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[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) (Page 80)

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Not yet married and all...still I read the update though there was a warning posted.....lol
but you know just couldn't stop myself from reading Devil devi's work LOL

and hey Devi why should only 24+ or married people have all the fun?? Why can't we take a share in the cake....

Bloody hell....what was that update all about...how do you write so damn well and that too there is not a hint of vulgarity ! Awesome girl !!

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Awesome Devi! I have no words at all. I always skip the warning part, my eyes are trained to not take that part of the update into account.

This is the longest day/night ever, I think. We had 4 parts of Mehendi, Interlude, 8 parts of Sangeet and 5 parts of Ek Raat. In fact, all the updates of this thread is of this 1 day.

One thing is sure, Senna & Ratan's Sangeet & Mehendi is unforgettable for all the couples in your story.

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 1:42am | IP Logged
oh my.......................congrats on the 100th part................ans twas really hot.....................cont soon dear.................

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 3:13am | IP Logged
I haven't read any of the books by Loretta Chase, yet. I thought it was the typical M&B stuff and I'm kinda fed up of those now. But if you are recommending it then i'll give it a try.
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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged
wooooooo!!!!
i was just going through previous comments.....and was going to comment when i thought this was the last  page.....and hey i got wonderful chocolaty suprise.....
shiv-gauri seems to be epitome of love-makers for rest of the family members i guess....poor senna couldn bear another women enjoying her sex life when hers was put on an abrupt halt....
and shashank is so damn adorable...lucky thalia....and your friend of course(from whom its inspired).....

and for the previous updates....if i say it was hot... i guess it would be an understatement.....man i skipped a beat or two while reading them...Embarrassed
and ofcourse your ability to make a sexual act as sensual xciting and erotic without making it cheap or vulgur is commendable...Clap


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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 4:15am | IP Logged
Yay! Another update

Thalia and d one who inspired u r extremely lucky. Their is something very special abt ST. They're beautiful together.

Bedroom 2 is in danger of catching fire. Call for Fire brigade. Chocolate'll now onwards remind me of this part. Gauri is super loud. Downstairs won't help, SG need an outhouse.

RS r adorable. Gauri is torturing poor Senna. Their wedding night is going 2 b explosive.

I luvd these lines "I am glad Shashank didn't show, because I really don't think Shiv would have ever settled down if not with Gauri."

Pls continue soon
P.S. Devi u r amazing. Not only u write beautifully, u also put an extra effort in ur updates like I love u in different languages. I simply luvd it.

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 4:30am | IP Logged
Wow!! Bedroom 4 wala scene was so sweet!! Awww-types!! 

Second "Aww" for Bedroom 1 wala scene...

Bedroom 3 wala scene.....umm...Still not over visualizing MS as Rathan!!

Bedroom 4 wala scene.....well I am too tongue-tied to say anything!

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