.......
i think i shld stop nw othrwise i'll go  n on EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged
and im finally back from a month long break to US..
I had missed your updates soooo much..even tho i had net connection(ofcourse) I wanted to peacefully lye on my bed and read the amazing acts of shiv and gauri.

I read since the 'hours' part to the most recent most in less thn 24 hrs..my eyes have seriously got red lines...gosh!

your amazing devi! I admire the dedication and work you put up on these updates...every single updates is so much fun to read.. a very versatile writer.Clap

I feel so lucky to have come across your FF...its seriously a pleasure reading your work.  

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P.S: Senna is beautiful..whats the name of the girl in the pic?

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged
awww!! that was the sweetest update ever !
im so glad that everything has been sorted out between everyone
can hardly wait to read more!! keep up the awesome work Devi!
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man....i love chocolates so much
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